Seven Deadly Sins

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Pan~ Wow, I had no idea how many beautiful women Jake was aquainted with. One of them looked at me and simply having her look at me made me blush. Finially, the movie started, saving me from further embarrasment. About halfway through the movie, my phone vibrated. I quickly opened it, it was a text from the girls, asking me where I was. I stood up quickly and grabbed what was left of my food. "Gotta go," I mumbled before taking off.
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Jake

"Wait," I said, grabbing Pan's hand. I didn't want her to go, it had been fun. I mean, even though it was awkward with Samorn...but Pan deserved better friends than those girls.

"Please stay," I said, looking into her eyes.

She slowly nodded, "But, I have to go text them back," she said.

I nodded back and watched as she left. Samorn rolled her eyes and suddenly was cuddling with my arm. "Finally, she's gone." She put her lips to my ears and whispered some seductive, flirty words that had never been whispered to me before, even though I knew girls thought about it.

"Samorn..." I whispered, but I couldn't say anymore, her mouth was smashed against mine. I closed my eyes as I tasted her minty breath and her sweet scent rolled into my nostrils. "Samorn," I moaned her name now, and she began kissing me more feverishly, our mouths now working in sync.

I heard a gasp from behind and quickly pulled away. I turned and saw Pan standing there, even though the theatre was dark, I could see the pain in her eyes. Tears could be seen shining and I felt a dagger stab into my heart.

"Pan! Wait!" I called, disrupting the others in the movie theater. I saw the girl, Lilith, who had talked to Samorn looking at us, along with the guy.

I quickly got up from my chair, but Samorn pulled me back. "Oh come on, who needs her?" she purred, tracing my jaw.

"I do," I whispered and stood up, running after Pan.

Lilith

"Pan! Wait!" I heard the guy, Jake call and turned to look at him. Samorn was clinging to his arm and he quickly stood up. I could see them struggling, then finally he left.

Samorn, Lust, came over to us and sat next to Dougie, me on the other side of him. "Can I join you? My party sort of left without me."

I rolled my eyes, that was Lust for you. "Why not?" I said, glaring at her as she sat next to Dougie.

She put her arm on his arm rest, bumping his arm. "Oops, sorry."

"Don't mention it," Dougie said, smiling at her.

"Humph," I said and quickly grabbed Dougie's hand. I quickly placed a kiss on his cheek, making his cheek redden. Samorn stared at me, envy flaring in her eyes. I chuckled in my mind, it looked like I could even make a sin jealous.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
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For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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Dougie

What is up with this town? Was everyone nuts? I chuckled to myself at the thought. Not that I didn't appreciate it. I mean, there were two freakishly hot girls sat next to me, after all.

The girl that had just sat next to me put her arm on my armrest. As she did so, she accidently knocked mine off.

"Oops, sorry." She apologised, looking at me.

"Don't mention it," I grinned back.

Wow. She really was nice. The next thing I knew, Lilth grabbed my hand and kissed me on the cheek. My face turned even redder than it already was. Now this was a good way to spend my day.

"So," The girl next to me said. "What's your name then?"

"Dougie," I smiled at her. "You?"

I couldn't help but notice Lilth glaring at her as we spoke. It kind of bugged me that it took another girl talking to me, to make Lilth act like she was actually interested in me.

"Wow, that's a really cool name," The girl put her hand on my lap. I heard Lilth mutter something under her breath. "I'm Samorn, by the way." The girl continues.

Before I could say anything else, Lilth interrupted. "Dougie,"

I turned around to face her. Suddenly, her lips were touching mine. As she moved her soft, thin lips, mine quickly followed.

And I thought this day couldn't get any better.
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Samorn|Sin-Lust:

I was very iritated when Jake ran off after that silly girl. Now the humans were spoiling my fun! Could it get any worse?

I sighed and joined Envy and her little toy, muttering absently to them as she made me jealous and I made him lust. Suddenly she kissed him on the lips, which made me really mad.

I shot her a glare and got up, leaving the cinema. Even other sins were no fun.

I left the theatre at a slow pace, spotting Jake and the girl, Pan. Pan was trying to brush him off while Jake was appologizing to her. I had actually liked Jake. He was very lustful all of a sudden.

Grinning, I snorted and walked off. I was soon at a warehouse I didn't recongise.
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Pan: I texted the girls back, telling them that I was home sick with the Flu. I don't know why I told them that, I'm usually not one to lie. Well, that was a lie. I walked back in the movie, a little bit giddy about telling Jake about what I did. I don't know why, I mean, I just met the guy, but somehow I needed his approval. I ran up to our seats, the smile I wore hurt my cheeks. "Jake," I panted," Jake, I..." I stopped cold, caught off guard by the sight of Jake locking lips with...with... Tears flowed over the edge like a water hose, they showed no sign of stopping. I turned around and ran away, ignoring him calling my name. --- " Pan, please," he said. " Please, just forgive me," he begged. I could barely make out the words through the sound of my own tears. I shook my head and took a few steps back. I can't believe this. I can't... " No," I said through my tears," it's okay," I put out my hands and waved him away. " I'm fine, enjoy the movie." I ran away...he didnt follow.
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May I join in? This shall be my first storybook join in ever and this one looked interesting! I'll take sloth! I hope it isn't already taken..If someone doesn't mind I would enjoy someone telling me what I have missed so far.

