Would you please be so kind as to take a look at my poem, Photograph to Sand? I'm afraid there is a rather long spoiler, and it's fairly important that you read that first, so if you wouldn't mind...
Thank you very much in advance, 'Pyre
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That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Hi, I'm hoping to ask for a review on the first part of my general fiction novel: topic74327.html Some of the later parts might be a teensy bit gory, as there is a medical aspect, but there's nothing bad in this one at all.
This may annoy you... but... do you mind reviewing part of my novel that isn't the beginning. It's part four, but technically, it's the second part of chapter two, so it's not as bad... right?
Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder. — Ranger
