The Royal YWS Apartments-Everyone join!

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I had a plan, and that plan had to work.

Josh distracted the police officers with some sweet talk as I snuck around them to this pool that stood next to the building. I noticed a widow washer going up, it's ropes eaten by flames.

No one noticed me until someone called me.

There was a couch with cushions not to far away from the pool. A person was on it, badly bruised and blood coated.

"Hi," I said, not sure what else I could do.

Then I remebered the guy going back into the apartments.

"Do you know the guy who went back into the building?" I asked.

The person seemed to not speak, probably trying to figure out what I really wanted.

"Yeah, Toby..." he replied, voice a bit hoarse.

I walked up to the couch, feeling the cement underneath me get a bit more slippery, the water must've been splashed just recently.

"Come with me, I'll get you to an ambulance and I'll go help the guy out." I said, giving him my hand.
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Wait, I'm confused... Ipod, is the person a few floors under you me, or someone else you wanted to give a chance to come in?

I completely understand not being good at grammar, but (please don't think I mean offense by this) you don't really seem to be trying... and grammar is a part of writing. It's not fun, but it makes it easier for other people to understand what you have to say - because that's what writing is all about: letting people understand you and see from different points of view. I don't think you're stupid or anything - please don't think I'm trying to be a jerk about this. I was just trying to be helpful. I'm really sorry if I offended you.
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the person a few floors under me was so someone could join I suppose or if any hadn't got out yet you know? and I’m sorry for my grammar I’ve been trying to fix it but I’ll work on it more...


The window washer went up past the ropes being eaten by flames and kept going up , the window washer went up and up and kept going up , the ropes below it being burnt snapped and fell to the ground , while I was still going up unconscious , 2 and a half hours later the window washer reached the top of the building , I woke up went it stopped , and felt my head , I hit the window washer really hard , it felt like I broke all my bones but it didn't , I got off and walked to the front of the roof and looked down , I could see little dots moving , it looked like ants but I knew they were people, I went to the door to try to go down a couple of flights but when I opened the door the stairs where gone I could see nearly right down , I noticed someone come up the stairs, I couldn't make out who it was.
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After dropping the guy off to the ambulance, I ran into the building. There were flames everywhere, the heat eating me up. Just stepping into the apartment building made me sweat like a pig. I had to go up, the same way this Toby guy did.

I watched my step as I walked toward a stairway. Opening the door, I felt cool air rush pass me. There were no flames in sight. I shut the door and ran up the stairs. It'll probably take me a while to reach where ever he went.

Just a few minutes later I heard a sound, a sound like a car crashing into another vehicle. But I knew that wasn't it. Stopping my sprint, I let myself listen. There were windows in the stairway so I looked out. A window washer was going up and no one was on it. I had to go quickly.

Opening the window, I jumped onto it. There was one above me though, I saw a body on it, limp and dead-like. The heat from the burning building was captivating me, the fire jumping from under. But as I went up, the fire and heat got farther away. I finally reached the top and the guy on the window washer got off of it. The person was alive. I jumped off my window washer and followed his every step.

He opened a door which lead to some stairs and didn't move. Why didn't he go?

"Um, excuse me?" I asked.

"Toby!" he yelled down the stairs.
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IS ANYONE STILL IN THIS STORYBOOK?
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hey guys this is pretty much dead, so do we want to start a new one some what like this?
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Fine with me!
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I guess, sure (:
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Can we do something other than an apartment though. Plus this ia just a chit chat. We can my a chit like this if you want. I do not know. What ever you guys want
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Why don't we make this kind of cruise thing? or boat house? Something for vacation since it is summer break.
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I like the cruise idea.
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why not make a hotel with a dramatic scene in it with someone killing people off one by one?
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Like a murder mystery? That could work...
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I am cool with that
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me too ^^^ but i still am a little wanting the cruise idea :P
"If I look like a monster,' he says roughly, 'then no one will be surprised when I do monstrous things." - A.B. Poranek



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