Neverland (Started!!!)

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Rayah-

I turned around from talking to the others and I smiled as this guy Johnny introduced himself. "Hey Johnny, I'm Rayah." I pushed my blonde hair to the side and looked at him. I held my hand out, waiting for him to take it.
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Lucie Woods

I took a deep breathe of the seaside air, taking in all my beautiful surrondings. I'm in Neverland! Peter flies off to take care of Hook as soon as we see the perfect white sand of the lagoon, leaving us- the majority of the 'Never Kids'- to sit and talk, waiting for him to return with another victory.

I bite my lip, adjusting my flaming bandana. I wasn't very good at socializing. I was too brash, sometimes too cocky- I couldn't help it! It's just the way I am. If I'm going to spend the next two-hundred and so years with these people... maybe I need to make friends. They all seem very nice and everything- but none of them seem like they could put up with someone like me.

Maybe I was just being hard on myself. I shouldn't judge these people. Maybe if I just put on my nice face and try...

I walk up to the nearest girl to me. "Er..." Confidence, silly Lucie! You are way more confident than this! I took a deep breath. "Hey, I'm Lucie!"
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

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Johnny Black

I took Rayah's- such a strange name!- hand, smiling at her. People from this decade had more manners than Pirates. Although pleasant to speak, the girl's name was not something my Mother would've named my sister. I think. I don't remember much of my time before Neverland. Right. Questions, not long ago wonders.

"Hello Rayah. Are you with Pan?" I wanted to know for certain.
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Rayah-

"Yep, one of his best fighters." I said proudly. "What about you? Are you new to our crew?" I asked smiling. He seemed like a nice guy. Pretty cute too.
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Jake

I wondered why Lucie was so quiet. I had wanted to talk to her since we arrived but I'd been distracted by other things and people (easy to do I know) So when she introduced herself to one of the girls I decided to jump in, "Wow that's a pretty name Lucie. I'm Jake by the way. I like your bandana it suits you.You really should talk more, don't be so quiet."
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Alex ~

"How could they just stand there and talk?" I thought to myself as i looked over the Never Kids, "wait a second there is a stranger among us" I thought and kept my eye on Johnny and wondered where he came from. I kept circling them like a dog trying to find his spot but i really was trying to hear what Rayah and Johnny where talking about.
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Lucie

"Oh!" I jump back, a little suprised when Jake jumped into the nonexsistent conversation I was having. He called be quiet! That was a suprise- I was called a lot of things, but never quiet.

"Thank you- for both the compliment on my name and bandana." I issue my best smile, wondering what to say next. "I'm not normally this quiet... I'm just a little overwhelmed, being in Neverland. It's kinda amazing, you know?" When he nodds, I relax a little. The girl slips away, but I don't really mind. "Um... what do you think of Peter so far?"
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Johnny

He thinks I don't notice him, but I do. He slips around Rayah and I like a sly fox, his suspicious eyes scorning down my sides. I tense up, wondering if he could be suspicious, but keep a constant smile at Rayah.

"I'm not with-" What should I call him? "-Peter, I'm afraid. I came here awhile back, when Peter still had his original lost boys and didn't need another." I quickly change the subject, afraid she would ask questions I couldn't answer with my head attached. "Who is that?" I jerk my head in the direction of the boy circling us.
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Rayah-

I smiled and turned to Alex. "Oh that's Alex." I put a slight smile on my face. "Um.." I was getting kinda creeped out. I turned back to Jhonny. "Who are you with?" I asked wondering why he came here in the first place.
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Alex ~

"Now for the truth, he has to answer her" I thought and excitement leaped through me, I knew he already noticed me, but I didn't care I didn't trust him one bit.
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Storm
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I just noticed something funny. There is a show called Jake and the Neverland Pirates! Ha. And has anyone thought it was funny that Peter is fifteen but barely has interest in girls? I wonder why J.M.Barrie made him like that!


I had sat next to Lucie for a while, listening to her and Jake talk. Lucie seemed like a really sweet girl but not at all quiet. I am quiet, but I wish I wasn't. I wish I wasn't so ugly either, I wish I was pretty like Lucie or Rayah! They already have boys all over them.
I was daydreaming abit, thinking about what I would be doing at home (probably cooking and cleaning and reading) when I heard Lucie ask, "Um...What do you think of Peter so far?"
"He's so sweet and nice! It's like a dream here!" I slapped my mouth shut. My eyes widened in surprise. The two other NeverKids looked at me with a curious expression in their eyes.
"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!"
Not all princesses are pink sparkles.
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Well, Peter's been living on Neverland for a long time, with virtually no girls around. Neverland's magic makes you forget, so since he never had any girls to remind him that he is attracted to them, he forgot. That's why he has no idea that Tink, the mermaids, and pretty much every girl loves him. He just forgot about that kind of attraction.

J.M. Barrie didn't make Peter 15. In the origional book, Peter is eleven or at the most twelve. His emotions would have been confused because that is normally the time when you stop thinking in ways of cooties. I made Peter in this 15 because...well, I don't have a really good reason other than I wanted to. :D


Tinkerbell
Oh, that girl. She didn't even deserve to be called by her name anymore. just the Girl. And really, was she even paying attention to Peter? Sure he was nice, but wasn't his blatant cockiness being shoved in Her face? I mean, he just charged into the fight with Hook like it was nothing, just like always. Even now, I could hear him yelling taunts as their metal clashed and the crew yelled out encouragements to Hook.

I didn't even bother to stick around after Peter left for the Jolly Roger. I'm up in a tree, glowing with fury as I listen to the Girl talk about him. Suddenly, I just can't stand her anymore, and I flit down, yelling and pulling sharply on her hair.
Open the gates and seize the day! Don't be afraid and don't delay.

To die would be an awfully big adventure.

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(Jake and the neverland pirates? cool. I didn't know that)

Jake/Nibs

"He seems pretty cool." I said smiling.Lucie seemed pretty cool and together. After we had talked for a while I see a whirling ball of light head straight for Storm's head. "Storm! Something is flying at your head!"
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Storm
"Storm! Something is flying at your head!" My eyes widened in surprise and confusion and I took too long to process a darting red light coming straight for me. I didn't know what to do and suddenly it ran smack dab into my hair. It was Tinkerbell and she was, I think, pulling my hair. Even though she was minuscule, sharp pains pulled at head making me squeak. My giant hand reached into my hair to grab Tink but my hand recoiled when I felt a sharp snap.
"Hey!" I cradled my injured hand, "She bit me!" My eyes widened in shock and hurt. I had tried to make friends with her, why was she hurting me?
"Tink! Please listen to me," my voice was soothing as it possibly could be with a tiny person pulling on my locks, "I am extremely sorry for whatever I have done to hurt your feelings. I will stop whatever it is," Tiny bells glimmered and I couldn't understand.
"She wants you to get off the island--and calls you a giant green ape."
"Oh!" I called, not surprised by Tink's comments, but by the fact that Peter was calmly floating down toward us. "I beat them single handed!" He crowed.
"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!"
Not all princesses are pink sparkles.
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Ardy-

I dove out of the clouds towards Peter below. " Peter!" I yelled. Heads turned as I landed next to Peter. " Hi. I'm Ardy. Thanks for the pixie dust, Peter. You guys must be the other Lost Boys. I'm one too. I live on the other side of the world from you guys, so I came a little late."
I examined the other lost boys only to realize that some of them were girls. I looked questionly at Peter's face.
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