Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing." Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."
Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing." Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."
WhiteTiger93, once she adds known associates to her profile.
Me628967, some minor cleaning to the profile is needed (e.g. not cutting hair in order to show off his elvish heritage, though he is now listed as human.)
LoveableLittleSock, I like the profile, but I'm concerned about how he's going to be integrated into the story. If you've got a plan on how to accomplish it though, then you're good to go.
And while I was reading through the others, I noted nobody seemed to like Eli. I can't seem to understand why? xD Poor Eli. Lol.
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!
Appearance: Saare is about 5'5 and is somewhat slender with mostly muscle. She has light brown straight hair along with blue eyes. She wears a basic pair of pants, a longsleeve brown shirt and a black coat.. She has somewhat high cheek-bones and her hair is slightly below her shoulders.
Skills: Archery and training animals.
Flaws: Only speaks English and doesn't know the common/local language. Saare also doesn't know her way around and doesn't know/isn't prepared for the lifestyle.
Equipment: A leather water container (somewhat like a canteen), maps, a small amount of money (from Earth, so it's useless) and some food (bread, and sometimes has some form of meat). All those items are held in a sack/backpack.
History: Saare was born and raised in Ashland, a small town in Oregon that is well known for the Shakespeare Festival that takes place every year. She makes a living by owning a small souvenir shop in the town, and sometimes takes extra jobs at other shops like candy shops.
While traveling through the forest, she came across a small red fox being hunted for its hide, so she saved it and the companion continued to travel with her.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!" [Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel! [Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel. [Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat" Take that, Lumi.
I think GriffinKeeper is starting the SB. He said today but he's not on now [not sure which time zone he's in]
He said there was a surprise so probably best to wait
Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing." Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."
I think now would be a good time to review the first post, in which specific rules were given.
1. Write well. 2. Write coherently. 3. Write often. 4. No dangling conversations. 5. No boring repetition. 6. No casting magic (a single weak magical item only.)
These rules are explained in the first post, so if you're unsure what they mean, then please look there. Violations concerning member conduct (flaming, etc.) will be reported to Big Brother.
Another reminder: if a post is deemed by another author as being badly written and incoherent, then that author can say that the post will be ignored and will proceed to write as if it had never happened. This is to prevent bad writing from gumming up the works. In order to prevent this from happening to you, I strongly urge you to run your posts through a spelling and grammar check and then read your post carefully before submitting. That way you don't use "there" instead of "their."
This storybook has all the makings of a good storybook. It has a good structure, good characters, and a good plot. A good, no, an awesome storybook isn't about profiles, plot, or characters necessarily, it is entirely dependent on the team of authors. So, if you are struggling for ideas, brainstorm with other members, or send me a PM. I'm only a click away.
Love it.
whoops... my fault, though I fixed everything...give me a second... fixing... okay done, it is edited
