House of Night

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"So this is the House of Night...kinda creepy." She thought out loud to herself as she stepped out of her gold two-seater. She pushed the door to the car shut, and leaned against its long hood. Looking at the enormous building they called a school, she wondered how many people live here. The principle, or whatever, had contacted her and told her that this school would "suit her needs" as a teenage vampire. Whatever.

"Well, time to go inside, I suppose." She moved around to the back of the car, opened the hatch, and grabbed her bag. Closing it, she glanced at her car, then headed up to the school. She pushed open the large front door, sticking her chewed piece of gum on the inside of the lock so the door would stay open. No need to throw her gum on the ground...

After speaking to the "principle," she was pointed in the direction of her dorm. Eventually, she found it and walked inside, dropped her bag next to her bed, and headed back out to explore the school.
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wow, I miss for half a day and it's already two pages. God?

Serena
She watched how Scarlett was fighting with each of the creatures there, apparently she had this something that made other creatures averted to her. But I was too confused and thirsty to even pay attention to that. As formally as I oculd, I tried to talk to them. Now Jonathan was there too.

"Can we stop this?" I said, gasping. Isaac turned to her and burned her with her flaming eyes. She was never a big fan of Alans and if this wanted to fight she was going to give it to him.

"Seemes like your other friend is talking" Isaac told Scarlett with his annoying sarcastic tone. She was thirsty, annoyed and angry, so if this Alan continued it was possible that he ended up like fried chicken.

"We just need to talk to Chris, ok? Some problem with that?" Serena said. "Chris can you please?" She asked politely trying to forget about this Isaac guy but still burning with the desire to burn Asher in his own flames.

Chris passed and reached them with Isaac's burning glare behind them. He seemed nice, a lot more understandable than those "parasites" behind them.
"You should bring Jonathan too" she told Scarlett.
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Matt - Vampire

He looked towards the commotion. Two vampires and a zombie, seemed to be Isaac's targets. He looked towards one of the vampire girls, her eyes were almost completely - he could tell if she didn't get a drink soon, she would probably die. He looked at her more closely, she was angry, but beautiful - the way her brown hair fell, her ivory white skin. He almost recognised her. Is her name...Serena. It was worth a shot.

He slipped behind Isaac inconspicuosly and managed to find his way to Serena.

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ummmm... I'm lost. Did everybody just run away from me?
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Maia - Alan

I sighed. "Can't you be a little more polite?" I asked. Loren shrugged and we headed towards the school. As soon as we had seen the wide open area outside of the school I had challenged her to a race. We hadn't bothered to go inside. We did so now, our talons scraping the floor. I looked around in mild interest. Then I crashed into someone.

"Hey, watch where you're going!" An annoyed voice said.

I took a step back, startled. "Oh, I'm..." I let out a hiss. "Vampire."

**Vampy is Koree. I'll let Amber take up from here because she's impatient and if I try going any farther it'll be two hours before I get this thing posted.**
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Taking her walk around the school, Koree was taking note of all of the buildings, trees, etc. Minding her own business, she headed out with no real interest. Suddenly, there was a scratch, talons? then a large body slammed into her, almost knocking her down.

"What the-?"

"Hey! Watch where you're going!" A guy with wings apparently thought it was her fault.
"Oh, I'm..." He hissed at her, "Vampire."

"Yeah, so what? Watch where you're going Big Bird. YOU ran into ME!" Koree turned and headed back in the direction she had come from, not feeling interested enough to argue with Feather Brains back there.
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Serena
As she was walking all of a sudden, she sensed something, a smell.It was this sweet aroma that even though it had this hint of vampire in it, it made her mouth watery. Her eyes began looking for the person or creature who had that smell. It was making her go insane almost, it was so sweet and exquisite, she began imagining the blood inher throat savouring each bit of it.

Serena had even forgotten about everyone all she heard were indistinctive murmurs. But as she took a deep breath, the smell became so strong thst she had to purse her lips and close her eyes. Instantly, she turned to se who it was. It was this guy who was walking behind her with pretty white skin and beautiful hair. She couldn't help but to stare at him for a while.

"YOu ok?" Scarlett sudenly asked her.

"Yeah, yeah" she said, turning away from the boy.
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Lilith - demon

The little party had somehow dispersed with only Isaac arguing with a few other students. Lilith didn't even get a change to mess with one of the leeches!

"Well, this was fun, but I think I can entertain myself better elsewhere," she said.

Asher didn't seem too interested, and even rather glad she would be out of his hair. Oh don't worry, Asher, I won't be gone forever.

Lilith started to walk away when she remembered something. She walked back to Asher and placed a slender hand on his shoulder, leaning close to his ear. "Oh, and you have one day to return my ipod, or there'll be trouble," she whispered in his ear.

