Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)

Elinor · 2011-01-01T07:34:47Z

Hello! I had one of these threads a long while ago, but it's buried somewhere within the long and forgotten pages of this forum, and with the new year at hand, I believed that it would be nice to start anew. Also, this will help me toward my resolution of reviewing more frequently. If you would like a review from me, all you need to do is post a link here and I will have your review back to you within the next one to three days. If that amount of time has passed and you still have not received your critique, feel free to send me a PM. I accept any original fiction under 5,000 words (or around for the max) and any Art/Photography. I will also review poetry, but please note that it is not my strong point in the slightest. Please don't ask me to start reviewing your novel in the middle unless there is a summary up or something else of the sort so I have an idea of what is going on. The same goes for short stories with multiple parts. In my fiction reviews, I will be thorough, but I don't usually look into grammar unless it's really bad -- I'll address characterization, plot, pacing, ect. If there is something you would like me to focus on in your review, just let me know. :) For my art reviews, I'm generally pretty thorough -- I'll look at the overall quality of the picture. For art, I will look at color, texture, lines, use of space, shading, etc. For photography I will look at lighting, angles, color, focus, and if you used digital effects to edit, I will look at how well that compliments/takes away from your photo. Again, if there is anything you would like me to focus on, just let me know. :) Please only ask me to review one thing at a time -- if there is more then one thing you would like me to review, you may request it once I am done reviewing your first thing. Who wants one? I am ready to start taking requests. :)

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Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:22 pm

Button says... · Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:22 pm

If you have some spare time, could you please take a peek at this?

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It'd be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much!

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Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:47 pm

Tigersprite says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:47 pm

Could you please review this short story? I've got some great reviews already, so you whenever you have the time. Thanks in advance!

Tiger

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:08 pm

Elinor says... · Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:08 pm

Tedus, Perseph, Tiger -- you guys are all up! I apologize for not getting to your reviews sooner as I have been without internet access for the past four days. Expect to see them very soon!

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:19 pm

LittlePrincess says... · Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:19 pm

Hi, I'd love a review of my story
Part 1 viewtopic.php?t=74886
Part 2 post810304.html#p810304
It's unfinished.. suggestions are welcome since i'm not 100% how its going to go. Thanks!

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Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:15 pm

Emmzziee says... · Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:15 pm

OH! ME ME ME

Please review my poem

You don't have too...
But it'd be just awesome if you would

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Xxx

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:12 am

Elinor says... · Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:12 am

All done at last, guys! Who's next?

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:17 am

Lumi says... · Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:17 am

I'll give you cookies. :3

Edit: I guess it'd be good to note that the current form has not been reviewed.

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:11 pm

Elinor says... · Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:11 pm

All finished, Lumi! Who is next?

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Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:46 pm

Sins says... · Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:46 pm

Hey there, Eli.

I'm stalking the WRFF threads right now, so I thought I'd request one here. Would you mind reviewing the next part of Stop and Stare for me? I've been having some real trouble with it, so don't expect it to be amazing or anything... That's why I need your help!

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Please and thank you!

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