Seven Deadly Sins

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Okay, I know a few people who will join later. We can welcome in the stragglers later. Anywho, let's start!

Jake

I quickly stuck my key into the ignition, grateful to finally be out of the house. Seriously, I didn't know if I would be able to watch another episode of Days of Our Lives with my mom crying over a playboy.

I clicked the button, taking the top of the convertible off so I could feel the summer air in my hair. Ah, I loved summer. It was warm, sunny, and so care-free. I quickly backed out of the driveway, heading towards Jolly's Ice Cream Parlour. It was a fun place that kids from my high school always met up at. There was bound to be someone there, it was summer afterall. People would want to cool off.

(So, anyone wanna meet Jake?)

Lilith

I walked through the park, glancing at couples taking an afternoon stroll. I couldn't help but feel a pang of jealousy in my heart. I would have been like that, if it hadn't of been for my best friend...she stole everything from me.

Suddenly I was taken from my thoughts by a sniffling sound. I turned, seeing a girl huddled up on a bench. I walked over to the bench and sat next to her. "Are you okay?" I asked, a concerned mask on my face.

She looked at me with red, puffy eyes. She couldn't have been more than fourteen. She wiped away her tears quickly. "Yeah...I mean, you wouldn't understand."

"Try me," I said.

"Well, I really like this guy...like insanely like this guy. And...today he asked my best friend out."

I gasped, a fake of course. This same thing had happened to me...I had found my new target.

"Yeah, and she...she said no though."

"Well, she's a good friend."

"Yeah, but I still...I still can't help but feel jealous! Its so hard. My mom says I'm very envious."

I was careful that she wouldn't see my lips curving into a smile and forced them into a frown. "Of course you aren't. I mean, not as envious as some people."

"Like who?"

"Oh a lot of people. But being envious of course, isn't a bad thing."

"But its...its a sin."

"Who says?" I grinned, my blue eyes flickering.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Alrighty. Here's my profile.

Name: Samorn Amor.
Age: Looks to be around 18/19.
Gender: Female.
Human, Sin, or Angel? Sin, Lust.
Description: Sam has really light, bewitching brown eyes and red and black hair. Always wears black clothes or other dark colours...
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Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): Samorn is very into the love thing. :wink: She likes to toy with everyone she sees and often breaks hearts. She's also very, err, lustful.
History: She can't remember much of her past, but she can remember once being a normal human girl... Now she's just something that feeds on sex, love and lust.
Up for love? Of course. She's lust! Well, it might not always be love.... :xd:
Other: Samorn is a Thai name that means "beautiful and beloved" and Amor is a Latin name that means "Love". Sometimes Samorn thinks of herself as a monster.
"With friends like you, who needs a medical license?"
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Pan-
"Haha, of course," I chirped in with the other girls of my "clique". " The ice cream shop would be the perfect place to hang out," I flipped my hair over my shoulder and smiled. Kristen tugged on my hair a bit and frowned.
" Your hair is so drab, Pan," the other girls nodded in agreement and my stomach twisted into a knot. My hearing became fuzzy as I went over differnt hairstyles in my head. What now? What now... " You should get highlights!" I smiled weakly and flexed my fingers behind my back.
" W-what color?" Kris laughed and took me by the arm, pulling me through the doors of the icecream shop.
" What other color is there but pink," she chirped." Oh, there's a hair shop right around the corner," she pratically yelled." Be right back."
" Order us icecream," Jane said as she swooped out behind Kristen.
" You know what we like," Becca chirped in after her. And, with that, they were all gone. I sighed and dragged mysely up to the counter.
" Four butter pecan icecreams please, extra whipcream," I put on my best smile as the man turned away and quickly let it drop." I don't even like the color pink," I mumbled to myself silently. Well, I suppose I did now.
" If you don't like it, why didn't you say 'no'?" I turned around quickly at the sound of a voice behind me and blushed a deep red when I came face to face with a guy.
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Jake

"Why didn't you say no?" I asked, smiling at the girl. "And what are you doing with that much ice cream?"

"Ordering for my friends, or didn't you hear that?" she said.

"Oh. You're friends? They don't seem like friends to me. But that could be just me. Double cookie dough ice cream in a waffle cone please," I said, ordering my regular. "I'm Jake by the way."

