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Kat

I turned suddenly to the explosion over by the truck.

"Cover me," I whispered to Alura. "I Need to make sure no one was hurt over there.

She nodded and kept shooting. I crept over to the truck, which was flaming for the most part, and noticed the leaking gas tank.

"Oh no," I whispered, seeing Nick over there. "Nick, the gas tank!"

He looked over at me, confused. I pointed to the leaking gas tank as I ran towards him. His eyes widened with fear, and I watched the truck explode, sending flaming bits of metal through the air.

"NICK!" I screamed, running through the smoke, hoping to bump into him somewhere. Several chunks of metal hit me and I could help them singeing my skin, but I continued looking for him.

I felt someone pulling me back, probably so I wouldn't get hurt, but I struggled against them.

"Kat, calm down," I heard Desmond say. "He must've transported. You can't go back over there, you'll get hurt."
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**FEE**

I wasn't fighting, but I was keeping an eye open if anyone needed help. Suddenly, I heart someone screaming, and I turned to see Kat screaming at Nick, pointing to the gas tank. I looked at the truck next to me, then back to Nick, confused. Suddenly, a white wall of heat and noise enveloped me, and I was lost in it completely.



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Nick,

Sweat pours down my body as I fight Zack. He may be a short knife, but he's and effective one. Suddenly I hear Kat, screaming something.

"Nick! The gas tank!" I look around, confused, until I see the dripping gasoline and the fire from the bazooka blast. M eyes widen in horror. Simultaneously, Zack knocks my sword out of the way, and plunges into my chest, though I don't notice the pain, as the Daemyn's van explodes. I curl up in a tight ball, blood pouring down my body. I pull Zack out and throw him into the inferno that is all around me. I vaguely hear someone shouting my name before I pass out.

Kili,

I pull the trigger on my commandeered machine gun and start sweeping the camp with a deadly volley of bullets. I begin to laugh insanely, stepping out from the cover of the tree. I loved guns.

"Thanks, Alura, for providing such lovely supplies!" She snarls something at me, aiming her gun. I fire mine. She somehow manages to dodge all of my bullets. My laughter stops. I lunge at her with the knife from my belt.
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Viper

There was a flash and a noise like a bomb going off, clearly visible through the side of the tent. There goes the van, I thought grimly.

Suddenly bullets started tearing through the canvas. I cursed mentally and crawled back from the source. What the crap was going on?
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Zack

The battle's heart moved away from the Van. In the ruins, an extremely burnt knife lay.

I would have screamed my voice out in agony, but knifes don't contain any vocal chords. I left the knife before I was singed away anymore.

I tried to reform, but it hurt terribly. I would have to take it slowly.

[Short, but I wanted to wait to add more.]
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Alura

The battle had begun, and it was my time to get revenge on Kili. She shot at me but I dodged the bullets pretty fast.
"Hey Kili get over here and fight me, forget the guns.. let's just play with knifes!"
she approached throwing the gun to the side and had a knife in her hands I grabbed mine as we lunged for each other. I stabbed her in the stomach, she screamed in pain but quickly recovered and then stabbed me in the chest. I sreamed in pain too. I heard Daemyn yell my name. Kili pushed me to the floor and had her knife to my neck. I kicked her, she soon fell over.
"Lurie it's so nice to see you fight!"
I just laughed
"Same to you!"
It appeared that we where wrestling on the floor trying to stab each other.
"You took my man, made me feel drunk and pretty much destroyed my family, Kili you are going down!"
"You first!"
We both got up I grabbed my gun from my tutu and aimed it at her, ready to shoot when I felt a pain on my chest. I looked down with a knife in my chest with blood all over me. She laughed. I pulled it out of my chest. I screamed. I then threw the knife at Kili's chest and then everything went black...

P.s. Lurie's not dead
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Zeb

To much was going on. I grabbed Lizzie knowing Lurie would be OK because she would know how to fight. I was looking around, I heard screams and then an explosion....Lurie's bazooka must have shot at something. I saw Daemyn scream and looked the direction she did and saw Lurie lying on the floor with blood.
"Lizzie stay here!"
I ran to Lurie
"Lurie!"
Not a word was said. Daemyn made his way over and cussed. He picked her up before I even had a chance and ran to the tent where snake boy was.
Daemyn looked at me, "Go get Lizzie"
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Kili,

I dodge the knife that Alura throws at me. I stare gleefully at the knife sticking out of Lurie's chest. Finally, one of my arch enemies was gone! At least, I hope so. The scratch that Alura gave me on my stomach throbs and bleeds, but its not too bad. I head for the back of a tent and slip under the canvas. As I turn around, I am face to face with snake boy. He glares at me, baring his fangs. I give him a small smile.

