Hogwarts---Started but still accepting!

SORRY!

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I just posted in the DT

Nancy Belthorne

Nancy thought the ride over the lake was amazing. For one of the first times in her life she was so awestruck by the sight of the gleaming castle she became speechless. She thought this day would never come but it was here and more amazing than she had ever dreamed. The it was a clear night and all the stars were shining brightly in the sky. The Hogwarts air was more chilly than she was used to in her home in southern England.

They got off the boats and entered huge oak double doors into a the biggest cafeteria type/ hall she'd ever seen. There were stars on the ceiling and four long tables, already full of chattering kids. A teacher came forward with a stool, rolled up piece of parchment and a big ,black, ugly looking hat. She leaned over to Alex and whispered," What do you think the hat will do? My father never told me about this part." Nancy suddenly recognized the teacher as the lady she met in Diagon Ally , Professor Grover- or something of the other. She taught Charms and knew her dad. Professor Grover placed the hat on the stool and after a moment it began to sing.

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Now would be a good time for the 3 friends to plan out the house sorting so we can be together and any questions we might have in the DT

Yasmin Jones

I looked the weird hat on the stool. It started to sing s song then when it finished it was placed on some students heads.
"Jones; Yasmin!" the profeser called.
I walked up the stairs to the stool and as the hat was put on my head it called "Slytherin!"
(Sorry for the short post but my friend despritly needs help. SOZ!)

Micheal Amare ~

I wan't ready, I knew both of my parents were in slytherin but would they care? no probably not they never cared before why would they now.
"Jones; Yasmin" was called, I could see how frightened she was as she walked up to the singing wizard hat. The professor put it on her head and a little while later it called "Slytherin".

A knot formed in my stomach, what if Nancy would also get into slytherin and i'd be alone probably in Hufflepuff or something. "Amare; Micheal" The professor called, I could just hear she despised the name and that made the knot even tighter. I walked up the steps I could feel hateful eyes from the children of my parents enemies. I looked at the teachers table some where also looking at me in that way but I was used to it.

I sat down and felt as the hat was put on my head, it fell down below my eyes I couldn't see the people anymore and I didn't care. I waited I don't know how long but suddenly I heard a voice inside my head "Well long since I had an Amare" I heard the hat say "your head is is very different to you parents, yeah I think you don't belong in Slytherin" said the hat and suddenly it yelled "Gryffindor"

Almost no applauds were made at the table but I sat down either way.

Nancy Belthorne

For Maria/Yasmin

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=200&t=93536

Nancy watched as Yasmin was sorted into Slytherin. Micheal, after a little while of sitting with the hat on was sorted into Gryiffindor. Heart pounding she walked up to the stool when Belthorne;Nancy ! was called. She sat still on the stool, waiting. All she heard was a "Hmm, I see... tsk tsk well... I don't know...Well then has to be "GRYFFINDOR!!!" The hat yelled. Nancy took the hat off and wobbled over to the Gryffindor table and sat next to Micheal. She leaned over and said to him, "I'm glad we're in the same house. Too bad Yasmin can't be with us."

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Edited thanks to Saga

Professor Dofoogle




Once all the first years were sorted, Dofoogle stood up to say his speech.
"Welcome, welcome to another year at Hogwarts! It is so great to see you all safe and sound! Now as usual, our caretaker reminds you to stay off the third floor corridor. I also have a announcement of my own! Dark forces are plotting against Hogwarts. I would appreciate it if you all stayed together in groups of two."
Dofoogle groaned as he realized he just blurted it out, instead of easing them into it. He could the hushed whispers going around the whole school.
What have I done? he asked himself.

Yasmin Jones

I was shocked into screaming when the headmaster said there are dark forces at work and we should stay in groups. The person next to me elbowed me in the ribs.

Nancy Belthore

"Way to go professor, scaring everyone like that." Nancy muttered to herself. Michael heard me and snickered a little. Yasmin had screamed when it was first announced at the Slytherin table.Nancy couldn't see why she was so scared. The dark forces have been defeated before and will be again. Nancy leaned over to Michael and said, "Hey since everyone thinks you're so scary you should be protected. No one would dare attack us and if they tried I could talk them out of it while you scared them to death." She smiled and winked at him to show him that she was teasing.

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Fixed!

To Stellabeam/Nancy

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(Stella, Yasmin finished screaming 3 seconds after she started.)

Yasmin Jones

I realised that everyone at the Slytherin table was staring at me. Oopsies. I thought.
"Sorry." I squeeked.
"Fuck up pip-squeek." the 2nd year girl next to me said.
"Don't be mean, Cadence! She might have been raised by muggles." another said.
"Then that's even worse! Yuck! I hate muggles!" the first one replied.
I started to get mad.
"Don't rip on muggles or whatever you wanna call them. I had to live with them since birth!" I snapped at them, making them shut up.

Micheal Amare ~

The announcement came very surprisingly but Nancy was able to turn it into a joke. Yasmin for a few seconds seemed paranoid and screamed. Nancy leaned over and whispered "Hey since everyone thinks you're so scary you should be protected. No one would dare attack us and if they tried I could talk them out of it while you scared them to death." I know she meant for it to be a joke but I still felt a little sad, I put on a bad fake smile and turned to look at the teachers table.

(That's ok Stella. We all make mistakes, hell, I make mistakes constintly! LOL!)

Ok Maria you have to put things like this in the DT! Just look in it please!!

(SOZ!)

Malisa Grover-Great Hall

Way to go Headmaster, I thought to myself, before standing up and getting out my wand. Quickly casting a spell so that my quiet voice was projected over the whole great hall.
“Quiet please everyone. There is no need to be frightened, your professors along with your headmaster and myself shall look after every single one of you, no one will get gravely hurt this year or any other year that any one is still at Hogwarts for.”
The hall was very, very quiet now, it was sort of eerie. Then all of a sudden there was a huge outburst from the Slytherin table, one girl had stood up and yelled out something that I hadn’t made out.

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The outburst could be made by anyone thats in slytherin