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Sabina-werewolf

Sabina ran circle around the auditorium, but in the stupid soldiers were in her way. She watched the scene before her and knew that everything was chaos. Angered and frustrated the wolf in her spoke up, she started eliminating all those who were in front of her. She saw the fear and horror on the humans faces as she manipulatively told them that death wouldn’t hurt at her hand, oh yes she was one of the few werewolves that could talk in wolf form.When she finally tasted blood on her tongue was when she regained her human conscious. She had half her conscious she couldn’t control tearing people apart but she had enough of her conscious to formulate a plan. She slightly directed her wolf form to the tunnels, it understood. She jumped in before the door closed. Her eyes glowed yellow in the phosphorus light, she panted heavily in her wolf form. She poked her muzzle in a hidden cupboard and took out a stun gun, and not any stun gun .She ran after the ones who stayed in the tunnel. Cowering a bit but not total fear. She flipped it over to Mathew, who was leading through the fairly lit tunnels.
“Stun me! I’ll be in human form in two minutes!” She barked.
He stunned her, electric volts shook her body you could see the electric pulses wave through her. In two exact minutes she was in her human form.
She looked at Mathew, “I’ll need your help if you want to save the school and Taelmus. I’m going to take you to a whole other area of the tunnels you have never seen,” she glanced at Ezra who clung on to Alex and Koree the vampire, “Come and I’ll help Ezra.”
She started walking but stopped and turned to Mathew, sorrow in her eyes, “I am deeply sorry; for you can’t save Serena, no one can get out or come in now; for all the doors are locked so we must hurry to the laboratory that I speak of and unlock the doors. But for now they are on their own.” She continued walking leaving them to follow or get lost in the tunnels, “I’ll explain on the way,” she said.


Sorry if it’s to long. And I did say that the doors would close in five minutes so all those who are on the outside help will soon come. ;) Is this alright?
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Okay Bonnie had some brainwave for the course of the storybook but I can't remember O.o So I'll go find her and ask xD
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*Okay. Then I'll have Serena force her back. Can that work, Juni?*

Scarlett
She felt awful. For a moment, Scarlett could swear she had seen Phelix's eyes open, but what did she know know? Nothing. Everything was still a mess. Issac was out of sight, no idea where he would be. But Serena was close behind. And as Scarlett froze when she admit she saw him opening his eyes, Serena grabbed her arms, and caused a sharp pain go down her left side, where blood was still running.

"Ah," she cried out. Serena looked at her. But know, Scarlett had to move. Phelix was getting away, they were actually taking him. Scarlett tried to step forwards, but Serena was still holding her back. Phelix was now being taken out the door.

"Let go of me!" She tried to launch forwards again, but she didn't managed to move an inch.

"No." Serena's response was calm and low, but Scarlett could hear her. They crossed the door. Everything was lost now. There would probably be more humans on the outside than there were on the inside.

"Oh, no, no, no," Scarlett cried, dropping to her knees. Serena picked her up, and with an arm under her shoulder, moved them. They were close to the door now. But as they passed the crowd, she noticed Jonathan, who was looking strangely at her and breathing heavily.

"Jonathan?" She asked, taking a step towards him.
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Serena
She knew how much Scarlett wanted to save Phelix, but there had to be another way of helping him other than getting herself killed. There were two possibilities after what she did,fisrt one, Scarlett appreciating that she saved her life. or, Scarlett hateing her because she prevented her from saving Phelix. Either way, all Serena wanted to do was help her friend.

As they were walking, Serena stained with her friends blood, they found Jonathan. But for some reason. It wasn't the Jonathan they both knew.
"Jonathan?" Scarlett said walking towards him.

Serena couldn't help not to ask the same question.

"Jonathan,are you alright?" She asked walking towards him until she was standind next to Serena.
But he wasn't the same, there was soemthing about him that seemed...
a bit more evil.
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Jonathan, zombie

The zombie screamed and ran at Scarlett and Serena, getting between them and Phelix. The smell of fear mixed with the blood was driving him positively frantic.

Serena swore and jerked Scarlett out of the way as best as she could, but she wasn't quite fast enough. Jonathan's teeth clamped down on Scarlett's arm. He looked completely deranged.
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Serena
Scarlett's shriek resonated in Serena's brain and chilld went up her spine. JOnathan had a bitten her.
"Dammit" Serena snarled and grabbed Scarlett by her left arm before throwing her to the other side.
Jonathan looked insane, it wasn't like the normal Jonathan. So Serena threw herself towards him and punched him, but before she knew it, Jonathan had also hurt her.

