Iggy's desperate for those red stars!

Iggy · 2013-06-18T05:05:47Z

Welcome to Iggy's little corner of the YWS world! Submitted a wonderful new work? In need of some advice (and fangirling)? You've come to the right place! Reviews may be delayed, but hopefully no longer than 2 weeks. It all depends on my real life, school, JM duties, etc. Please be patience and do not poke or nudge me. I am aware of your request and will get to it when I can. I only review short stories, articles/essays, lyrics, and poetry though I am not the best poet. I do not review chapters unless it is the first chapter in the story or I have reviewed the previous ones. Genres I review are as followed: Romance, tragedy, fiction, sci-fi, horror, thriller, dystopian, supernatural, fantasy. All ratings are welcome. Sex, cursing, blood, gore - it doesn't bother me. Optional forms of payment: cash, The Walking Dead cast, food, cats, general worship, or your souls. ..

PrehistoricEchoes

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Points 797

Reviews 25

Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:58 am

PrehistoricEchoes says... · Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:58 am

Mind taking a look at my Elementary storyline? Only one chapter so far, but I could use some feedback.

Link: Elementary (Chapter 1)

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katngo73

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Points 928

Reviews 102

Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:00 am

katngo73 says... · Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:00 am

would be super super SUPER awesome if you reviewed my latest chapters on my Supernatural fanfic! <3
You did review my first chapter, http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109918 And I absolutely loved your review!
I'm just asking if you'd be willing to review my other chapters:
Metaphorically Short : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110017
The Drifting Convoy : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110043
The Symbolic Cake : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110073
And the most depressing of all, The Desolation of Kevin Tran : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110074
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH!
And as to what genre this includes: Fanfiction(Somewhat, but I've discovered this story can stand on its own as well.), Romance, Tragedy, Dramatic.
Enjoy all the feels!

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"Who I was, what I did, that's not who I am." - Castiel
"Friends protect you." - John Watson

IamTraunt

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Reviews 254

Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:39 am

IamTraunt says... · Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:39 am

Hey Iggy! IamTraunt here!
Please could you review: Traunt: Chapter Three

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dancingwatermelon

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Points 290

Reviews 4

Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:32 pm

dancingwatermelon says... · Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:32 pm

Hi! You seem like a popular reviewer. =) Do you think you could possibly review my Introishthing to my novel? It's pretty short, but it's my first story, so I'd really like some feedback.

The House of Sand-- Introduction
Here it is, if you feel so inclined as to review it for me.