Specifically pepperoni pizza. :) (I'm always hungry)

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ArahniaSiddel
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:43 am
ArahniaSiddel says... · Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:43 am
So, I will review anything. If you want me to review you please just post a link and what type of work it is. I guess that is all I have to say . . .

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MiaParamore
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:24 pm
MiaParamore says... · Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:24 pm
Hi I woul love if you could review my novel having two chapters. here's the link: Love Has No Boundaries. Thanks in advance!
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ArahniaSiddel
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:20 pm
ArahniaSiddel says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:20 pm
I did it a few days ago ... kind of late telling you, but now is better then never. :) So to everyone else there is an example of my work :)

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austenite
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:31 pm
austenite says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:31 pm
Can you review mine as well? Nothing like shameless plugging. It's a Romantic short story, the first part. topic64749.html Thanks very much!!
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ArahniaSiddel
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Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:38 pm
ArahniaSiddel says... · Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:38 pm
austenite - sorry my computer blocked this. Sorry, sometimes it is so dumb. It even blocked Google once!

theboss - Done :) Sorry, I didn't make it longer. I have restricted time on the computer.

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Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:39 am
jemjive says... · Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:39 am
topic65063.html

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Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:36 pm
Calligraphy says... · Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:36 pm
So, this is me Arahnia . . . I just wanted to let everyone know that "Calligraphy" is actually me... sigh.




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austenite
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Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:43 pm
austenite says... · Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:43 pm
ArahniaSiddel wrote:austenite - sorry my computer blocked this. Sorry, sometimes it is so dumb. It even blocked Google once!


That's no good!! Can I suggest something else then??? See if this works, it's Romance still, but in the novels section:
post719654.html#p719654
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Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:23 pm
Flower~Child says... · Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:23 pm
Will you review this for me? topic65262.html It's romance, well the begining of it.
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:26 am
Calligraphy says... · Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:26 am
austenite - done. That was really good.

Flower~Child - done. Your story was also good, but I can't really tell because it was so short.




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iamjemo
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Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:27 pm
iamjemo says... · Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:27 pm
Hi. Kindly check my novel: novel.php?id=333. Thanks!
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Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:31 pm
Calligraphy says... · Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:31 pm
iamjemo - both parts done.




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Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:59 pm
Calligraphy says... · Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:59 pm
Bump. I am still open guys :D

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Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
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