Neverland (Started!!!)

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Name: Zoe Whitefern

Age: (13-16, please!)14 years old

Gender: Female

Appearance: Zoe has shoulder length straight hair that is brown with natural highlighs of blonde and light brown, her eyes are a light amber, her skin is lightly tanned and she is of average height.


Personality: Is a little shy and reserved towards strangers but once she gets to know somebody she can be warm and bubbly.
Likes meeting new people (as long as they aren't out to kill her or her friends.)
Has a compassionate side, so she will always stop to help people.
Is extremely of family and friends and has a competitive streak.
Loves adventure and the fact she will never grow up.
She also has a brilliant sense of humour and loves making up stories.

Strengths/Weaknesses:
Strengths: She is brilliant at archery, can defend herself with a sword, is quick witted, good at stalling abnd a brilliant healer.

Weaknesses: She is kind of naive and likes to trust people.
She hates being alone and havig to stay still- this sometimes gets her in trouble.
Also she is scared of and hates being in confined spaces.

History: Grew up with three and one brother.
All of her sisters were extremely girly and despised her because she wasn't.
Zoe envied her brother because he got all the chances; got to do whatever he wanted and it was okay for him to go out and explore the world and she wasn't.
Still, her and her brother had a close bond and he even taught her how to sword fight and how to use a bow and arrows.
She was incredibly sad when he was killed in a boating accident (by pirates.)
Just before she left and came to find neverland her mother was already arringing for her to be sent to an all girls boarding school to try and force her to change.
The morning before she was forced to leave she woke up in neverland.

Likes/Dislikes:
Likes: adventure, running, swordfighting, action, telling stories, rain, using her bow and arrows, helping people, belonging.

Dislikes: bossy people, confined area's, spiders, being left out/ignored, girly boarding schools, pirates.

Other: (love is allowed) Up for love, if she meets the right person.




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Is Angry because I *just* typed this up. Grr. I feel bad about adding to the girls, so may make guy pirate around same age. Any opinions? Um... Pixie2, is it okay with crm that you're a daughter of Aphrodite? It just seems strange in this setting.

Name: Lucie Woods

Age: (13-16, please!) 15

Gender:Female

Appearance: Short, light blond hair that is often more messy then Lucie intended. Delicate grey eyes and almost flawless skin- although she is known to get a pimple of few on her chin. (Although never growing up may mean lack of acne- yeah!) Her ears are pierced. She has a willowy frame and a height of about 5'5-5'6. She wears rather boyish clothing with a bit of a feminine flare- although that may go to dust living on an island. She does, however have this lucky flaming bandana that she likes to wear.

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Personality: Lucie is almost as cocky as Peter Pan himself- she oozes confidence like it's a second nature. She's never afraid to speak her opinion or to tell people what she thinks of them. Lucie acts fearless, and sometimes reckless. She acts- and sometimes talks- without thinking. She's not arrogant, by any means- she can be quiete humble if she stops to think. Lucie gets frustrated kind of easily, but tries to choke it back when she thinks it'll harm someone else. The promblem with this is that she holds it in to long and it almost always back fires. Thing is- she doesn't. Lucie likes to go, go, go.

Under all that confidence is- what else- self-esteem issues. Lucie doesn't like when her opinion is chellenged- it makes her doubt herself. Before a battle, she can't help but double back. She is very intelligent, however, and very clever.

Strengths/Weaknesses: Lucie's intelligence and cleverness all add to the group, along with her confidence, sense of adventure, the ability never to give up, and her never ending energy. Her cockiness, disability to make friends, more communication skills, stubborness, and occasional self-doubt are all weaknesses.

History: Daughter of a Navy Seal and a young Preschool teacher, the world was her oyster when Lucie was a little girl. She and her older sister, Mallorie, did as they pleased. When their father was aroun, he took them on outdoor adventures, and their mother was good with just the park.

When her Father came off-duty, there started to be tensions at home. Lucie never understood what was really going on, being ten at the time, but the never revolution was earth shaking- her parents were getting a divorce.

Ever since, Lucie has wanted to return to her golden age instead of bouncing inbetween parents. When she woke up in Neverland one day- she was in a pradise.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes being outside, going on adventures, being leader, her bandana, using her resorces, being in danger, nature, candy, and maps. Dislikes doubting herself, polluntants, her communication skills, lack of friends, when the pirates are mean, and doing too much reading.

Other: (love is allowed) Love would be interesting. ;)

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Name: Johnny Black

Age: Has been 16 for the upwards of 60 years.

Gender: Male. :)

Appearance:
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Well- chisled and about 5'9, with a very nice body, Johnny's very attractive. He has messy blond hair and hazel eyes. He usually dresses in normal pirate attire- but he must always have boots.

Personality: Although an almost flavorless sap around Hook, Johnny has just as much adventure in him as anyone else. On the pirate ship, Johnny is the perfect 'do-whatever-Hook' says' model. The only person he can joke around with is Smee, but he remains quiet and obidient the rest of the time.

This is NOT Johnny's full personality- he acts gray around Hook to keep his head. You see, Johnny is very michevious- he loves to prank and joke around. Y'know, Good natured. He's easy to get along with, and is pretty mellow. It's part of his true personally not to talk much. His eyes are the kind that give everything away anyway- he never needed to talk much anyway. He's a true gentlemen.

