Alo people, I haven't posted anything for AGES ... anyway,I haven't divided this up into chapters, so each part ends very suddenly...that's all I think
“Cañónoscuridad An ancient voice whispered. Lyle looked around him. He could see nothing but the intense darkness.
“Cañónoscuridad….” the voice whispered again. It sent shivers running up Lyle’s back.
“W - where am I?” he asked, his voice shaking with fear.
“Cañónoscuridad…..” the voice whispered again. Lyle let out a short scream as he felt something touch his ankle. He tried to step away from the thing touching him, only to find the thing tightening its grip. By now Lyle could clearly feel fingers around his ankle. He screamed as it started dragging him. Dragging him into the darkness…
Lyle sat upright in his bed, screaming. He sighed, relieved that all it had been was a dream. Moonlight streamed through his window, revealing a shabby wooden floor, a table standing opposite Lyle, filled with random jewellery, li'l golden men and women, and a few books. An observer would soon notice by listening to the drunk, hoarse voices that this was a tavern. Slowly, Lyle swung his legs to the side of the bed, but froze a moment before they touched the ground. Wrong side, he thought. It was a silly superstition, but Lyle believed in doing everything in his power not to get killed. So he slowly swung his legs around the small bed, and stood. He was dressed in a white shirt, made from the wool of thigs (A cousin of sheep) as it was the cheapest material. Over that he wore a coat that was obviously much too big for him, his sleeves hanging past his fingers, and the coat itself coming to his shins. But it had been worn by his father and his father, and his father’s father and so on. Also, around his wrist he wore a bangle with three black beads, two red ones, and countless oranges. Lyle stood, and walked to the window, his shoes as silent as a bubble popping in a pint of beer. As he peered out, he once again admired the great mountain of a wall before him, and a even bigger iron gate, locked for the night. I’m going through that tomorrow, he thought with a shiver. Better get my sleep then. And he walked to his bed, and crawled in, waiting for sleep to come to him. And then the wind seemed to whisper,
“Cañónoscuridad….”
The great gates creaked as they opened. Gofdi didn't stand alone before the gate. Beside her stood a boy she recognised as the boy her employers had spoken about. She felt her face flush as she remembered the details of their conversation. Finally the buffalo working the mechanism opened the gate, and she stepped through, carrying a basket of apples. People wouldn’t really call Gofdi beautiful, or pretty. The best she could come up with was handsome. People in the City didn't find brown eyes or brown hair attractive, and opted for the typical blond and blue eyed girls. Gofdi’s eyes opened in amazement as she saw the white roads before her, cobbled with pearl-like stones. Gofdi had been in these roads many time before, but each time it succeeded in amazing her. Usually the roads would be dotted by the occasional man or woman, always dressed ornately, but today the roads was deserted. Today was the day of the market. She smiled. The boy beside her gasped, at the beauty of the roads, she supposed. She started walking, gazing at the magnificent mansions. How could all these people live in such wealth if just outside their walls people were starving? She shook her head.
Lyle gazed at the girl next to him. Never had he thought he had seen anyone so beautiful. Her long brown locks tumbling down to her hips, and her eyes, on the verge of being golden. When she smiled, his breath was knocked out of him, and he felt a cold feeling clutch at his body, he heard someone gasp. Only when she had started walking, her hips swaying slightly did he notice he should move. He couldn’t take his eyes off of her, and he was afraid that if he did, she would vanish. But he knew that sooner or later she would look at him, and he would have to say something when she did. It seemed to be sooner.
“Hello,” Lyle said his voice breaking as her gaze locked with his. She smiled again . Lyle’s legs grew heavy, and his heart beat went far faster than it seemed possible.
“Hi,” She returned, her voice sounding neither like a mountain stream (Her voice didn’t go: Gurgle gurgle splutter ) and it didn’t sound like a bell chiming either (Her voice definitely din’t go: Tinkle, tinkle, tinkle or gong…gong. ) It sounded perfect and beautiful. Lyle heard his mouth gasp again, and cursed softly as he felt himself flushing again. Close ye eyes…He instructed himself. Imagine she is just any normal whore….
.She would never be a whore! Wha’ am I thinkin’?! She would never be as my ma!!
At least think of her as ordinary then.
Ordinary? Barely, just look at her.
No don’t!! Then you’ll change into a statue again.
But she will find it odd if I just suddenly close my eyes!
Yes, but you –
“You’re all right?” She asked sounding concerned. Lyle’s eyes fluttered open.
“Umm….yea, I was just…just…thinkin’,” Lyle said, his face pale.
“Ye sure?" She asked. "Your face is pale.” Lyle smiled lamely.
Part II?
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