Name: Seth Sleeper

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Human, Sin, or Angel?: Sin.

Description: Black, thick, unruly hair that reaches down to the nape of his neck. Large brown eyes. Pale skin from being inside too much. Well built despite the fact that he is lazy.

Picture: None.

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): Seth represents sloth, which by nature makes him lazy. He will only participate in active activities if he really wants to. He is laid back and goes with the flow, which is quite frustrating for his friends. He does whatever he wants, on his own time.

History: Before all of this Seth was a college student who was incredibly intelligent but never had the drive to get far in life. He currently works at a coffee shop, although he only goes there for the free food.

Up for love? Yes. He can only commit if he really likes her though.

Other: Likes puppies and turtles. Dislikes girls who get worked up over nothing.
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Heyy :)

Name: (if your a sin such as lust choose a name that sounds lustful, and if an angel, something that sounds holy.) Rory Tapson

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Human, Sin, or Angel?: Human

Description: Very curious girl. She's smart and plans to be a journalist. She's pretty bubbly and averagely a happy person.

Picture: Later :)

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): N/A

History: Pretty boring. Was born. Grew up. Is now here. Has a younger sister and an older brother. Her mom is estranged and her father is single.

Up for love? Yupp

Other: She hates prissy people.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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[Kei] This is going to be a little long. Plot change!!

"You... you don't love me?"

"I'm sorry Kei... I just don't think we will work out..."

He turned and walked away. he walked away from me! No. I was the only one who walked away from people. I ran up and grabbed his hand. "Stop!" He turned around with an exausted look on his face. "Why don't you like me?"

He sighed. "You just... I will never be good enough for you! You think you're the best and that you deserve the best. I hate people like that! I hate people like you!"

I was taken back. No one had ever said that to me before! No one had ever... stood up to me. Be Aaron... he was the only boy who ever stuck by me, who I ever truly loved. I didn't want him to go.

"Please..."

"No, Kei. We're done... forever." He gave me one last painful look before turning around and never looking back.

----

I had looked all over the city for her. The Angel... the angel who could help me. Finally, I found her on the streets, sulking alone.

"Hey," I said and sat next to her. I didn't look at her. I didn't want her to know that I thought highly of her.

"Oh, hello Pride."

"I need to ask you something."

She stared into my eyes. "What?"

I sighed and looked off into the night sky above us. "I want to break the curse. I want to be the last person to ever be cursed with Pride."

"What?"

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Wrath-
Frustrated with my day's work, I dug the card out of my pocket again.I decided to follow it- why not? I came to a dingy old warehouse, one that had obviously been occupied by many different gangs over time. I slipped in through a window entrance, and sat on a dusty rafter, kicking my boots back and forth and scratching runs into my tights.After a while, I heard a door open, and looked down- it was Lust. I jumped the twenty feet down off the rafter and landed with a satisfying thud, releasing a cloud of dust around me. "Hello, Samorn." I said. "Fancy seeing you here."
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Samorn|Sin-Lust:

I flinched when Wrath dropped into the scene, literally.

"Hello, Samorn," She said. "Fancy seeing you here."

"Hello Wrath," I said and narrowed my gaze. "What're you doing here?"

"Same as you, I'd say," came the reply. "Judging by that card in your hand."

I yelped and hid the card behind my back. Wrath laughed and started circling me.

"Don't bother hiding it," she said and plucked it out of my hand. I sighed. Wrath was sometimes rather....confronting.

"I won't hide it then," I muttered and was saved from a fight when Federico walked in.

"Hello ladies."
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SETH(Sloth)

I awake from my wonderful nap to hear the rattle and chaos of the floor under the floor behind me. Why was there noise? I picked to live in an old warehouse because of that. The universe is so...loud. And energetic. Blah.

Me?

I just want to sleep. Sure, I could have picked a quiet apartment to live in, but then I would have to sign all those papers and talk to other humans. Besides, the occasional gangster doesn't bother me too much. But these people are loud! I crawl out of my sleeping bag and decide to interrupt them, only to realize I am only wearing my boxers.

Oh well. Who needs pants?

I walk down to where I hear the voices. I can't make their faces out but I can tell that they don't want to be heard. Too bad.

"Hey idiots," I say, "some people are trying to sleep here!"
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Jake

I walked back into the theater, my head hung low. Pan, she had been the one, not Samorn! I mean, yeah, Samorn was hot, but still...she was, different. The lights were still off, and I could see the girl Samorn had been talking to, Lilith, I think her name was, sucking the face off of some guy.

I sighed, and turned, walking right back out. I walked down the street and to the ice cream shop, where I had first met Pan. The memory brought a smile to my face, and that was when I nearly ran into her. Ava.

Lilith

"Dougie," I whispered, tracing my finger around his jaw. "Let's go somewhere private please...this movie is too...distracting." I put my lips to his again and we slowly walked out, our lips seeming to still be attached.

I could see his hope in his eyes, too bad, I was still the same old Envy, same old, same old. And I would never give that up, never.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf



A thing of beauty is a joy forever; its loveliness increases...
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