Strengths/Weaknesses: He's a gentlemen, and therefore a sweetheart. He's very skilled with a sword. He's a very skilled actor, and has an adventerous. He knows what to do, and can read people well. On the weak side, he has these moments where he can't remember anything. He's rather terrified of Hook- even if he doesn't admit it. He can go over board with his pranks.

History: He doesn't remember life before Neverland. You see, an 'accident' with explosive by Peter Pan got rid of many of his shipmates in the 1950's. He took more than a dozen boys from their lands to be his men. Johnny is one of the last ones left after a vicious tantrum by Hook. He's been fighting Peter for a while now, but he doesn't feel any real animosity.

Likes/Dislikes: He likes being a pirate and he loves the ocean. His sense of adventure is wonderful, and he loves food! Smee is a friend of his. He's a fan of the female gender, and anything from his past. Well, that last one is a love/hate relantionship. He dislikes cocky people and going shoeless. He hates modern music for some odd reason, and being in the dark.

Other: (love is allowed) Ooohh! Forbidden, a little, huh? Yes, certainly!
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I'm sorry, ToBeMe, but we already have too many people. Sunshine, if you would like to create a cabin boy for the Pirates, I would be fine with that! If AelitaLienne doesn't change her profile by Monday, I'm afraid that she's out. I'd like to start on Wednesday, if possible. I'm sorry again, ToBeMe!


I'm only going to post as Hook when he's plotting something. This profile is basically so that you all can know how he acts.

Name: Captain Jas. Hook

Age: 35

Gender: Male

Appearance: He's very tall, and his eyes are an icy, unforgiving blue that turns black as night when he guts you with his hook. He is missing his left hand.
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Personality: Imagine the most cruel, heartless, coldblooded person in the world. He has no problem with killing, and he even offs his own crew. He doesn't use good form like Peter when he fights, either. Hook cheats, and will stab a person in the back, while Peter always makes sure that he and his enemy are on the same terms. Hook is just terrifying, in general. But the most terrifying thing about him is that he is a gentleman. He treats everyone with insanely perfect manners, except for Peter. His manners are so perfect, that he can make you feel completely safe while he is raising his hook to kill you.

Strengths: He is just as good with a sword as Peter, and he has the added advantage of the hook. The hook is his favorite way to kill somebody. His terrifying demeanor is an added advantage, as most that he fights are so scared of him that they freeze up. Hook is an excellent sailor and can read the ocean perfectly.

Weaknesses: His hatred of Peter is his deadly flaw. He is so enraged and hateful that he mistreats his crew, in his never ending search for Peter. The crew would be mutinous, except for the fact that they are terrified of Hook. Hook is not very smart, and he would have figured out where the hideout is long before, but he isn't that observant. His is terrified of Mr. Grin, and literally acts like a baby whenever he hears the tick-tock of the alarm clock that he shoved down the crocodile's throat. He dreads the day that the clock stops.

History: Hook has been on the island just as long as Peter has, and their rivarly is centuries old. It started when Peter cut off Hook's hand and fed it to the crocodile. He remembers the Darlings time in Neverland as the time that he almost caught Peter Pan.

Likes: Dreaming of killing Peter Pan, killing in general, and oddly, he has a soft spot for Smee, even though he treats Smee terribly.

Dislikes: the fact that he hasn't killed Peter yet, Mr. Grin, the Mullosks, and Tinkerbell.

Other: Not up for love, if he captures Peter, he will try to sign the Lost Boys to his crew. He has a fondness for music.

Pirate Lingo
Pan!- Peter's here!
Long Tom- the cannon
Cat O' Nine Tails- a whip with nine straps of leather, each tipped with barbed wire.
Croc- Mr. Grin
Idjit- idiot

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I'll be putting more information into the post with the map of Neverland, so be sure to look at that.
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Well then....

Can't wait to start!
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Okay, so we're just waiting for Sunshine to get her profile for the Pirate Cabin Boy in. I've made A Neverland Dt http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=200&t=93464 so discuss away!

Here is just some misc. information that I've forgot to add. Since Peter grew up in the early 1800's, he knows nothing about the technologically advanced world. He's very suspicious of technology. He's afraid of phones, and is baffled by the internet. He knows nothing about how famous he is because of the Disney movies about him. He enjoys to hear stories about himself, but it just fuels his huge ego even more.

This is Smee, the First Mate on the Jolly Roger; the pirate ship.
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He's a bit of a bumbling idiot, or idjit, as the pirates would put it. Hook treats him terribly, but it's just a cover so that the Capt. won't seem weak to his crew.

I can't wait to start this thing! :D
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When are we starting? Sooon hopefully. I want to start!
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We're starting as soon as Sunshine gets her other profile in. And I hope it's soon too!
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gotcha!
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Yay!
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Okay, I think that we're going to start Monday, whether or not Sunshine gets her other profile in. The rest of you are all ready, and Pixie's other profile is for a pirate, so I don't see why we can't start then!

We're going to start from the time most of the people wake up on the beach in Neverland. Now is the time to ask any questions that you have! :D
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Wait, my characters a pirate? No shes not...
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Oh my gosh, I'm sorry! I meant Sunshine's other character is a pirate. Wow, I need sleep...
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Oh okay good I was so confused for a sec :P
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I'm not going to be able to be on YWS until Thursday at the earliest. My character can just be one of the last to arrive, I suppose.
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Okay, I'll make sure to have Peter bring in Ardy last.
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