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Among the Forgotten

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Zia Mason~

Zia couldn't help but think of her defenseless sister fighting for her life, this sacrifice would save her. She had to do this. She felt like crying , not for her misfortune , but for not being able to watch her sister grow up. With every step she took , she thought about it, and with every step she took , she came closer to the inevitable truth. She was going to die here.

No one had ever survived this island, but she hoped she would be the first, as had everyone before her. She took a last breath of freedom and the gates opened and held it as she was forced in. The doors slammed behind her and , startled, she let out her last bit of freedom she has managed to get.

An olive skinned girl and a red eyed guy stood together , while another girl sat in the distance near a fire. Tghe island was eerily silent, I din't like it, not here. I walked closer to the group of two and introduced myself. "I'm Zia."




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Audra

Audra was tired of standing around.
"So what are we supposed to do?" she asked, frustrated. Wolf shrugged and might have been about to say something, but the doors opened again before he could speak.
"I'm Zia," the girl said.
"Hi, I'm Wolf," he said. Audra looked towards Wolf, the name finally ringing a bell.
"As in Prince Wolf?" Audra demanded. He shrugged and Audra gave a sharp, short laugh.
"Well, if you excuse me, Your Highness, I'm going to go see if there's anything to eat on this stupid island," Audra said, giving a mock bow and walking off, leaving Wolf blushing.
Audra found some berries and, using a large leaf to carry them, brought them towards the fire, feeling more like herself. It wasn't that Audra was extremely interested in the other Forgotten's company, but she thought she'd have a better chance of survival if they were together. Survival was all Audra had left.
As she walked towards the campsite with her scavengings, Wolf shot her a look. Audra took a handful of the red berries, handed the rest to Natt, and sat at the edge of the fire's light.
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
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Natallie-

Stupid Island. "Ugh, I wan't to go home..." I said resting my arms on the stone floor. "I'm going to hunt, If you guys want to come." I grabbed a blade and ran out.
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*No matter what shape Wolf takes his eyes are always red.*

Wolf:

He cursed low under his breath. "Should've come up with another name." Wolf thought irritably. He settled the dagger, his only weapon, on his belt and stalked off into the forest.

As the trees closed around him Wolf took a breath and changed. Someone had once said that he became light when he shifted. Wolf wasn't sure if he believed them. All he felt was the indescribable pleasure and pain. And then, between one heartbeat and the next, it was over.

A snow white wolf stood where a young man had. Lifting his head he inhaled, scenting the forest. There were all the usual scents of home, but beneath them was something else. A sickeningly cloying scent underlay everything. It was the scent of rot just begun.

Wolf heard a gasp behind him and turned to see one of the girls standing. Smiling Wolf turned and took off with a swish of his tail. Leading the way into the forest. As he walked he tilted back his head and let out a long mournful howl.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Zia Mason ~

I smiled as I saw wolf actually change into a wolf. He was just close enought for me to gain some of his power. I ran towards the forest and switched into the same appearance wolf did. I followed him , he had an interesting power. We looked the same , only his eyes were still the ruby color. Wolf turned around to face my wolf form , I felt beyond awkward. This feeling would hopefully go away sooner or later. I played the feeling of as feeling strange for using his power as my own. But, i was already used to this.




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Wolf:

Wolf was startled that Zia could take on his power. He might have been angry about it but it was swiftly buried beneath the feeling of pack. Despite there similar appearances Zia was smaller then him and sleeker.

He decided to take advantage of the moment. Wolf's head darted out and he nipped playfully at Zia before prancing back and sinking into a bow, tail wagging. It was a silent invitation to play.