"Don't hurt him" Scarlett said, getting up and coming towards them. But Serena was bleeding.

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Scarlett

Everything was hurting. Her left side ached, and she could feel her skirt starting to clench onto to her boy, just like her top already did, heavy with blood. The smell of it was making her start to feel a nausea. The room started spinning, and she could feel sharp pain on her arm. Everything was hurting now.

"Jonathan," she pleaded, in a whisper. But before she could do anything, Serena jumped up and saved her. Yes, always a good and loyal friend. She loved Serena. Probably her only weakness at the moment. And Phelix. Now, another kind of pain struck her: she couldn't breathe. It was like her heart was beating too fast, and everything was pressing down on her lungs. Breathing was painful.

"Don't hurt him," Scarlett cried out to Serena. It was not like she could have attacked Jonathan herself. Her knees buckled, and she found herself lying on the floor. Shapes lost shapes, becoming blurs in the incessant noise background. Everything was dull; everything was pain. "Help." She whispered.
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Jonathan, zombie

"Jonathan..."

He heard the whisper and paused. Jonathan? That name meant something... And then Serena's fist collided with his head, and he lost his train of thought.

He spun around. Even if he couldn't feel pain, he did feel exceedingly dizzy. With a snarl, Jonathan staggered forward. His teeth sank into her shoulder.

"Don't hurt him!" The words echoed in his brain, and he frowned. Don't hurt who? It was hard to find any meaning in the words with the blood and the fear so thick in the air.

Serena pushed him back and off of her, clutching her wounded shoulder. He sank into a crouch and leered. Did she want to fight? He jumped again, but this time the vampire was ready. She darted to the side, grabbed his arm, and swung him sideways into a wall.

He shook his head and suddenly noticed that Scarlett was lying on the floor. He paused again to watch her. No, he'd DEFINITELY seen that girl before.

He didn't see Serena come up behind him with a rock.

THWACK!

Everything went black.
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Isaac

Gritting his teeth, Isaac dropped the gun with a clatter and went to his friend's aid. He wanted to hate the demon as he kneeled beside Asher, taking him by the shoulders and shaking him roughly.

"C'mon, Ash. Get up." He hauled his heavy body up, Asher only capable of producing a splutter of blood as a reply. He slung Asher's arm over his shoulders, grunting with the effort for his sealed wounds still burned like an open flame.

"Nurse?" he snorted, orange eyes locking on hers. "Lilith, in case you haven't noticed, they've slaughtered or taken anyone worth taking." Isaac wiped the blood from his mouth angrily with a backhanded swipe of the hand, looking around the empty hall and suddenly feeling heavily outnumbered by the humans. His plan to get Taelmus back suddenly seemed pointless and idiotic. Lilith was thankfully quiet after that as he pulled Asher through the body strewn corridors.

Just when Isaac could drag Asher no more, they rounded the corner and caught sight of Serena, standing over a fallen zombie with a bloodied rock in her hand. Scarlett was lying on the ground, blood pooling out of a jagged, messy wound on her arm. Breathing heavily through his red tinted mouth, he set Asher on the ground, seeing that he had thankfully remained conscious.

"Do I need to save her tail again?" Isaac jabbed a thumb at the bleeding vampire, looking down at her coldly whilst kneeling beside his fallen friend. He returned attention to Asher, his brow heavily furrowed after no reply.

"Sorry man, need to borrow some of this stuff." He cupped his hands and let some blood dribble from his gun shot wound, before striding over to Scarlett.

"Don't dare bite me," he said in quiet warning, before tipping the contents of his hand into her mouth. Immediately some strength seemed to flood into her eyes. He eyed her for a short moment, before poking her with the tip of his blood stained shoe. "You better get up."

Then he turned attention back to Asher. Folding his arms, he wondered whether he had let the demon suffer enough, before stooping to bandage his wounds.

(Guys, I think we should head to the DT and continue to discuss where we go next.)
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I follow four rules when writing
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Hey guys, I'm a little lost, but if Aqua would post I might be able to catch up.
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aqua hasn't posted for ages....
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Can I john please please please please please please please?



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