Specifically pepperoni pizza. :) (I'm always hungry)

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Hi Calligraphy!

I'm requesting a review for "What She Liked," a short-story/nonfiction/prose poetry sort of deal. It's very short (maybe five paragraphs) and I'd love to get your thoughts on it! post751919.html#p751919

Thank you! :D
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Hi there! Could you please review either one of my chapters in my novel Bikes and Books? novel.php?id=550 Thank you!
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I am so sorry you guys I only have 5 minutes on the computer. I will review both on Monday. :D

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Hello AS. I have a novel with three chapters (and still going). post752526.html#p752526 I need some criticism and just some comments that you can make. Thanks!
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RachaelElg - done.

Bookwormart - done.

Again I only have a short time on the computer, but I promise I will get yours done tomorrow.

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Hey :) This piece isn't mine, but it has hardly any reviews, and it's a REALLY good story in terms of plot. I would really like some attention drawn to it, so could you please review it?

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Well, try this, it is a poem... topic68879.html
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This is closed! I have decided to make a new one for my new account as Calligraphy. I know it is a little late, but I just realized that I couldn't edit what I will review. :D

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