"Pan," the girl said, smiling. Her eyes locked with mine and I turned away.

"Here are your ice creams," the jerk at the counter said, shoving the cones towards Pan. One fell on the floor, another on the counter. "Woops, clumsy," he said, rolling his eyes at Pan.

"Jerk," I mumbled, casting dirty looks at him. I quickly grabbed some napkins from the counter and wiped up the spilled ice cream.

"Th-Thanks," she said, taking the remaining ice creams to a table.

"Oh, and make my order two more pecans please," I said. Pan turned and looked at me in utter amazement. It was the least I could do.

The jerk wad quickly handed me my ice cream, and Pan came and grabbed the third cone. I took them to the table, careful not to spill them and went back to the counter, paying for three instead of one.

"Thanks," Pan said again. The bell on the shop rang and I turned, seeing the group of girls heading towards us.

I rolled my eyes. "You're friends are back. I better split," I said, standing up. I walked out to the door, and squeezed past the girls who were all staring at me, then at Pan. I couldn't help but smile. The ice cream shop had been the right place to be.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Ava~

I stared down at the group of people crowding around a small shop. I blinked at a few girls chattering loudly about hairstyles, they picked themselves up and walked into the shop one of them looked a little hurt.

"That's not very nice." I said to myself, watching the girl with black hair dissapear into the shop. Climbing down from the top of the tree I landed on the floor slinking back into the shadows burried around the trees.

I saw a blonde haired boy walk out of the shop, a satisfied smile across his face. I frowned there was something wierd about him. I raised an eyebrows, walking after him I stayed a few metres behind so he wouldn't notice.

I looked behind my shoulder to see the black haired girl staring at a small bottle two other girls were loudly chirping about. I turned back towards the boy, I gasped. He was gone! I began to quicken my step, excusing myself as I walked through a group of people.

Where had he gone!?
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Samorn|Sin-Lust:

Walking aimless was fun... Especially when I made random people lust after people they normal wouldn't lust after. I grinned and turned a corner. I felt like going somewhere now.... Hmm. Let's see... Ice cream shop? Yes, brilliant.

I was too busy thinking of how I could make people sin to realise that I had drifted off course... Suddenly I bumped into someone.

"Ouch,"I muttered and someone grabbed my arm, stopping me from falling over.

"Sorry," someone said. I looked up to see a young blond boy. Oh, now this was a challenge. He didn't lust much at all. I grinned at him.

"Oh, it's okay," I said, pushing my sunglasses back over my eyes. "I wasn't watching where I was going. My bad."
"With friends like you, who needs a medical license?"
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Jake

"Its okay," I laughed. "You heading in there?"

She nodded, "Well, I was...I mean until I bumped into you." The girl said in a flirty voice, touching my shoulder.

I looked at her skeptically, but didn't shrug the hand off my shoulder. "Well, beware, there is a huge group of phsyco girls in there. Only one isn't really phsyco, Pan. She's really nice."

I could tell the girl was rolling her eyes, she pulled off her sunglasses. She was attractive, but had kind of a...I don't know, flirty look to her.

"Hello!" a voice called, I turned. I saw a girl coming clumsily towards me, as if she had wings on her back. Her long white blond hair blew out in whisps behind her.

"Hey," I said as she reached us. The "flirtatious" girl narrowed her eyes at the newcomer. Huh, I thought.

"Well, it was nice meeting you," the first girl told me. "I'm Samorn by the way."

"Jake," I said. Samorn walked past me, her hand brushing my thigh. I turned, watching her walk into the ice cream shop.

"I'm Ava," the second girl said, sticking out her hand. I turned, I had almost forgotten she was there.

"Oh! Hey," I shook her hand. She was very pretty, but so were the other two girls I had met that day. But there was...something different about this girl. Her icy blue eyes locked with mine for a moment, but I tore my gaze away. The look had, given me a warm feeling in my heart...it was different, innocent.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Lilith

I walked through the park. I had given the girl some advice, along with some new words that had made her even more envious. But hey, that was my job.

"Oof!" I said, apparently I had run into someone. I looked at the boy with deep blue eyes.

