I've edited my story [Professor Morgenstern] a little bit from its initial conception. You said you would look over it, but I'll drop this over here as a reminder (if you still want to, that is). I'd love to hear your opinion.
Andhere is another one. Same vein as the last, though a little stronger, in my opinion. Also, don't feel you must respond to these requests. Casting over your WRFF, I quickly noticed I am easily the most prolific suppliant.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hola. I'd love a review on this. If you don't mind, I'd rather it be more of an 'umbrella view' than nitpicks. I usually don't have too many grammar errors, if any. Be as harsh as you want, thanks!
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads." — Dr. Seuss