This time as she walked away, she wondered if Asher took her seriously even in the slightest. Probably not, but he would soon learn to never mess with Lilith Jaymison. That is, if she didn't have her ipod back in her possesion by this time tomorrow.
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ill post tommarow, oh and scarlet, could you like interact with phelix, because you need to become friends. I post asap
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Sabina-werewolf


Andy lunged at her, her hands hot flames. Sabina slipped out of her chair and stepped to the side. Andy toppled over the chair.
“You have quite the temper, Andy,” Sabina said genuinely astonished. Andy stood firm on the ground. She blew away a strand of black hair from her face.
“Where is he?” She was madder then ever, her hands still aflame.
“Listen,” Sabina said calmly as if there wasn’t a half crazed demon in the room, “ I have a machine that can fix your precious jacket. The machine will literally make the leather regenerate. My machine will take the DNA from the brunt threads, it’ll be the exact same leather as it was before and I won’t have to touch it.”
Andy nose flared, she took a menacing step forward, “I want Ezra!”
Sabina looked at her and said almost motherly, “Let me fix it. And then I will give you Ezra.” She walked toward a bureau and pressed something under the sill of the bureau. One of the drawers slid out showing an eerie blue light. The drawer was made into a glass scanner. Andy flustered, her flames flickered. She glanced at the burnt hole on her jacket then at Sabina.
Sabina stared into Andy’s eyes, “I promise I won’t hurt your jacket.”
Andy’s flames went out. She took off her jacket but clutched it to her chest, “You promise you’ll give me Ezra?”
Sabina nodded and blinked slowly. She held her hands together in front of her, her black claws almost at the point of needling her hands. Andy placed her jacket on the glass scanner. The drawer shut. From a crack you could see the blue light scanning side to side and you could hear a soft hum as it worked. The drawer slid back out, Andy’s jacket in perfect condition. Andy picked it up and marveled at where the burnt hole had been, the machine had left no stitches, no marks, just her old beautiful jacket.
“Now where’s Ezra?” Andy put on her jacket, flames back on. Sabina pointed out the door.
“What! Don’t mess with me!” Andy set her jaw, her arms in flame throwing position. Sabina gave her a steel look that could have sliced someone in half.
“Don’t tell anyone about this. Believe me he is outside this door. Can’t you smell his hair dye?” Sabina stood in the same position, calm but annoyed. Andy for some reason believed her and stepped outside the door. A huge commotion stood before her. Andy looked back, Sabina was gone.


Sabina stalked through one of her passages, she rolled her eyes in the dark, “When are demons going to learn how to grow up!”


Is this ok? Can I put Andy in the middle of the commotion?
This time I actually had time to write so sorry if this is sort of long.
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**Er... Amber, Maia is a girl. ;)**
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oh, I'm terribly sorry mates. Just ignore it. =] :oops:
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**Teriaq - Werewolf**

I sighed. Yet another vampire had been added to the already swelling school. How marvelous. As if they didn't have enough fights going on, although, then again, without the fighting, where would I be? I decided to put my two cents into the fight between the new vamp and the alan.
"Wow. Nice comeback, leech," I snorted. It didn't get the effect I was looking for. Oh dear, it happened again.
I'd mistaken one blurry figure for another. And now, that blurry figure was angry. Not that I had to care. I just worried about the Swiss roll that needed stealing from the cafeteria. This fight was a waste of time. I cracked my knuckles, waiting for Mr. or Mrs. Blurry to attack.

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Isaac

He'd had enough. He would NOT me talked down to, and if it meant a fight, he was game for it. He lifted into the air and shot down the corridor, extending his feet to collide with Chris' back and slamming him to the ground, face first.

"Traitor," Isaac smirked, spitting on the ground and getting off the alan. He rolled to his feet angrily and stood square to the alan.

"You have no idea how low you are. Attacking girls?" Chris' face was barely inches from his and the vamps behind them tensed for attack.

"Leave him alone," came Scarlett's angry hiss and he looked over Chris' shoulder, extending his wings and baring his teeth. "I'd keep your mouth shut, girl. You may be strong, but I'm bigger and faster. I could have you ripped down to chicken strips." He raised an eyebrow threateningly and smirked.

His anger burst through the surface in an attack upon the other alan. Chris stepped out of the way and threw him off balance, only to charge at him, full tilt. Both alans were barely more than blurs in the air as Isaac's back hit a classroom door and he crashed through, extending talons only to scrape against the blackboard in an effort to steady himself. The high pitched screech caused the vampires and werewolves nearby to flinch in pain. He avoided a slash to the face from Chris' talons by jerking his head to the left, only to feel them tear into his shoulder. Snarling ferally in pain, he extended his own, larger ones, jamming them into the back of his skull and raking them against the bone, savagely kicking the other alan off and back into the corridor.

Isaac turned to the students in the classroom, first years, looking at the alan in horror as blood dripped down his shoulder.

Isaac growled, kicking the door open again and rushing straight back into the fray.
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Lilith walked away from me after threatening me, apparently I had one day left to give it to her. I glanced over to where Isaac was taking on the whole corridor and contemplated telling to bookworm to prepare to not only mourn for his books, but also for the whole room that was the library. Another alan started on Isaac, I sighed, I would have to intervene and it would hurt later. I loosened my neck by rotating it and listening to it crack. I prepared myself for a full transformation, no holding back this time; like earlier.
Isaac crashed into a class room and soon came running out.
I quickly went to face him. I said as calmly as possible, "Zac, you cant' win. There are too many of them."
"So you choose to join them do you?" He sneered at me, "you are as much a parasite as any of those over there!"
"Don't do this," I warned, "I don't wanna have to fight you."
"Oh so you are gonna fight me now?" He sneered, "You don't have the guts, your family was killed by them too, why do you stick up for them?"
I was getting fed up, and the monster inside that all demons suppress was starting to rouse. I was loosing control. My skin started to darken. "because..." I roared, fighting with myself as much more than Isaac, "I don't want to have to fight all my life!"
Isaac saw the beginnings of my transformation and lunged.
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