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Nancy Belthorne/Hogwarts Express

Nancy saw Yasmin standing by herself on Platform 9 3/4. She went over to say hi and soon after they were boarding the train looking for an empty compartment. She the boy she had met in Diagon Alley sitting by himself . Nancy opened the compartment door and said,"Hey, mind if we join you?"

The boy gave a small nod and they both entered the compartment. "I want to apologize for the way my father treated you in Diagon Alley. I'm still not sure what that was about.Whatever it is I have nothing against you, just try and not make yourself a loner so often alright?" She smiles at him and sits down opening her bag to get some money for the food trolley she heard coming down the corridor.
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Michael Amare - The Hogwarts Express

What was I suppose to say, she was being very straight forward. "I don't try, it just happens" I said it in a kinda childish way, and I looked at my knees. "Anything from the trolley" The doors slid open and an old woman stood there with a trolley full of sweets "Anything sweet dears?" She asked and Nancy stood up walked to the woman.

I looked at Yasmin, it seem'd I wasn't the only one that was quiet because after all I had never even heard her talk.
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Professor Dofoogle



Professor Dofoogle walked off the Hogwarts express and walked over to the entry wall. He put his hand on it and to his surprise, his hand didn't sink though the wall. He pulled out his wand and tapped it against the doorway. It instantly turned back to normal. He walked though the wall and saw a mass of families, wondering what was going on.
"Listen up all of you!" Dofoogle shouted. The families stopped what they were doing and looked up.
"We had a bit of technical error, but I assure you the problem is now fixed. Come through in a orderly fashion!"
Nobody seemed to listen to the last part, as they all ran at the wall as one. To avoid being squashed like a bug, Dofoogle ran through the wall and back onto the Hogwarts express. The problem was fixed.
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Saga97 wrote:Michael Amare - The Hogwarts Express

What was I suppose to say, she was being very straight forward. "I don't try, it just happens" I said it in a kinda childish way, and I looked at my knees. "Anything from the trolley" The doors slid open and an old woman stood there with a trolley full of sweets "Anything sweet dears?" She asked and Nancy stood up walked to the woman.

I looked at Yasmin, it seem'd I wasn't the only one that was quiet because after all I had never even heard her talk.

I looked up when I heard the lady ask if we wanted sweets.
"Got any choclate?" I asked.
"There's choclate frogs, Bertie Bots Every Flavour Beans and Candy. What do you want?" the lady asked.
"Three choclate frogs, three packets of Bertie Bots and a handful of candy, please." I said, handing her five gold coins.
"Anything else?"
"No thank-you, but thanks for asking. And thank-you for the lollies." I said.
"Your welcome. And for being so polite I think I might give you each an extra choclate frog." she said, handing the sweets to us.
"Thank-you" we said at the same time.
"Your welcome. Good-bye." and with that, she left.
"Thanks for shouting us the sweets." Michael said.
"Your welcome!" I said, smiling.
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Professor Dofoogle




The Hogwarts express was finally moving. Dofoogle had fixed the problem, and now they were off to Hogwarts to begin another school year. Some of the parents were reluctant to let there kids on the train, but Dofoogle sorted it out. That was another bonus to him going on the train. The sweets lady walked past Dofoogle's compartment.
"Anything from the trolley, professor?" asked the woman, kindly.
"No thank you Beatrice." Dofoogle smiled back.
Beatrice moved on to buy out all of the other kids as well. This is going to be an interesting school year, he thought,as children ran past his compartment.
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Micheal Amare - The Hogwarts Express

This was fun, we talked all the way about how our classes were going to be and quidditch while we ate our sweets. I looked out the window and saw the trees and lakes rush by, where were we going.
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Nancy Belthorne-Hogwarts Express

Nancy saw her new friends warming up and starting to talk more. "I hope we can be in the same house, that would be awesome.We would have the same classes, eat together and hang out in the same common room." Nancy said while she ate a chocolate frog, "Look!I got a Harry Potter card, they're brand new."
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"What is Quiditch?" I asked.
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Nancy Belthone-Hogwarts Express

"The most amazing sport in the world. It's played on broomsticks and there are three different balls flying around. You really have to see it to get it, we'll take you to the first game Hogwarts has of the season." Nancy explained "It's super popular in the Wizarding World."
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MariaRowlands wrote:"What is Quiditch?" I asked.

Maria, I find these one line posts completely useless. Make sure you increase your posts to around three lines as the minimum.[/spoiler]
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Sorry! I had writers block!
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Michael Amare - The Hogwarts Express

It was getting dark, we must be getting there. "Hey maybe we should change into robes" I said as I stood up and opened my trunk. I was almost getting ready to change when I look over at the girls and they were glaring at me. "What?" I asked rather bewildered.
"Well we ain't changing until you go outside" Nancy said. Forgetting the whole business about them being girls and all I slapped my self in the face (a little to hard) and walked outside.
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Yasmin Jones

I looked around. Do I have to go somewhere else to get changed. I whined in my thoughts.
"Do I have to go as well?" I asked.
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Nancy Belthorne

"No hun, he goes outside while we pull down the curtains and change and then we wait outside while he does the same." Nancy said to the bewildered Yasmin. They then quickly changed and stepped outside and waited for Michael to change. While the were in the hallway the saw some boys roughhousing and saw the Headmaster yell at them to stop.
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Yasmin Jones

"Oh! Ok!" I said.
"Yeah, didn't you know that" Nancy asked.
"No, sorry." I replied.
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