OMGOT! The BESTTEST masterpeace wrotten!!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 12:48 am

Fishr says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 12:48 am

once upon a time there was a magical unicorn name princess she was white witha long tale and big beutifull blue eyes. One day someone came in in her magical forest and tried to steal her horn from her. The unicorn was very upset and to punish them she pointed her horn in their faces and they instantly tunred to stone.

After that, no one dared to rob the unicorn of her horn.
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brain cramp. i'll return like later and check. does anything need to be changed?

[courtesy of SPEW]

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:26 am

Elizabeth says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:26 am

I am seirously going to die if I see another one of these... craps...
I am serious, this belongs in Randomness or some sort of flame, burning.
What is wrong with all of you people?!
I don't care if SPEW issued it...
WHAT IS UP WITH YOU PEOPLE?!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:34 am

ladydark says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:34 am

oooh, that is the best story ever! what a piece, what a beautiful, lovely heart warming story. I've never read or seen better. I'm so jealous now :cry:

also, tons of spelling mistakes, but other then that, BEAUTIFUL!!!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:35 am

bubblewrapped says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:35 am

I've told you this already but I had to say it again - superb. The flow of the story was just magical. I'll have to check out more of your work!!!!!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:38 am

Poor Imp says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:38 am

D'you know...you bewildered me.

Yes, totally involving...and um, good...and and I don't speak ...l337? Or is it...

Forget it.

I thought you were Nate for minute. :lol:

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:39 am

electricbluemonkey says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:39 am

I just wanna know why this isnt the featured story.

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 4:41 am

hekategirl says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 4:41 am

I love this! I can't believe how good a writer you are. Lovely is all I can say. It flowed so well. The imagry was amazing, I could see everything. Great work!!!

Keep writing!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 5:00 am

Meshugenah says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 5:00 am

Fisher, you are my hero for like, all time. Your brilliance is beyond words. I salute you.

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 5:26 am

smaur says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 5:26 am

Wow ... words cannot describe how much this story means to me. It's profound, y'know? You've managed to convey the emotional conflict of the characters, the depth and complexity of the plot, the brilliantly insightful social commentary, in a few well-penned words. I'm impressed. I've spent a few hours pouring over the story, again and again, trying to find something to critique. But to be honest, it's perfect. Gorgeous stuff.

I hope I can write as well as this someday ...

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 6:49 am

Elelel says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 6:49 am

does anything need to be changed?

NEVER! *sobs and cries* It's beautiful! The bit where the unicorn got upset ... heartbreaking!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 10:54 am

bubblewrapped says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 10:54 am

For your age, this is fantastic. I know I've already posted but I just had to come back and read it again... :cry:

I still cry with each word!!!

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:13 am

deleted6 says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:13 am

Has the whole world gone mad please mask a thread for these or something, cause even though Spew did it i can't lie about things like that.

Also please no one else do these one was enough now it's getting kinda ridiclous.

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:43 pm

Caligula's Launderette says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:43 pm

I don't understand why people are dissing this. It's such an insightful cultural and social commentary. It's so BEAUTIFUL!

Ditto what Mesh said.

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Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:59 pm

Fishr says... · Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:59 pm

*sniff* omgOt! I'm brillant!!11!!

The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.

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