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Hey everyone!

If you have a novel in progress with 3 or more chapters, feel free to post them here - I will review each chapter. ^^

Since a novel reviewing is also a bit of a time commitment on my side, I'll take the first two requests for chapter reviews; and put the others on hold.

ETA : I can't review fanfics.

Current list :
1. Trapped in a Fairy Tale World - kman
2. SIlverlock


Have a great holiday season!

Cheers,
Lava
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I have a new novel, Trapped in a Fairy Tale World.




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Hey lava!! Can you review my novel Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart??
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)
This is the first one and you can find the other chapters through this :) Thanks a lot.
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The Blood of Eden {I}



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Could you please leave a review on my new novel? Thanks so much! :D

Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title)
Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title)
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Hello!
I wasnt able to post my second chapter yet because i dont have enough points but can you please review the first one?

La Vie En Rose: Chapter 1




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Hello :)

I have started a new novel, Soul's Decay. It has four chapters in all, if you count the prologue. Could you review on them, please? Thank you so much!




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Hi there!
Im writing my first novel called The Shifties as part of a planned trilogy :)
If you could read the first few chapters I would greatly appreciate it!
No doubt by the time you come to review, there will be many more chapters on offer to tantalise your reading mind :)

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The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
The first chapter doesn't need any reviews, but the chapters thereafter do.




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Hi Lava, could you review my novel, 'The Perfect Thief' profile/Gaurav009/portfolio/462596

Thanks :)




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Lava,
Only if you have time...
And where exactly is it that we're heading? (URGENT NITPICKS NEEDED)

Any help would be much appreciated.

thanks
JP
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