Hello, im a new member

Hi everybody. Well let me just get to the point. I joined this website because I wanted people to read pieces of a novel that I have been working on for over four months. My plan is to finish it before I turn eighteen, which is less than a week away. My novel is told in the third person omniscient point of view from five teenagers. Three boys, two girls. Four of the kids are troubled. One is suicidal. The story begins with all kids having the same mysterious dream, upon the point that they wake up I tell the reader a little about them. As the story progresses it becomes increasingly dark.
At the mid point of the story they book takes a huge turn. I have recently submitted pieces of my book on the teenink website, but so far none have been posted on the site, they are still in the approval process. A very, very long process. Bye, and if anybody has any questions let me know.

Wow, your story sounds epic!
Anyway, welcome to YWS! It's so cool you could join our website.
Anyway, please PM me when you've posted bits of the story! I'd love to review

-Ellie

Thanks, and yes the story does become quite intense for various reasons that I won't tell here. An author spoiling his own work is a criminal to literature.

Welcome to YWS AM.

Please do let us know on how your novel develops! Everyone will do their best to help you!
I wish you the best and if you ever want to chit chat, send me a PM.



Kamas

You're novel sounds awesome. I'm into the whole darkness dream thing and the two novels I am working on are dark also. Anyway,on this site we would love to give you feed back and tips. We are quite good at critiques . I hope you like it here. Now for some wonderful questions.

What's your favorite color?
Do you use outlines for you novel?
Who's your favorite cartoon super hero?
What's your favorite number?

PM me if you have any questions or just want to talk. I won't bite, promise.
~peanut~

My favorite color is blue. My favorite life shortening food is pizza. My favorite number is three. My favorite cartoon hero is batman, (I'm glad his newest Blockbuster was successful). I hate my hometown. I hate the school I go to. I hate the society degrading music that is in style today, (It's really affecting todays youth). My least favorite color is pink. My least favorite food is very likely cheese in it's standard form, (It's funny how when it's on pizza it becomes mouth watering). My least favorite cartoon hero may very well be Batman Beyond, (That guy was pointless he really ruined my liking of Batman as a kid).
I enjoy writing, obviously that's why I joined this website.

-Thank you

Hello there Adrian (mind if I call you that?)
Welcome to YWS, first off. I'm JustDance but you can call me JD.
So I read your biography since it had a bit more about your story. Overall I think it sounds very interesting, and intriguing to me.
I would love to read it once all the basics have been done, and it's been edited.
Any agents you've thought of so far to help you publish this story of yours?

Well, anyways. PM me for any questions, or a good chat!
-JD

Welcome to YWS! If you ever need help with writing or such, just PM me.
Tata for now!
-Mizzle

Seconded on the intriguing comment! And good luck for you finishing your novel! Less than eight days is quite a lot... and a whole novel! Also, because you'll probably have to revise and everything... don't fear. Just write whatever comes to your head. First drafts are supposed to be awful. That's why we edit. Unfortunately, as I am finding out with my novel, editing can take a long, long time! However, we can, of course, help you on your journey.

See you around on the forums! If you need any help, feel free to bug me!