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Okay, to level things out, I'll make a . . . guy angel?

Name: Deus Regis

Age: 17

Personality: Deus is possibly one of the worst angels in history. He has a horrible temper, a cruel mind and has quite a sharp tongue as well. However, he is good inside and he knows eaxctly when rights crosses the line into wrong. And that is why he was chosen to help on Earth - when a demon tries to get someone to chose a side through horrible means angels can fight fire with fire. He can be charming, at times.

Appearance: Deus is the tall dark handsome stranger you wouldn't walk into a dark alley with. With ragged black raven hair, a slight tan - more olive than brown, brown eyes which seem like they can see into your soul and the height of a basketball player, he's got the looks which immediately you avoid or secretly admire.

Race: Angels

History: As a new angel-to-earth initiate, Deus has only been on Earth when he was alive. And that was a while ago. He was chosen as an experiment to see if fighting fire with fire would work.

Power: Deus can see into your soul to see what you're feeling and can gauge the purity of it.

Other Dimension Appearance: Deus, in the other dimension, appears to be a dense black mist which at times flash his normal eyes in random places. If he tries he can usually pull himself into some sort of a shape.

Good? :P
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Well, I'll make a boy too. :smt003

Name: Stark Desin
Age: 17
Personality: Very nice, and loves to help others. Gets personally offended when he sees someone else being bullied or made fun of. He has an forever-present instinct to speak his mind, which gets him in trouble sometimes. He seldom ever lies, he sees it as a dirty habit.
Apperance:http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_yqQJe8VD5Ek/RuEqB4tSNrI/AAAAAAAAAQE/hWyLKqekg7U/s320/6279338.jpg
Other world appearance: http://a.bebo.com/app-image/7924880733/5411656627/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/04/14/wolf_angel.jpg
Race: Angel
Power: Can turn into mist. Like if he was tied up he could turn into mist then regenerate somewhere else.
History: Has always been the bullied one when he was a kid. That was the reason he feels so compelled to help others. He doesn't want anyone to go through what hes been through.
Other: Up for love..(so is Mayce)
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* :lol: It's beginning to look like all the bad guys are demon chicks and all the good guys are angel dudes. I think there are only one girl angel and one boy demon. :P*
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OK, I'm just making a human now.

Name: Justin Hamilton

Age: 17

Personality: He's vicious, constantly pushing kids smaller and younger than him around. He's sarcastic, mean, and petty. He's convinced he's God's gift to women, and struts his stuff like a peacock. He really dislikes Switchkey, whom he believes is gay. He also has a lot of money, which he flaunts. Secretly has a crush on Abbey, and acts like a jerk to her in the belief that all girls like bad boys.

Appearance: He's good-looking in a laidback way, dark hair ruffled, facial features a bit like James Dean. His structure is muscular, tall; he works out, and is in the basketball team. He generally wears leather and jeans.

Race: Human

History: Justin grew up spoiled, convinced that whatever he wanted, he would get. His parents just stopped caring about him, gave him whatever he wanted so he wouldn't bother them. At high school, he started selling drugs, his idea of an 'allowance'. He throws parties, where all the wild things happen. Deep down, he just wants to have someone care about him.

Power: None

Other Dimension Appearance: None
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

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Well, its looking like a good crowd so far. I always get nervous though because people always drop out really quick....yeah, I'm talking to you....lol. OK, anyways, just please don't drop out until its very solid and up and running. Here's my profile.

Name:Leo Valentine
Age:16
Personality: He is a overall friendly person, and extremely smart. His parent's constant pressure to make him succeed is his fault. He will do almost anything to please them. He also has a dark personality when he fails. His laughter turns into hate and his urge to succeed turns into an urge for revenge.

Appearance: He is mid-size, and has long brown hair. He is pretty pale, but he has fine tuned muscles. His eyes are pale green, almost yellowish, and he almost always wears skinny jeans, and a black t-shirt.

Race: Human

History: His IQ is far off the charts, as well as his deductive skills. His mind can cause trouble because he seems to know everything. When he was 12 years old. he was thrown out of Harvard for taking speed pills so he could study longer. He decided to stay low, and act like a normal kid and go to a normal school. NObody but his closest friends know how smart he is.

Power:none

Other: watch out, he's dangerous
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oh, and could everybody star this forum.
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I made a dt, check it out.
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So for my second character,I'll make a girl

Name: Gabrielle Channing

Age: 17

Personality: She's very clever and fun around her friends, she's shy at first but very fun once you get to meet her better. She's really nice and likes to help people, and doesn't really matter if that puts her in danger. She's upfront and direct, she doesn't like to be fooling around because that means distraction which makes demonic activity higher and she just can't do that. She's also too trusty and even if she doesn't want it, she is and that brings her problems. That brought her problems in the past but still she doesn't learn that she can't rust humans or demons. She likes music, well, she's an angel, she likes playing guitar and is really good at it. Acting human for her is not easy and sometimes she's more human than angel so her insecurities surface. As a girl that she is, she had issues with her appearance.

Appearance: She's really tall , with beautiful alabaster white skin and big round blue eyes. She's very skinny and has long legs and arms, but still has a nice body. She has long blonde wavy hair that falls unevenly to her back.
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Race: Angel

History: She was borned and angel and lived in heaven for many years until she was sent to earth to protect humans because the demonic activity on earth was increasing. Gabrielle was sent to protect one specific human, a boy around her age to she fell in love. That was against the rules and she learned the hard way why. He betrayed her and left her, but never knew she was an angel. Gabrielle was really hurt and being on earth made her be more human than she wanted to. She asked God to finish with her existence but her request was reused. after many years her pain stopped and she could continue with her life and she was requested to take care of humans again, but she promised to herself to never be to close to humans. That's why she never really shows how she really is and doesn't really trust humans.

Power: She'll discover it, eventually.lol

Other Dimension Appearance: She grows wings and her eyes change from blue to a strange shade that has purple, black and green.

Other: UP for love and friendship.
Does someone want to be friends with her?
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Stark could be friends with Ms.Channing.
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Gabrielle sounds like Merle's angelic twin sister.
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Yay! two friend requests, Gabrielle is honored, thrilled, excited. So Gabrielle can be friends with Merle and Stark. It coul be quite interesting.

Question number two: Does someone want to be friends with Race? please **puppy eyes**
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valentine will be friends will race
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Thanks!!
so when are we starting?
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read dt
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~*Mayce*~

I walked into the front doors of the building I hated so much. The halls were swarmed with confused freshmen, and, just for the hell of it, I tripped one of them. A round of laughs erupted from somewhere behind me and I let a small smile creep onto my face.
"They'll join us one day," I whispered," It's only a matter or time." I turned around and met the still laughing face of some soon-to-be demons and flashed them the sweetest smile I could manage. Which was probably still scary 'cause they stopped laughing.
I continued walking towards the cafe so I could receive my schedule. My friends should be there by now. I wouldn't know.
When I burst into the cafe everything was loud and annoying. I walked over to a random teacher and put my hand on his shoulder.
"Hey, quiet these children down." Almost instantly he yelled for everyone to shut up. The once overbearing noise of the cafe was tuned down to a dull roar. I smiled and found the table with the other demons.
"Sup?"
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