So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?
hmm, I should try making that my signiture. anyways, could you review my first four chapters of a novel I'm working on? It's posted in seperate chapters, and since I'm not sure what a novel's main page is, could you just post your cumulative review on the fourth chapter? it's an action adventure novel. thanks, the link to the first chapter is here, further links are at the end of each chapter. topic73681.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
Hi there So, I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: topic74039.html It's poetry. If you find yourself stretched for time or anything, feel free to completely disregard it. Thanks.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
