Pantheon Reborn

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Rose/Hestia

We were talking about the men and all, about why they might have followed me. When we hear a commotion coming from the counter. Some guy was getting really angry, he appeared to not be getting what he wanted, something about a chameleon coffee. I shrug and turn back to Alyssa who appears to be really interested in the guy, staring intently at him with a funny look in her eyes, like she was trying to place him but couldn't.

All of a sudden just as the waitress was telling the guy to come again the coffee pot exploded. Alyssa and myself look at each other, then quickly rush out the door in pursuit of this angry guy. We turn a corner, the man oblivious to our pursuit.
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Alyssa/Artemis

We take off after the man. I'm surprised by how fast he is. Even with my years of training, I can barely keep up with him. In my defense, I'm a distance runner, not a sprinter.

There are a few reasons why we are following him. One, he tore up that poor cafe. Two, he looks suspicious. And three, I have that feeling just like I had when I met Rose. There's something about him that draws me to him. And I think I know what it is.

He's one of us.
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Rose/Hestia

We continue to follow this man. I'm getting tired, my breathing is coming out thick and fast and I'm trying really hard to keep up with Alyssa let alone the guy. I'm not one for running.

I glance at Alyssa, she seems to be perfectly comfortable, long strides and fairly even breathing.

This guy is suspicious, he blew up a coffee pot, has temper problems and just gives off this vibe, like I've known him before, like he is so alike me.

Finally after around several blocks the man stops.
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Zack/Moirai:

Haylee took off without a backwards glance, not even waiting for Zack to agree. He shook his head in exasperation reaching out to contact Tasha mentally, knowing that she was closeby. "Tasha I ran into Hades. He, or rather she, is chasing after some kids who might be other deities. Follow them."

Zack turned and stepped into the coffee shop, following the pulsing trail of other powerful fate strands.
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Zoe Ryder/ Hermes ^^

~The next thing I know, this guy about my age barges into the shop and demands coffee from the chashier. After he makes sure to throw the money in her face he stalks out, draining his coffee. I grimace. What a butthole.

'I can't lie no more, I can't hide no more'

What?

Then the coffee containers blow up.

Before I know it I'm covered in coffee, and so is everyone else in the building. It was him. For some reason I just know it.

"Take your drink. Follow me." Says Sis.

I nod and grab my hot-chocolate.

"I think I know him." She says after I turn back to face her, "Like I know you."

I barely have time to nod again before she's out the door. I start to walk to the door when I sip and fall on my face. I recover quickly, cursing under my breath. By the time I make it to the door they're already a block away.

I sigh and put my hands on my hips. When I turn to look around I see two others. A goth looking girl who generally makes me feel like I'm about to die, and a boy with white hair that gives me the same feeling. The Living Shadow runs off after Sis and the butthole, and the boy starts walking towards me.

Before he even crosses the street I'm in the alley way climbing an old fire escape. I make it to the roof in a flash and follow the others from above.

When Sis looks my way, I've got to signal she's being followed. I wait until she turns up and sees me, and point down at the shadow girl. She looks back and nods. I nod in return and go faster.

I feel like I'm soaring.~
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Haylee/Hades

I bolt down the street moving faster than I knew I could but one of those two were moving faster than even I could, in the distance I could make out one of the people from my memories. Athena? Even you had perished in the events before? I run by the girl but not before time seemingly slows to a halt and I look directly into the eyes of the new incarnate of Athena. I give her a stare that said.

"I'll be back for you."

Then finally I sprint off towards the other who was moving much faster than me, I was barely keeping pace I knew this could only be one person. Hermes. The person turns and I could definitly make out a Hermes incarnate. And before I knew it she grabs me by my shirt color and punches me in the stomach and with the momentum of the pace we were going at. Sends me right over her, and I land on my back. The guy who blew up the coffe shop didn't seem to notice the trouble going on behind him and kept moving and turning a corner. I look up at the girl who had threw me to the ground.
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Sebastian/Athena

I ran towards the girl and felt the knot increase. Some sort of buzzing occurred in my head. "More like the other way around." I said while grabbing her arm. I was hit with a wall of feedback in my head. "We get the boy first. I'll call Zoe. Then you can explain what the hell is going on." I raced after the boy, engaging the fast twitching muscles I had studied in the multiple anatomy text books I had on the bookshelf of my apartment.
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Jake/Poseidon

I smiled, hiding the smile actually. I dropped my empty bottle, and someone stepped on it. I snapped, and started whistling, faking a tune. The sky rumbled, and rain poured down, blinding everyone but me. I took off running, towards the nearest water source...a lake.

"He's getting away!" a female shouted. That's what you think, I thought. I sped up, the rain making me faster. The ground opened up in front of me, and an army of undead climbed out.

How can someone do this? I thought I was the special one. Wait...Gods! What did I learn in school...Gods...What was there names...Zeus....Poseidon....and Hades! Hades was the god of the underworld. That's who was chasing me, I thought.

My faithful turtle Cart Flew down from the sky, incased in a orb of water, just big enough to keep him breathing. I jumped, landing on the orb, not piercing it. I rotated in my seat and faced my followers.

"I hope I see you all again. Especially you, Hades," I giggled, pointing at the deathly looking one.

"HEy, you! Stop!" a guy shouted. Just waving, me and Cart plowed into the lake, vanishing. Cart swam away, with the speed of a Cheetah, and I became one with the water.

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sorry if this is cheesy or something, but I wrote this at lunch. I hope to get another post in later, but I hope this is good enough.
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Rhett / Zeus

I walked around central park slowly, admiring the scenery at my own pace. I was thinking I would stop to play chess with old men in the square, but I wasn't sure.
It was bright and shiny in the park, and nothing seemed to be happening that was out of the ordinary like I had suspected.

