Famished of reviews - the shades of the heart

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spike71294
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Tue May 18, 2010 7:02 am
spike71294 says... · Tue May 18, 2010 7:02 am
Hi I rewrote the first chapter of 'the heart of a god' the novel has also been renamed to 'the shades of the heart'
Please read it and compare the two, I really need it.

Shades of the heart ch 1
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Heart of a god ch1 +intro
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DreamyAlice says... · Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:43 am
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