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I have short-story. CAn you please review that. Here's the link,

work.php?id=97866




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got it, will read first thing when i get home. Keep writing.
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Heya!

Got a 2-part short story (about 4000 words) I'd appreciate some feedback on. Contains minor cursing - just a heads up if that sort of thing doesn't sit well with you. Thanks. :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97860
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no prob. Reading now.
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work.php?id=98150 this is my first short ever... it's first draft and isn't finished :)
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Alright, reviewed. Keep writing folks.
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Could you review this for me?

work.php?id=98294

It's the second part of a short story but there's a link to the first part. If you could review both it would be awesome, thanks!
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Sure, no prob. Both being reviewed right now.
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Hi there again! This is the third part of my story

work.php?id=98304

Thanks! :)
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Hey there!
I have two short-stories (one being a lot shorter than the other) that need a review. I'd appreciate as much criticism as possible.

Leaking Words - work.php?id=98004

Soon - work.php?id=98301

Thank you :)
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