"Sorry," he said. "I should watch where I'm going." I looked at him, trying to peer into his mind, as sometimes us sins could do. Hmm, a misbehaver. I thought.

"Oh, its okay," I said, smiling. "I'm Lilith," I held out my hand and he shook it.

"Douglas, but you can call me Dougie."

"Dougie," I smiled.
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Kiff-
I sat on top of the building and looked down at the people below me. So many possible masters, so many people to guard. Where to start? Where to start...
I jumped down from the building and let myself freefall a bit before spreading my wings and landing, softly, in an alley. I quickly ran over to the park and blended with the people there.
It was quiet today, peaceful, just how I liked it. A loud noise came from up ahead, the sound of two people fighting. I quickly got up and walked over to an arguing couple.
" Don't lie to me, Bobby," the girl screamed," I saw you with her! You dirty, no-good, lazy, useless, son of a-" I put my hand gently on her shoulder, cutting off her rant. She looked up at me with confused eyes and I just smiled down at her.
" What seems to be the problem here, ma'am?" She scowled at me.
" None of your business, I'm sure."
" See, that's your problem, Janice, your such a brat!" She turned to the guy and started yelling obscenties at him. I closed my eyes and thought calmly.
" If you two are having issues, I'd be happy to help."
" Listen up, buddy-"
" Let him talk, sheesh," the guy cut in." Well, anyway, Janice over here thinks I was cheating on her, which I honestly wasn't!" Janice threw Bobby a cold stare that just made me shudder. So much hate...
" Of course you weren't, you just go around hugging random girls!"
" It was just a hug," I inturrpted," I'm sure it meant nothing. I can tell he really loves you, give him another chance." Bobby took Janice's hands in his own and looked down.
" I really do, Jan, and it just kills me that you don't believe me..." I sat back on the bench, listening intently on their conversation, and offering advice when they needed until their problems were resolved. After everything was solved I got up, said my goodbyes, and started off for a good treat. Problem fixing really made me hungry...((Phew!))
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Samorn|Sin-Lust:

I walked off and into the Ice Cream shop. Stupid angels, I though. Why do they always have to ruin my fun?

I looked around and grinned. This was perfect. I sauntered over to the counter and ordered some ice cream. The boy behind the counter was staring at me.

He handed me the ice cream and I went and sat down at a table in the corner. I took note of all the boys watching me and getting glared at by their girlfriends. I laughed and started eating my ice cream.
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Kei

Of course. Of course, of course!

I was off having the best day of my life -an amazing shopping spree, gorgeous guys- and an angel shows up. Well, at least she didn't see me. She was too busy shaking hands with some boy. Some human boy, no less.

I hadn't been doing anything wrong! I am expressing my Pride perfectly! But, I guess it's time for me to take a human under my wing. But who's gorgeous enough to become Pride? Who is amazing enough to be trained by me? I just have to find them... whoever they are.

But, my nails are still fresh, so I can't strain them! So... coffee? I think yes.

I pass the ice cream shop -way to many calories- and slip into Starbucks. After reviving my coffee, I look for my next victim. Who could it be?




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Pan-
" I wanted pink," Kristen complained.
" I wanted blond," Becca whined.
" And I wanted purple," Jane said somberly.
" Sooo," Kristen interjected with a bright smile on her face," we got all three!" I died for two seconds before my heart started up again.
" All t-three," I asked shyly. Kristen danced around me, waving the hair dye boxes around like a trophy.
" Yep, yep, yep," she squealed." You're gonna get three highlight strips in that oh-so-dull plain black hair of yours."
" You're going to look fabulous, honey," Jane laughed.
" Just fabulous," Becca sighed as she pushed me down into the hairdresser's chair. "Now just wait a while, this is going to be quick." - - - -
I stood in the mirror with a look of forced happiness on my face.
" It looks wonderful," I mumbled, trying to sound excited.
" Amazing!"
" Spectacular!"
" Gorgeous!" I smiled at them and ruffled my hair a bit.
" Thanks guys," I laughed to cover up the cracking of my voice," it looks fantastic! Really."
" Oh no problem, Pan," Kristen said while checking her watch." Ohmigawd, its time for our tanning session," she grabbed Becca and Jane. " You know, you should come tan with us sometime, Pan, you're a bit pale." My stomach twisted but I smiled and nodded.
" I'll remember that, bye girls." The said their goodbyes and hurried out the door, as soon as I saw their car pull off, I ran out the salon to the park, plopping myself down on one of the benches and allowed myself to cry. I hated it. I hated it! My hair, what did I let them do to my hair?! I gave up and wiping my eyes and put my head in my hands, letting my tears smear my eyeliner all over my cheeks.
" Oh no, my eyeliner," I cried absently, which only made me cry harder. I've becoming just like them! That's a good thing though...right? I'll fit in. It's a good thing! But, even so, my tears still flowed, even harder than before.
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Dougie

