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NO NPC'S.

I feel like it'll be boring if we have that many filler characters. At least cut it down! What made Battle Royale so special in the first place is that every single character had a background and personality. Besides, 42 characters is too many people to keep track of and deal with. We don't want to be overambitious with this. It is your first SB, remember? And I hope you are aware that the book was over 600 pages.
If we give 28 of the characters weapons, then we have to give EVERYONE a weapon, and neither you or I want to deal with that. It'll make the story flow more smoothly, and reduce effort if we eliminate the aspect of NPC's all together.
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Is there still room for moi? :D I know a thing or two about Sb's!
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Gurl, there's always room.
We need another female character (or two).
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YES NPC's. But maybe not as many as we have now!
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I will take your advice and get rid of enough NPC'S so there are 3 per gender
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Yes, thank you very much!
Here's some more photos of where you will be "staying" for the next few days.
http://gakuranman.com/gunkanjima-ruins- ... en-island/
Here's a map of the island.
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Lool, okay, I'll make a girl. But I'm just warning you, I haven't done one of these in a long time so if something doesn't fit, just tell me and I'll fix it.

Character Profile

Age: Fifteen

Name: Mikan Amaya (Since it's a Japanese thing, I'll deck out in Hello Kitty!)

Gender: Female

History/Background: Mikan's life is probably the most boring one you could possibly get. Even a snail may have a more eventful life then her and that's saying something. Mikan comes from a relatively small family, with only one younger sibling below her. She's a Japanese exchange student (with the whole of her family coming to the states with her) but that's probably the only high light. Her Father and Mother both own butchery shops back in Tokyo and hardly leave Japan unless its to flock after their children. Mikan always lived a sheltered life, always! Her parents are extremely protective and won't let the eldest daughter out of their sights. Even school was hard for her. Most of the time, Mikan was taught through private tutoring, though only managed to break out of that when it came to high school and the funds for tuition became extremely high.

Appearance: Mikan isn't a very pretty girl, or at least she doesn't think so. She has rather short brown hair that is tinted to seem red (not natural, she died it when she was at school). Her eyes are distinctively different from the rest of her families, seeming black instead of the ash brown that they are. Most people pick up on this, saying that is seems as Mikan is staring into your soul and often, just to add spark into her life, she says that she can. Mikan isn't very tall (5'3"), in fact, she's tiny in every aspect, curves included [surfboard]. Mikan has a rather large red blob on the back of her neck which is her birthmark though she lies every chance she gets to make it seem more cooler then it actually is.

Skills: Her parents being butchers, she knows how to weild a knife though not in the I-can-slice-you-three-times-before-you-even-realise kind of way. Mikan was taught from a very young age where the main arteries are and how to distinctly kill someone (a cow in her case) without getting sticky. Mikan is relatively quick on her feet and can endure going without necessities for some time as she had to do so back in Japan when her mother and father were going through hard financial patches. All in all, Mikan hasn't got many skills, she actually has more weaknesses...

Weaknesses: Mikan can hardly kill a fly without crying her eyes out, it's kind of why she was banned from her father's and mother's shop. Though she does know how to kill someone, she would never dream of laying a finger on another person. She is rather airheaded and would easily give away her hiding place by doing the stupidest of things. Mikan cannot think quickly on her feet and this is her very large, if not largest, downfall. She'll easily break under her pressure and will often induce her own stress attacks.

Personality: Mikan is a very soft girl that likes to help others no matter what condition they are in. Even though her mother and father kill animals for a living, Mikan has a rather large soft spot for any living thing. In her younger years, she'd often adopt stray animals off of the street and practically kill them with her over affection. Did I mention her over affection? If you're the unlucky fool to become her crush, you will not hear the end of it. PERIOD! You might as well pack you bags and leave to France...Mikan is a rather naive, cry baby when you get down to it. In all honesty, she is not a survivor, a fighter or a thinker. The only thing that really keeps her going is her love for others though she might also be the down fall of them all.

Other: She is up for any alliances whether they be friendly or romantic, though I do warn you, she has a tendency to have everyone around her killed. :wink: Just warning you in advance.
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Very well written character profile, Apple.
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A proposal here to refer to buildings in the following manner:
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I approached another derelict building(18), nothing special about it, but I decided to go inside anyway.
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The (18) refers to the building # on the map.
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By no means should it be mandatory, but if you want to do it, then sure.
Also, not that I'm implying anything, but whoever female 14 is, she is going to be VERY LUCKY.
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This is a note on how the danger zones will work.
NOTE: This is not an actual map of the island. This is a map of the island used in the novel as an example.

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As you can see, it is divided by a grid, some numbers, and letters, much like a chess board. Gunkanjima will be divided in much the same way.
Danger zones, when active, will be called forbidden zones. For example, if E3 is announced as a forbidden zone starting at 9:30 AM, any people caught in the area at 9:30 AM will have their collars detonated. And any other people who enter E3 for the remainder of the day shall also have their collars detonated. Some zones (such as the starting point) may be designated forbidden zones permanently, and will not change. New forbidden zones are announced at the start of every day, as a means of keeping the students constantly on foot. So, be careful where you sleep.
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I was bored out of my mind, so I made a little "book cover" for this. Enjoy.

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That book cover is pretty darn snazzy Torahiko! :)
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