But before I could think again, I was stricken with the sense that I was being watched. Everywhere I turned no one was looking in my direction, but I could feel eyes watching me. I could almost hear voices in the back of my mind, a girl and a boy I think.

So this is Zeus, I suspected a little bit more.

Is he in the city?

Yes, that looks like Central Park...


I couldn't take the feeling anymore, so I hid behind the nearest tree and teleported to the alley by the foster home. I walked inside, shaking my head.

"You okay Rhett?" said Jerry, one of the foster parents.

"Yeah, just felt weird on my walk home." I rub my neck and set my backpack down.

"Well okay," he said, returning to what he was doing previously.
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Zack/Moirai:

"Zack, Haylee is in trouble. Use me. Zack leaned back against the wall and closed his eyes. He slid into his partner's body. Growling low in his throat Zack-Tasha stalked out of the shadows. The trio of young women stared wide eyed at the white tiger.

Tail lashing, fangs bared, he crouched down. Razor sharp talons digging gouges in the concrete. The smaller girl tensed and took off running straight at the wild cat. Zack-Tasha sat back up with a bored expression.

"You will trip." Zack spoke and just like that the girls fate changed. Her feet flew out from under her and she tumbled to the ground sprawling at the tiger's feet. Claws now sheathed Tasha placed a paw on the girl's chest to pin her down.

Zack slid back into his own body as he turned a corner and spotted the trio. "Now that the excitement is over ladies. Why don't we speak civilly?"
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SING- Like no-one is listening
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Haylee

Things happen fast, I hadn't realized we were at a lake until I heard my name called out. Hermes was on the ground a few feet away from me Athena was at the edge of the lake looking up at the guy who was clearly Posiedon. I got to my feet and stepped forward to face my brother. Just then a golem erupted from the lake and engulfed my brother into it, I raised my right hand over my shoulder, curled my fingers as if I was holding a sword and swung my hand in a slashing fasion. The next thing I knew a stygian iron sword was in my hand.

"Posiedon! Emerge from the sea and face me!" I order pointing my sword at the golem.

I must have looked really brave at that moment, when in full honesty I was scared witless. I stood challenging that golem when every fiber of my being told me to run, but I didn't I stood there with my sword raised.

"Emerge from the sea and face me Posiedon!" I repeat.
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Zoe Ryder/ Hermes ^^

~All I know about the last minute is that I tripped again, and now I'm pinned under a tiger. I watch as the Living Shadow pulled a sword out of nowhere and call out to some one called 'Posiedon'.

What bickering uncles.

My eyes widen. What the heck was that?!

It's not the magic shadow, not the boy on floating water, not the white-haired wonder, not the freaky-ness of the situation, it's not even the freaking tiger on my chest; It's these thoughts that aren't mine.

Well, they are, and they aren't. It's complicated. But before I can deal with that, I've got to get out from under the tiger.

The tiger is watching the events intently, as is everyone but me. I've seen alley cats fight on occasion so I think I know how get out of this. Hopefully.

I twist out from under the cat and scramble up before she notices. I run over to Sis and stand by her side, ready for a fight and whatever might come next.~
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She knows that the others are "special" and she gets a feeling of deja vu when she meets them, but she doesn't know she's Athena. Not yet.


Sebastian/Athena
Poseidon? I thought as I sheltered Zoe from the tiger. I glanced at the girl dressed in black with a sword in her hand, yelling at the lake. "Poseidon?" I whispered to myself in confusion. I replayed all the events that had just happened. That boy...he could control the water. Poseidon was the Greek god of water and the ocean - I remembered reading a lot about Greek mythology for one of my reports. Zoe reminded me of Hermes, the way the she traveled quickly on rooftops as if it wasn't such a big deal. The girl reminded me of Hades because of her all black attire and the sense of death surrounding her. My head started pounding and I heard a calming melody, but it wasn't physical. "Do you hear that?" I asked aloud anyway.
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Rydia|Ares

I delivered one last kick to the punching bag in my gym. With that it split open. I'd have to clean that up tommorrow. There was only one person left, and he was just kicking away at the punching bag. I would have someone close up later tonight.
I slung my bag over my shoulder and stepped outside. It was frigid out, but I didn't mind. I was used to being cold. I took the subway into the city. I was walking back to my apartment, a 3,500 foot penthouse in a high rise in SoHo.
I was almost to my house when a man ran into me. He was probably my age. And when I looked into his eyes I saw the rolling sea.
He didn't say sorry but I think he realized who I was. Two girls came sprinting after him a split second later. One girl had an aura of death.
I knew what these people were. The girl with Hades helped me up. We all silently knew what was happenening.
We ran after Poseidon. I was the fastest, but Poseidon was still faster. If I could catch up with him, I could take him down in a second. So I sprinted, using the last of my energy to catch up with him.
He looked behind him, obviously thinking he had lost us, but he saw me and his eyes widened. I tackled him and pinned him to the ground.
"Get off!"
"I'm Ares, I'll always win."
I looked up, we were in front of a lake. There were more people there. God I got caught up.
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Jake/Poseidon

I sighed. I could hear Hades yelling at the lake, rather at me. I shook my head and floated up to the surface, not wet.

"What!" I shouted, frustrated. The water around me began to move, moving more worse as my anger rose.

"Poseidon!" she shouted.

"Poseidon? Whose Poseidon?" I shouted. Poseidon, the God of the Sea Wait..I'm Poseidon.

"Why did you run!" she shouted.

"Because I don't like being followed," I said. I moved the water with my eyes, and a small wave crashed weakly into all of them, and I waved. "Bye-bye!" I giggled sinking.
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