*Wolf has a tendency to lose himself in his animal forms, it's his way of venting. Still he is also scouting the island since a wolf can maneuver better then a human in a forest.*
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Natallie-

I pushed through all the trees and shrubs. Then I saw two wolves. But I really didn't know how two wolves got into an Island. I bent down on my knees and played with one, with redish eyes. "Hey, how you doing boy?" I smiled, petting it and playing. I laughed and stood up. I always got along with animals, I can mostly read their thoughts. I smiled and by accident cut myself with my knife. "Ouch..." I laughed and healed myself.
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*sorry my last post was in first person, I forgot I was writing in third person*
Zia Mason~

Zia felt relief when Wolf began to play. She tilted her head and wagged her tail , patting at him. When another girl showed up , she began to play with Wolf. She growled a bit , before she could stop herself. The girl didn't hear it , because she stood up and proceeded to heal a cut she had gotten.

Zia knew she could feel her power inside of her building slowly, but before this point , she didn't know what it was. The feeling felt as though water had been poured through her body , a rushing sensation. Zia didn't know what to do in this form, she looked for guidance from Wolf, this was her first encounter with this type of power.




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Wolf:

Wolf tilted his head, catching a whiff of the fear scent that bled from Zia. She was confused to. Leaning forward he nudged her with his nose and became human again. That triggered Zia's change, as if he was leading her through it.

Suddenly Wolf was sprawled on the ground in human form. The girl Natalie, stared at the two of them in shock. "So you're a healer?" He asks her casually, then glances at Zia. "What about you? What's your power called?"
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Zia Mason

Zia, being nudged by Wolf, followed Wolf and returned to her human form. "So you're a healer?" Wolf asked the girl. He then moved his vision to Zia. "What about you? What's you power called?"

Zia looked down, thinking about what she would say, how to describe it. "Absorption, Is what I call it." They were still looking at her so she went on. "Whoever i'm around, I absorb some of their power. Watch."

Zia pulled her blade out and sliced her hand. It was a small cut , nothing serious, but Natalie looked at her as if she was insane. Zia focused on her power then ran two fingers over the cut. The wound healed instantly. She put her blade back into it's place and slightly blushed.




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Natallie-

I grinned- "Um, don't steal my power. Just a warning." I smiled. I turned to Wolf. "Yes, I'm a healer. I can't control myself mentally but I can control my wounds from the outside." like this. I got out my gun, and put it to my stomach, and pulled the trigger, having me back up. It healed instantly and I smiled. "Indestructable..."
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-Richard

He spat, the taste of iron overwhelming his mouth. His head throbbed with a constant tick like a clock. The gash along the side of his head left him dizzy as he staggered to his feet.

Clasping the cross across his neck Richard peered along the horizon. There was nothing but the setting sun to catch his gaze. No sign of life and no boat. He didn't know how long he was out, but Richard knew he had failed to escape once. He stood there a moment and pondered whether the chance would ever arise again.

He had it all planned out on the boat ride to the island. The moment he was dropped off he would find a spot to watch the boat leave across the sea. At the last moment he would teleport back to the ship and stow away until he could sneak ashore. He knew the risk and was currently dealing with the consequences.

He had been recaptured almost instantly. Richard had gathered they were warned about his ability. Immediately after capture he was beaten until he lay unconscious. How does he know this? The last thing Richard could remember before waking up back on the island was being beaten with the hilt of a sword.

Releasing his hold of the cross that hung from his neck Richard looked up at the sky. "With God as my Sheppard I shall fear no Evil." Armed with only a knife at his belt and faith upon his shoulders Richard made his way into the forest. "Forgotten and betrayed I am left upon a Cross."
I will always fight back, no matter what.




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Natallie-

I heard the door close.Ohh another person!! I ran thorough the forest and bumbed into a guy I've never see before. "Oh I'm sorry," I looked at him. Oh my god he was torn up! It looks like ge's been beaten! I touched his arm and all of his wounds healed. "What happened to you?!"
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*Err... There wouldn't be guns, this is a fantasy story so swords would be the weapon of choice.*
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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*Ah alright, I'll make her have a sword instead of gun then :)*
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For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
— Audrey Hepburn