Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze [2]

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Arabella--

Ramere's lips met mine softly, catching me offguard.

No one had ever called my wings beautiful. He was so different, compared to all the others I had met.

"Thank you," I murmured into his ear. He nodded his reply.

With a sudden burst of happiness, I moved away from him and spun into the air. I spread my arms wide, letting the wind carry me higher. I hadn't danced in the sky in so long, i forgot how great it was.

My skirt flowed out around me, and my wings unfurrowed the rest of the way. My hair blew around my face. I wondered what I looked like to the others, but was much more occupied by the feeling of the wind lifting me.
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Ramere-

I watched, laughing slightly, at the sight of Arabella dancing with the wind. It was beautiful, her body silhouetted against the sun, her hair whipping around her head.

I stood lightly on the very top of a tree, using my magic to make my body light enough to be able to stand on a single leaf and not fall. I waited until Arabella was done.
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Arabella--

I danced until I was breathless, enjoying myself more than I had in a very long time. As I finished, I made my way gracefully to where Ramere stood. I propped myself up onto my elbows in midair, bringing myself up to eye level with him. I watched him caerfully.
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Ramere-

I smiled. "Have fun?"

She nodded, continuing to watch me intently.

"What?"
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Arabella--

I grinned and tapped his nose lightly. He chuckled, taking my wrist lightly with his hand so I couldn't fly away.

"What do you want?" he asked, smiling and pulling me closer.

"I don't know. I'm trying to figure out how you can just...stand there. I mean, you're up in the air, and you just stand there?!" I said, shocked. He grinned at me again, and I pushed him away, flying off a ways. I watched him intently, hoping he would fly after me. It would be fun, after all.
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Ramere-

I chuckled, watching her. She turned to look at me expectantly.

"I can't fly after you, if that's what you're getting at. I can only hover or float." i called after her.

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Arabella--

I nodded in understanding, and flew back to him. I wrapped my arms around his neck, and he wrapped his gingerly around my waist.

I began to move upward, holding him close to me so as to not drop him.

Once we were a good distance up in the air, somewhere near a cloud, I looked at him. His gave met mine.

"What do you think?" I whispered, touching his face lightly with one of my hands.
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Ramere-

I smiled. "Beautiful."

I stepped back and stood in front of her, the air under my feet shimmering slightly.

"How are you doing that?" she asked, floating nearer.

I grinned. "Magic. Simple hover spell. I can also do this..."

I bent my knees and touched the solid air under my feet, murmuring the required words. Then I sprang up, spun, and jumped. I was lifted another fifty feet in the air, floating down a few feet to let my feet rest on another platform of air.

Arabella followed me up. Once she was about ten feet under me, i repeated the process, launching another fifty feet up, dropping a few feet, and staying there.
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(Iiiiiii've got nothin.)
I just lost the game.




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Arabella--

I began to fly up, and Ramere repeated the process again. Sighing audibly, I began to mutter a few of my own magic words.

I disappeared from Ramere's view, only to reappear a few moments later directly behind him.

"Hello," I said softly, allowing a small ammount of magic to seep into my voice. I caught him off guard, and he spun to face me. I flew slowly, staying behind his back and out of view.
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Ramere-

I smiled. "You forgot something."

"Hmm?" her voice came from behind, magic still dribbling from the words.

"You're not the only one with magic."

With those words I disappeared in a puff of ash-gray smoke, reappearing below her a couple hundred feet, coughing and hacking my brains out. Stupid smoke...

I cast an invisibility spell over myself after I was done clearing my lungs of the thick smoke, still giving the occasional sharp cough. I lowered myself again until I was level with the treetops and watched Arabella trying to locate me.

"Not fair!" I heard her call. "You could be anywhere!"

"That's an overstatement." i said, using magic so that my words were heard by her ears. "But i suppose you're right, in a sense. Here, let me help..."

I settled myself on the top of one of the trees, partly submerged in the dark green leaves. I changed my clothes color again to match the color around me before lifting the invisibility spell.

"Come find me now." I taunted.
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(Okay...um....I don't know where anyone is again! That happens to me a lot, just a sentence would help me out you guys!)
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I smiled at Kayla as we hovered in the sky, a few hundred feet in the air. The sun was just beginning it's descent.

"What would you like to do?" i asked again. "I could take you to the mountains to watch the sunset. I can fly you over the ocean to see your reflection. I can take you to the stars to touch the beyond."
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****I is lost :'( ****
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Kayla

My heart clenched, how did he make me...why...I knew if I opened my mouth my words would be as incoherent as my thoughts. I probably would lose the ability to even form words if he kissed me.

No! I was thinking about him that way already! Why did being with him feel like home? It was so weird.
I just lost the game.



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