Darkness! (part two of Gone trilogy)

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Name: Edward Smith

Age:13

Appearance: 5'6 has black hair,brown eyes, he's Latino and still retains some of the accent.

Personality: When he first began noticing his powers he was afraid for anyone find out because then they might make fun of him but now ever since the big battles between the coates kids and the Peridido Beach kids he's been eager as ever to help the effort.

Ability: teleportation. He can teleport far distances but it takes a lot of energy out of him.

Side: Peridido beach

Back ground: His parents sent him to coats academy and after the adults disappeared everything fell to chaos. He quickly joined the peridido beach side as the only healer.

Other: not much to else to say.

*ok, as soon as Jok makes his profile there should be as many peridido beach kids as their are Coats Academy kids so we can start then*
Last edited by Ray112 on Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:51 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sounds great I cant wait to start
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Are we doing rational abilities or superhuman? If superhuman, I need to change a profile...
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I want to do superhuman as a little creative liberty. But rational profile's are okay.
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Sorry I'm quite new what is the difference between the two?
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Superhuman is a superpower, like invisibility, shapeshifting...etc. Rational abilities are just things you're really good at. (i.e. amazing dancer, singer, marksman...etc.)
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Forever Threnody wrote:Superhuman is a superpower, like invisibility, shapeshifting...etc. Rational abilities are just things you're really good at. (i.e. amazing dancer, singer, marksman...etc.)

Thank you for clearing that up
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Can someone randomly make a dude on the Coates side named Tyler who would be Melinda's twin. Cus if you don't I'll have to and I don't think I can manage two characters when I have 2 other storybooks and my other writing plus midterms and everything to deal with so if you can randomly make a DUDE ON THE COATES SIDE NAMED TYLER I will appreciate it. Thanks :)
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I can help you out, jessica.

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I'm not going to make a new character, but if you need some traitor-seeming brother, I'll change my own character's original name to Tyler. People on the Coates side don't know a thing about my character, and honestly, neither do I. Making Buds into your character's brother can give a little more of a backstory for me, and more fun during the storybook.


I don't know why I spoilered this. I felt like it, let's go with that.

Hope we can start soon!

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I'm fine with this, but I'd rather have the different power. I'm fine with changing Buds into a 14 year old twin, but not a clone. I just gotta keep the invisibility.
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well i tell you what guys. We can start and then allow people to still join. if you'd like.
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Sounds good to me!
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sure
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Thanks for the offer Howler but I think I'll make Tyler myself and let someone else take over him. :) When will we start?
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*Sorry Ray I was trying to think of a half decent character and failed. I'll just give the basics and make up his personality as I go along*

Name: Jim 'Elmo'

Age: 14

Appearance: Black hair that he keeps well looked after. He mostly just wears a red hoodie with Elmo on the front and some tightish brown jeans.

Abilities: He has a collections of abilities that are all mostly the same, Super reactions are one of his best advantages when he's in a fight really using them or just in general he feels like everyone's moving in slow mo while he's in real time. His other abilities are super senses and vision.

Side: Peridido beach

History: Just your average guy parents weren't spectacular he was just a normal guy. He's know as quite the tracker at Peridido beach kind of the contrast to Will Murry they seem to stay away from each other and have only fought a few times.




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Hey Jok101 you can only have one ability but if your ability is enhanced senses then I guess that's ok, but the description of your ability was kinda confusing to me so I was just hoping that you'd clarify... Anyway lets start guys. Who would like to volunteer and go first?
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