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Hello, there, Somebody-I-Don't-Know.
It seems that you're in need of a review. Well, just your luck, I'm too scatterbrained and - I admit - lazy to go find things to review. So, why don't you do us both a favor and request one? Don't worry, just leave me a nice little message and I'll get to it pronto! I promise!
Thanks so much, Dollface!
Love ya,
Lu

P.S. When it comes to poetry - I know nothing beyond whether I liked it or not. I will read it and review it if you insist, but don't expect anything spectacular or insightful. My deepest apologies.
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Oh hello there!

Yes, I'm the first one. :3

Will you care to review a short story of mine?

Link: topic70224.html

Thanks in advance.

~yuri
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Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.




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If you have time, could you review this for me please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=70187
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So, there you go guys! Sorry to Azula for my useless poetry review - I seriously forgot to put that in my little add. I beg your forgiveness!
Now...who's next?
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Please review my story, The Law of Moses (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post770865.html). It's my first one posted on this site and I would like to see if the quality of the writing is a good enough level for this community. Thanks!
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I'd like advice/opinions on this, please:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=667

I'm not demanding you read/review all three chapters. Whatever works for you is fine. Thanks in advance! :D
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Talulahbelle wrote:Hello, there, Somebody-I-Don't-Know.
It seems that you're in need of a review. Well, just your luck, I'm too scatterbrained and - I admit - lazy to go find things to review. So, why don't you do us both a favor and request one? Don't worry, just leave me a nice little message and I'll get to it pronto! I promise!
Thanks so much, Dollface!
Love ya,
Lu

P.S. When it comes to poetry - I know nothing beyond whether I liked it or not. I will read it and review it if you insist, but don't expect anything spectacular or insightful. My deepest apologies.


You gave me a promise! hahaha...kidding...please review this.

topic70345.html

Thanks. :) It would be better if you review the first one as well. *wink*
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There you go, darlings! Now, who else? Come on, I can handle it!
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Hey I need some feedback on my poem "Clouds"
topic87751.html
If you could have a look soon that would be great (just whether you like it or not)
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