"Uh, hi, Viper!" He continues to glare at me, moving closer.

"That bump on your head still there?" I ask, maliciously. He rubs the back of his skull.

"You'll pay, Kili," he hisses.

"Really? Two of your people are already down," I sneer, just as Daemyn enters the tent, carrying Alura. Dammit.
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Viper

I'd cleaned and bandaged my shoulder as best as I could. I could move it fairly well now. The cold still had me moving a little slowly, but I wasn't stuttering any more.

And then that hated face peered at me from under the canvas. She had the gall to smile at me.

"Um, hi, Viper!"

I let out an angry hiss and moved towards her.

"That bump on your head still there?" she asked with a leer.

"You'll pay Kili."

"Really? Two of your people are already down." Daemyn entered the tent, carrying Alura.

She was distracted for only a split second, but it was enough. I sent a stream of venom from my fangs towards her face. She was able to block one of her eyes but still went down screaming.

I turned to Daemyn, ignoring Kili for the moment. She was out for the count as far as I was concerned. "How is she?"

"Not good. Knife to the chest." Daemyn immediately set to examining the wound. I was silent. He didn't need any distractions right now.

Lizzie burst into the tent, face pale. "What's-"

Suddenly Kili was behind her, holding a knife to her neck. One of her eyes was bloodshot and blinded from my attack. Daemyn and I both jumped up.

"Don't even think about it," she sneered. "Hands behind your heads, both of you. We're all going to go for a little walk in the woods. Grab some rope Daemyn; we're gonna need it."
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Zack

I tried again to reform. If anything, it hurt more. This wasn't going anywhere. Carmel and the winged girl were slowly falling, outnumbered and losing. Kili had disappeared.

Damn. It was time to go back to the fight.

There was to be no mercy this time. with Nick out of the way, there was nothing to stop me.

I went into a gun on of the Misfits was holding, flipped it around, and fired.

*cue for anyone still on the battlefield*
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Lizzie

Trying to control myself from sucking all the water from her body, I decided I would save the pleasure for someone else. I looked at Daemyn holding my dear sister Lurie bleeding to death and almost dead.
"Daemyn tie the rope around Lizzie's hands" Kili said sternly
Daemyn waited there holding my sister contemplating what he should do. He laid her on the floor and proceeded to tie the rope around my hands, while the knife was still against my throat. He went back and picked up Lurie.
"You all are going to come with me or Lizzie dies!"
She pushed the knife even closer to my neck making a drip of water slide down my neck(My blood). I was getting nauseous looking at the blood all over my sister. Blood was a disgusting thing, water was more pure and clean. Kili began to pull me outside the tent while Daemyn still holding Lurie and Viper followed.




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Nick,

I wake up to the crackling of flames all around me. I feel the knife wound in my chest, the burning of my flesh. I groan, trying to stand up. I hear sounds of gunfire, but they sound faint, far away. I stumble forwards, the fire charring my flesh further. After a few steps, I fall out of the flaming wreckage of Daemyn's van and promptly trip over a body. It's Fee.

"No, no, you can't be..." I moan, crouching over body, oblivious to my own problems. I check for a pulse, and it's there, stronger than expected, but there's also a long, bloody gash on her forehead. I grimace when I notice that blood is dripping from my chest onto her clothes. I stagger to my feet, looking around for someone, anyone, but all I see is the foot of someone disappearing into the forest next to camp.

"Kat? Des? Lurie?" I shout, desperately hoping to hear a response.

"Nick?" I turn around.

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Des~~

"Nick!"

I ran forward and threw Fee over my shoulders and carried Nick in my arms.

"Things are going south here. I'm not sure what I can do. People are injured, there's fire everywhere, and I don't know what to do."
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Zack

I swore. just as I fired, someone had drawn Nick's attention to the situation and he had teleported my victim away.

I fired in his general direction, but I was distracted by the sight of Kili exiting the tent, Viper, Deamyn, Alura and Lizzie all at her mercy.

I exited the gun and reformed. "Everyone, guns down right now- or Lizzie dies!"

Instant reaction. Everyone dropped there weapons. Kili glared at me for stealing her spotlight.

I took over the knife at Lizzie's throat for her (going inside it, not holding it), as Kili continued with instructions to the Mistfits.

[forget my earlier cue.]
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