Note from author :
This is the same story as 'the heart of a god'.
I rewrote the story as the previous format wasn't working for me.
Now each chapter is narrated by a different character.
Please spare some of your precious time and go through my previous chapter and compare them and tell me if I have improved or not.
You don't have any idea how much your comments means to me, if you liked this piece even just a little bit then post at least a 'nice', it's more than enough to give me the motivation needed to write more.
Sorry for writing such a big note by the way. I won't waste any more of your time.
-----------
Shades of the Heart
Chapter 1
Narrated by: Eos Edgar
A speck of dust is definitely the most amazing thing in this world.
Despite being insignificant and negligible it has the ability to paint the sky blue and the power to light up the heavens with fire.
And sometimes it also change’s people’s lives, alter their destinies and modify the course of time.
At least that’s what it did to me.
My story starts from a windy twilight, the Sun was in the winter of it’s life and it’s last breaths gave the sky a scarlet sheen.
I was standing on the balcony of my room and the golden walls of the royal palace, my home which floated high above in the sky, was shining in it’s full glory.
Tears rolled down my cheeks; my brother had defeated me again.
From childhood he had been one step ahead of me- he had started using magic at the age of six, I learned it when I was ten; he had completed learning geography, science, history and politics at the age of thirteen, I am sixteen and my studies are only half-way complete.
And now he had done what is considered to be the ultimate sign of greatness- he had learned to transform!
Only a few people have been able to do it before, though almost everyone in our family have this ability, but no one in the past have learned it at seventeen.
Now he would definitely be the heir to the throne!
This thought killed me, I almost felt like choking.
It was always my dream to succeed my father, to rectify all the cruel sins he had committed, to bring back all my family members who were a threat to my father and were now lifeless stone statues, to free all the relatives of the Gods who lost to my father and were tortured until their souls willingly left their bodies, and to do so much more.
But now my heartless brother would succeed him instead, and the world will fall deeper into the abyss of chaos and cruelty.
I felt hopeless and felt like ending my life, but alas, I was immortal.
At that moment I hated being a God.
But just when everything in life seemed to have ended, a gust of wind blew by and the dusty particles in it scattered the last red rays of the Sun, transforming into minute rubies in the process.
At that moment everything stopped, and it seemed that there were only two things in this world- me and those twinkling gems.
And it was then that I truly understood the meaning of these lines I read when I was ten-
“To see a World in a Grain of Sand
And a Heaven in a Wild Flower,
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour.”
It seemed that William Blake wrote it especially for me; I was actually able to see a world in those grains of sand.
And finally when that moment passed, and I came back to my senses, I discovered that I had become dust myself! I had transformed!
I was ecstatic, euphoric, exhilarated, overjoyed, delirious and everything else; I had just become the youngest person alive to be able to transform!
Now I was sure to become the heir to my father’s throne; now I would become the king of the world!
Full with indescribable joy, I flew straight out of the palace and went down into the city of Shakti, the capital of the world.
I flew by the marble streets and the grassy outskirts of the city and went into the thick woods that surrounded it.
There, by the river, I saw a beautiful figure, dancing in the middle of the forest.
It was a human young girl, with extremely long hair, which covered most of her body and shined with a lustrous glow.
With her eyes closed, she danced with full concentration.
Her hypnotic movements were like that of a fast, flowing river; soft yet a little aggressive.
Bewitched by her aggressive and delicate grace I flew beside her and ran my fingers through her soft hair, I caressed her warm, rosy cheeks and I touched her white, slender arms.
But of course she thought it was only the wind.
I watched her dance all through the night and fell asleep in the woods.
The warmth of the morning Sun woke me up the next day. I looked all around and discovered that the girl had gone.
I turned into dust again and went back home.
That day I wasn’t able to concentrate on my studies, find taste in my food or feel the joy I used to feel when I did my favourite things.
All I could think of was about that longhaired girl who danced in the forest and whom I watched in awe all night. Often I would also wonder if having such feelings for a human was all right or not, but I didn’t care much, logic doesn’t work in love.
The day passed with utter restlessness and anxiousness; and when the Sun died again I quickly transformed and flew straight into the forest.
There I found that girl dancing again.
Loosing all control over myself, I flew over to her and hugged her tight.
Startled, She stopped.
I don’t know what I was thinking at that moment but I reappeared before her.
She let out a little squeal.
”Who are you?” She screamed.
But I didn’t reply, it seemed that I was hypnotised by the glow of her pearl white face.
“Who the heck are you?” She repeated her question.
I still didn’t reply and kept on staring into her eyes; so she slapped me hard on my face.
It was then that I came back to my senses.
“I..I am sorry.” I mumbled.
"Go away." She said.
" I love you!" I said loosing control once again.
I stared into her eyes and she stared back, and it was the second time in a day that time had stopped for me.
She blushed and probably I was doing the same too.
“I can see that.” She said smiling.
I smiled back and for another moment we kept on gazing into each other’s eyes.
Then abruptly she broke the eye contact. “ I am sorry, this can’t happen.” She said looking away. "Go away."
"But I really do." I begged like a desperate beggar.
“I am sorry.” She said, her voice devoid of any emotions.
“Please give me a chance.” I pleaded.
“No!” She screamed in a rude voice.
“But why?” I said with a tinge of anger and frustration in my voice.
"Because I am a prostitute!" she screamed with tears running down her eyes.
"I don't believe it!" I said.
In reply she removed her thick long hair from her front and it was then that I discovered that she wasn't wearing any clothes at all. All over her body there were scratch marks and wounds.
"Go!" She said turning away from me.
"But why do you do it?"
"Because I need money to survive. Now go."
But Instead of going away I went to her. I caressed her wounds and slowly they disappeared.
I slid my hand between her legs and her hymen was restored.
"I will take care of you now." I smiled.
Not believing her eyes she touched the places where her wounds had been to confirm that it wasn't an illusion.
When she realized what had just happened she hugged me and started weeping with joy.
I hugged her back and I could feel her heart beating against my chest.
For a moment we remained entwined. Then I made her drink some water from the river and then we both sat on the grass beside the riverbank.
She gazed into my eyes and I gazed into hers.
"I love you." I whispered.
"I love you too." She whispered back.
Then we hugged, and lied down, still our arms tightly hugging each other.
Listening to the lullaby of our hearts we fell asleep.
Gender:
Points: 1681
Reviews: 31