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Not accepting for a short while.

Reviewed:
- less than 3000 words
- short stories
- first chapters of novels

Not reviewed
- Poetry
- Full Novels

It's simple, really.

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ir you're not too busy I'd really apreciate a review for the first chapter of my novel Animal. :)




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Hiya,
I'd really appreciate a review of the first chapter of my novel (Romance): post889219.html#p889219

Thank you!!
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Done and done.

Keep 'em coming.
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Hey could you please review Chapter 1 of my new planned short novel The Shuji Tower. I'm writing this to have fun and to also get practice in writing as I haven't really written much.

post898766.html#p898766

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Hello,

If you have the time, could you review my first chapter of my romance novel? I'm aiming to get published and any feedback would be helpful. Thank you!

Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=86021
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Me again! I'm sorry, but you're an awesome reviewer. :P Please look at my romance short story, I really have a problem with it but I can't identify what's wrong with it. :? viewtopic.php?t=86380
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Okay, I will get through yours soon Priceless. Just had a read over.
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Hi JP,
Can you please review my story viewtopic.php?t=87624. I will be grateful for the help. Cheers, Phoenix23
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Hello,

I'd appreciate any feedback on this, as it would be helpful. Rip it to shreds! Thanks :)




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I'd really like some super harsh critique on this. I've gotten a lot of great reviews but nothing that was complete honest and harsh. I hope you can help me with that. :]

Thanks!

~Jas
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Thank you :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Hello! If you have the time, thanks!



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