Seven Deadly Sins

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Okay! I came up with a storybook...it may have been done before though...but anyways...okay!

Plot

There are seven sins and seven humans in this plot. But the sins look like humans, just help the humans make wrong choices. There are also three angels, who help keep the humans out of trouble from the sins. Its set in Los Angeles and you can either be an angel, sin, or human. There can be any amount of humans, but only three angels and only seven sins. oh, and sins. You DO have a past. You became sins after you were taken over by the last sin holders.

Character:
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Name: (if your a sin such as lust choose a name that sounds lustful, and if an angel, something that sounds holy.)

Age:

Gender:

Human, Sin, or Angel?

Description

Picture:

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin):

History:

Up for love?

Other:


Sins/Angels in PINK!!! are taken.

Angel 1- LoVeLeSs
Angel 2- Apple
Angel 3

Pride- captain.classy
Lust- Scarlettfire
Envy- Forestqueen808
Greed - SunSetWest
Wrath- Dreamy115
Gluttony
Sloth- Esther Sylvester
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Name: Nemesis Red

Age:16

Gender:female

Human, Sin, or Angel?: sin, Wrath

Description: With bright red hair and dark, blue eyes, there's no doubting at a glance that she has a fiery personality.

Picture:
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but a bit younger

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): She is fiery, and nothing but. She takes everything as a personal challenge, and will get worked up about something as simple as saying hello. She loves when people fight and are angry, and she likes nothing better than to turn people against each other. In her opinion, anger is what fuels life.

History:She was living in an orphanage, and nobody wanted to adopt her because she got into so many fights and was generally hostile. Then, she was turned into a sin, and now lives wherever she wants. She typically lives on the streets. She has killed many gangsters and others who have angered her, and encourages others to do the some.

Up for love? no

Other: She is a pyromaniac
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Aww. I wanted Wrath. Well, I claim Lust! :D
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save a spot for an angel
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Name: Kiff Fealin
Age: Looks to be around 19
Role: Angel
Picture: http://0a.img.v4.skyrock.com/0a6/loiske ... 166310.jpg Short, blond hair and blue/green eyes. ((His angel extras-wings, halo...yeah, the usual.- are invisible to the human eye, unless he wants you to see them.))
History: He was born in Britian and was an older brother of four. He loved to take care of his siblings and everyone else around him. He was never greedy, cocky, or mean to anyone. One day, while he was reading a fairytale to a blind hobo((Hahaha, sorry, I just had to put that in somewhere!)), God just basically went KAHBLAM, gave him wings, a halo, and said: "Kiff, you're an angel now! Go save the world with your angelness!" And that's how it all began...
Personality: Nice to everyone but the seven sins. He likes to help people and loves animals((vegetarian)), he immediatly, with his other angel friends, tries to save any humans that fall prisoner to one of the sins. He was also try to get the sins to see the error of their ways, which really doesn't work out most of the time.
Other: Up for love and has a pet cat named Lumi that he always has with him.
Last edited by LovelessSummer on Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:37 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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I call greed! Must do paper I am avoiding...sigh.




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Name: Kei

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Human, Sin, or Angel: Sin (pride)

Description: She has long honey-colored curls. She's tall and has the 'perfect body.' Her curves look like they were shaped by god, and her face looks like that of an angel. Perfect, white porcelain skin, big blue eyes, and has a very good sense of fashion. Basically, she's the greatest human on earth. ;)

Picture: http://www.sliceofscifi.com/wp-content/ ... lively.jpg

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): She thinks she's the best. She looks down on everyone. She used to bully her sister and tell her how ugly she was compared to herself. She wonders how she is so beautiful because her parents are so ugly. She can trick any boy into doing anything. People of all gender and sizes and levels or beauty fall to their feet at the sight of her (or at least that's what she sees). She hates ugly people, or when people who are 'not worthy' or her talk to her. If she sees a girl who is even close to her beauty, she takes them down.

History: She was walking down the street one day, her nose to the heavens, when something happened. Her brain became overwhelmed with pride. She started to give nasty looks to everyone, and even pushed people down as she walked past them. Thus a monster was born.
Her family all hates her for the ways she used to mistreat them. They don't talk to her anymore, but she doesn't need them. She gets anything she wants.

Up for love? Psh... if anyone is good enough for her.

Other: Wants to be a fashion designer.




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Name: Federico Delfino

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Human, Sin, or Angel? Sin (Greed)

Description: Stands around 5'11 and weights 185 pounds. Always wheres a suit and tie or shirt and tie.

Picture: http://img.wallpaperstock.net:81/man-in ... 0x1200.jpg

Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): Federico is all about profit. "What is most profitable to me" is his personal motto. He is very business like and witty. He loves to think of interesting schemes to gain money, power, profit.

