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Hey, I reviewed Just 1411 Left. Sorry I am still working on some reviews. You know, I'm really busy right now...last week of school. Hope you guys understand! By the way, for Popularity Wars, I started on Chapter 3, but then it got deleted on my computer. I WONDER who did that..:D I will rewrite it as soon as I can! Meanwhile, anyone care to review a poem i wrote? I'm not a poet...I wrote it for fun! It's called "Goodbye".
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Will you review this?

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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It's a poem I wrote the other day and I'd appreceate it if you'd take a look at it.




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Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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Hey I requested everything requested recently! Anymore things needed to be reviewed? I'm working on Chapter Three of Popularity Wars like crazy now, since it's the summer! Patience is the key! :D
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Hey, guys! c'mon, anything to be reviewed? Pretty please with a monster truck on top?? :D

I finished writing Chapter 3 of Popularity Wars. Will post later so keep checking my page!

I have this idea of writing a whole book on an 14-hour plane ride. Good idea or bad idea? comment below!

And this is my update on MY writing life. What's yours? :D well, post ANYTHING you want to be reviewed!
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!




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Hey hey!! Feel free to give any of my stuff a review, particularly this: post733204.html#p733204 Thank you!
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I have an important announcement to make. *drumroll*

Chapter 3 of "Popularity Wars" is now COMPLETE.

*applause* Please feel free to review it, as it is not perfect. :D

I'm going to China tomorrow night, so I will urge myself to write at least ten pages of that novel on the 16-hr plane ride. Who's with me?? Comment below, or at my piece.

Thank you everyone!!
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Please review!! Love ya!




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I am done with the reviews requested! Anymore, people?? :D I'm craving for stuff to review. If you don't have anything for me, review the link in mysignature!!
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Why hello there. :twisted:

Are you willing to review the latest chapter of my novel? It's actually the seventh one so it might not make much sense... I understand if you don't want to do it, so you don't have to. You don't have to read the previous chapters either, but they would help a lot. It's up to you.

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Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Heya,

I was wondering if you might review the first part of my novella?

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I've had people sayinig the writing is too slow, and that they don't understand various words, as you will see from the reviews underneath. However, I was trying to covey how bored the character is...

I would so appreciate any help on this!

Thanks

TOYF :?
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Hey! I'm done with your request, TOYF! Hope it helped!

Skins, could I review something else? I don't really like reviewing something that I didn't read the beginning of. Thanks!

Anymore requests, anyone?
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That's fine, :)

I do have something else that you could review... but it's the third chapter of something. :lol: If I remember correctly though, you've actually reviewed the first chapter of it, so you've only missed the second chapter.
Is that okay...?

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Thanks, and sorry for being awkward...!
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Okay, let's do this. Here is the link to the sixth chapter in a novel I am writing. It will probably be confusing to you, but if you want to read the rest, obviously feel free. Here it is:
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Thanks for your help
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