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Hello fellow writers, CM here.

I would be more than happy if all you lovely people brought your sadly under reviewed works to me to review. I will focus less on grammar and more on the meaning of the piece and characterization. (Also the description and imaginary)I will try and reply to your request with in two days maximum and 1 second minimum. I'm looking forward to your pieces, you awesome writers!

I have a few rules though (*damn!*)

1. I will not review pieces with more than 4 reviews already. It is un fair, and quite frankly wastes my time. Please do not request if you have 600,000 reviews either.

2. Please look at the review thread rules, don't go overboard.

3. I'm sorry if my review isn't good enough, but don't get snarky.

4. I'm not that great at reviewing novels, just a heads up.

So, those are my rules. I also have this list:

1. Addictedtotheshindigg
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Of the pieces I need to review. If I have five in the waiting list, no more untill I have finished them. I shall try to keep updated.

I look forward to your reply! Don't be afraid to ask for a review;

~CM
Last edited by cm57105 on Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:36 am, edited 4 times in total.
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You say you will not review anything with more then four reviews. I have a piece that has exactly four reviews, but I don't feel very satisfied with them, so will you consider reviewing my work?

work.php?id=101712
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Done, WritingWolf. Anyone else?
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




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Thank you so much!
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S'alright, mate!
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




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Sounds like the kind of review I'm looking for.

Here's my short story, hope you find time to review it. Thanks!

Edit: My work had 1 review when I posted here. I'd still like your input whenever you get around to it though. :)




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Awesome! I'm at school now, so I'll try and do it after. Thanks for the request mate, I'll try and make it as detailed as possible.
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Do you review scripts? You didn't say either way. If you do, can you review the first episode of my fantasy script?

work.php?id=101820

Obviously imagery and description here are less important than a novel, but I'd be really interested to see what you thought of the characterization, meaning, plot, dialogue, etc.

If you don't review scripts, just say so and I'll delete this comment :)
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That my love keeps writing again and again
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Hello!

I have a chapter that could use some feedback. If you are feeling extra awesome, you can read the second chapter I have up too, but one is fine. I'm super excited to get your opinion.

work.php?id=101863

Thanks!
Dannielle




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Hello there, I request you to review this work
work.php?id=101840 Thanks
Always Hope for the BEST




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Dhendon and guaravkundu32 your reviews will have to wait until tomorrow as I need to study, sorry.
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828



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