History: Federico is the second son to a low level mob boss. He grew up being taught to help run the family with his elder brother by two years Leonardo. He didn't like being the second son because it meant he got less of the benefits. At age 17 he left his family claiming "I'd be more profitable on my own. I don't need you any more." At age 19 he was hit with a greater desire for money, power, anything he wanted. To fulfil this 'desire' he started his own small gang and runs a swindling business.

Up for love? Sure, if he finds you worth the trouble.

Other: Is a smoker.




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This sounds cool! :)

Name: Victoria (Tori) Applegate

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Human, Sin, or Angel? Human, considering they're lacking :wink:

Description: Tori is a tall thin girl and is extremely pretty. She has dark green eyes and fire red hair.

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Personality: Tori is a pretty happy girl. She doesn't have the best home life, but she tries her best to get through it. Most of the time, she is kind, but she can get slightly annoying. She can't stand being told that she is wrong. When she does realise that she's wrong, she always makes up some bizarre excuse for why she is wrong.

History: Tori lives with her mother and younger brother. She's always looking after her brother because her mum has an alcohol addiction. Her father died in a fire when she was ten years old. She is very protective over her family.

Up for love? Yep.

Other: She likes to collect buttons. (Don't ask why, I just randomly decided to put that...)
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I am making my sin, Envy and also a human...since we are lacking humans as Skins said.

Name: Lilith Jenkins

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Human, Sin, or Angel? Sin, Envy

Description: Lilith has red wavy hair, that is very pretty. She also has bright blue eyes and thin cheekbones.

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Personality (if your a sin talk about the sin): She has always been jealous. She has been known to hurt for something she wants, especially with guys and shoes and shopping. She is a preppy girl who loves shopping, but she wants everything, everything that "everyone" has.

History: When she was around fifteen, her boyfriend shattered her heart by going out with her best friend secretly behind her back. But she soon fell for another, who only wanted her best friend. It went on and on, until she got too envious and suddenly became a sin.

Up for love? If its a good sin maybe...




Name: Jake Lewis

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Human, Sin, or Angel? Human

Description: He has blond hair and gorgeous blue eyes. His is thin, but still has some muscles. :wink:

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Personality: He is a very nice guy. He knows how to not intrude on other people's buisness and if someone says, "leave me alone," he will. He is known at his school as one of the nicest guys and is best friends with all the girls. He is also considered "the ideal guy" but...he hasn't really found any girl he likes.

History: Jake's dad died when he was five in a car accident. Since then he has been raised by his overprotective mother. She loves him to death, but sometimes he can hear her crying at night still over his father. She gets drunk a lot, and that is one reason why he tries to keep girls happy. He feels that even if he can't make his mom happy, he can make the other girls in his life happy.

Up for love? Sure
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Oh and guys, by the way, I decided, since most of them are like...not all in high school, this will be taking place in the summer. :D Californian Summer!!! Woot Woot! Anyways, yeah...we should be able to start soon...oh and if you could, if we don't get any more humans, maybe you can double up? :xd:
Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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I'll make a human!
Name: Pan Balon
Age: 17
Role: Human
Apperance: She has long black hair, deep blue eyes, a small frame, and a peach((kind of)) complexion. http://www.gothme.net/data/media/18/image004.jpg
Personality: She's whatever others want her to be. She doesn't really have a place, she does whatever people want her to do as long as she thinks she's fit in. She's been changing so much over the years that she doesn't even know her true self anymore. She's unsure of herself and would do whatever to please others.
History: Her mother adopted her from an orphanage in Texas when she was three years old. Her mother, Tessa, was in search for a perfect daughter. So ever since she was young, she was being molded to fit the expectations of others. When she entered highschool, it just got worse. She was constantly being sculpted, twisted, molded and re-modeld to the satisfaction of others.
Other: Up for love, if you can break the mold.
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I'll double up :)

Name: Douglas (Dougie) Lovett

Age: 17

Human, sin or angel: Human

Description: Dougie is a good looking teenage boy. He has light blonde hair and deep blue eyes.

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Personality: Dougie is a very laid back guy. He doesn't care about much at all. He can be very funny at times and always cheers people up. He tends to be weary of people though, which makes him judge them before he gets to know them. He also hates it when people call him Douglas.

History: Both his parents died when he was young. At the age of five, he was adopted by a couple who couldn't have their own children. He doesn't get along with his adoptive father very well, and he has a tendency to misbehave a lot.

Up for love: Sure
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Name: Ava Lucan

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Human, Sin, or Angel?: Angel

Description: Long white wings that are too big for her. She stands tall though not massive, with long blonde white hair, and ice blue eyes.

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Personality (if you’re a sin talk about the sin): Very innocent and caring, Ava tries her best to look after everyone. When she is with someone she cares for she can be very mischievous (though not in a bad way, in a playful way)

History: Ava is an angel of God who came down to Earth to protect humans as much as she can. Ava is searching for the one person she wants to be a guardian of, though she hasn’t found them yet.

Up for love? Yes

Other: She usually hovers across the ground when she is alone.
I spy!



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