Mith's reveiws - anything welcome!

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mithrim96
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Tue May 29, 2012 11:09 pm
mithrim96 says... · Tue May 29, 2012 11:09 pm
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Hello! Mith here! I'll review:

Poems (my favorite)
Lyrics
Scripts
Novels (chapters preferably)
Photography and Art
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Anything really, but I prefer fiction in stories, especially fantasy and I'm a little uncomfortable about the really adult scenes and such but if you really need a review, I'm here for you.


My poem and lyric reviews will probably be on Spelling and Grammar (I may miss some things), Word usage, Flow and Understandability and an Overall Opinion about it.

Novel reviews may just be a re-post of your novel then notes throughout and an overall.

Art/photography/etc will probably be me making it up as I go along.


I'll try to check this every day and get back to you as soon as possible. Please help me to be a better writer by letting me help you with as much advice as I"m able at the time.

Thanks guys!
Last edited by mithrim96 on Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
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psudiname
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Thu May 31, 2012 6:53 pm
psudiname says... · Thu May 31, 2012 6:53 pm
could you do the first two chapters of my novel? work.php?id=95420
work.php?id=95532
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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mithrim96
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Thu May 31, 2012 10:21 pm
mithrim96 says... · Thu May 31, 2012 10:21 pm
I'm on it now. Congrats on being the first person! Thanks!
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mithrim96
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Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:25 am
mithrim96 says... · Fri Jun 01, 2012 1:25 am
Okay, I've finished Chapter One. It's really good by the way, I'm not sure if I actually said that in the review. I'll start Chapter Two soon! :)
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FallenAngel97
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:11 am
FallenAngel97 says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:11 am
Would you be so kind as to review my prologue to the novel I am writing?
work.php?id=95680
My heart grows cold
My spirit grows weak
I'm losing my faith
I'm losing my grip...




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mithrim96
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:54 am
mithrim96 says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:54 am
I've finished your chapters, psudiname. I encourage all to read them!

Now I'll start your prologue, FallenAngle97.
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mithrim96
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:19 am
mithrim96 says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:19 am
I've now reviewed your very intriguing (lol) prologue. Hope it helps!

Anyone else for a review?
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STobsessed
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Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:15 am
STobsessed says... · Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:15 am
Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me?

work.php?id=95706

Please and thank you.
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mithrim96
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Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:08 am
mithrim96 says... · Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:08 am
Sorry this is a little late, STobsessed. I'll probably review your work this weekend and, if not, Thursday or Friday next week. Sorry, I've got exam block and have to study but after that I'll get right to your work!
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mithrim96
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Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:18 pm
mithrim96 says... · Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:18 pm
Okay STobsessed, I reviewed your work a while ago... sorry I didn't actually mentioned that. I need more things to review!!! Somebody help me!
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Carlito
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:07 am
Carlito says... · Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:07 am
Hi! This song of mine has no reviews and that makes me sad.
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Thanks much!!
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TheAceofAll
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Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:53 pm
TheAceofAll says... · Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:53 pm
Would you mind reviewing the first chapters of my novel, Welcome to Orba Nova?
work.php?id=96135
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Noelle
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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:30 am
Noelle says... · Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:30 am
Could you please review the first chapter of my novel? Thanks! work.php?id=96564
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mithrim96
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Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:05 am
mithrim96 says... · Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:05 am
Sorry this has taken SO SO SO long! I've now reviewed everyone's works, and what brilliant works they were too. Oh, you people never fail to impress me. <3

I know I haven't been on YWS for a while by I promise to check in more regularly and, make it known, if you put a work into this feed I will respond to it, no matter how long it takes!

Thank-you everyone who has blessed me with the opportunity to read their works. I am very grateful.

Mith :)
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ToSaferHarbours
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Wed Nov 07, 2012 10:32 pm
ToSaferHarbours says... · Wed Nov 07, 2012 10:32 pm
Hi, could you review my poem "Holly" for me? I'm considering sending it to a poetry anthology in February so I'd really appreciate some feedback ^^ Thank you sooooo much!!! :D http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97876

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