"Sorry," I apologised. "I should watch where I'm going."

The red haired girl smiled. "Oh, it's okay. I'm Lilth,"

"Douglas," I replied. "But you can call me Dougie."

"Dougie," Lilth said happily.

I had just been on my way to Starbucks, but I'd taken the short cut through the park. My dad was really getting on my nerves. Apparently, a boy my age should be interested in football, not music and dance. I might actually pretend I'm gay to annoy him, I chuckled to myself at the thought.

"Okay..." Lilth began giggling, showing her perfectly white teeth.

Wow. I must have looked like a nutter.

"Sorry, I don't belong in an asylum." I laughed. "I just tend to act like I should be..."

Once again, Lilth chuckled. As I looked at her carefully, I noticed how pretty she actually was. Her hair was fire red and she had the nicest blue eyes.

"Hey," I began. "Fancy coming to Starbucks with me?"

I'll do Tori's later, I've got to go now. Include her, if you want
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Ava~

I let go of his warm hand and smiled. He seemed nice enough, I felt the hairs on my neck stand on end as the girl had pushed past me. What was her name? Samorn. Something about her gave me the tingles.

"I haven't seen you at school, are you new here?" I heard Jake ask a friendly smile across his cute face. I blinked breaking out of my thoughts.
"School?" I blinked nervously, I had heard that word before somewhere...but where?
"Yeah you know, the thing you go to to learn?" I felt my cheeks redden in realisation. Oh gosh, i'm such an idiot!

"Ha, yeah I am just messing with you." I said quickly, Oh real smooth Ava. "I'm new here, yeah just rolled in."
Jake began to nod, a small glimmer in his eyes. I felt my ears perk, someone was watching me.

Scanning around I tried to find a pair of suspicious eyes. I stopped, What was I doing? I had walked into the human path's. I was talking to a human! I was practically signing Jake's death warrant.

I began to turn around quickly my heart skipping a beat, "Hey are you okay?" Jake asked he grabbed onto me trying to stabalise my body before I fell in a frightened heap. I almost screamed at his touch, "No" I said quickly recovering as he pulled back his hands hastily.

"I'm fine" I gave a nervous laugh. "I'll see you around okay, I have to go." I turned and began to run my heart jolting.

"See you around." I heard him call, I stumbled over a rock ignoring the pain shooting up my toes; I'm so sorry Jake!
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Nemesis-

I sat on a park bench, looking around anxiously for my next victim.A girl came along, and sat sobbing on the bench across from me.I smiled slightly, and walked over.
"What's with your hair?" I started. The girl looked up.
"My...friends made me dye it."
"Well, then, they aren't very good friends, now are they?"
"Well...."
"So why would you ever hang out with a bunch of over-rater b****es who make you do crap to yourself?!" I part said, part hissed at her, getting worked up.
"I-"
"You? You nothing. Donn't cry like some little kid. Be angry. Go get revenge!" The girl stopped crying.
"What's your name?"I asked.
"Pan." She said back.
"Well, Pan... do you happen to know where your friends are going?" I whispered.
"Tanning, I think."
I grinned. "Don't waste such an opportunity. Go now. And see what they look like if you just... accidentally turn up their heat by a few degrees. Teach them that you are not someone to be messed with!" I said.
"But.... they're my only friends..." she murmured.
"But they're my only friends!" I mimicked in a high squeaky voice. "You'll just have to find some new ones. Or, if you do a good enough job and don't get caught, perhaps you can stick around with them... There's more revenge to be had than just turning up the heat in their tannin booths."
"You're right. I am kind of angry." she said, standing up. I smiled. My work here was done.
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