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Kat

I was almost asleep on Desmond's shoulder, when I heard distant shouts. I blinked blearily, looking at Desmond confusedly.

He nodded. "I hear it too. I think we found them."

We leaped up silently. I shape-shifted into a hawk and flew above the trees, following the shouts.

I could easily see Mikael dragging Daemyn back to his bike and Zach trying to stop him. With a quick glance back to make sure Des was following me, I dive-bombed Zach, swooping close to his head, making him cry out in surprise.

I flew low, shifting back into my human form to help Mikael drag Daemyn back.

"No! They're getting away!" I heard someone hiss.

I turned to see both Kili and Carmel running towards us, and I immediately put up a mental defence.

"Des! Help!" I shouted as I saw him crashing through the bushes. "Carmel and Kili are coming!"
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Alura

I was walking around when Nick bumped in to me. He muttered something but I didn't really care, I just continued to walk on. I walked up the hill to hear yelling. I wonder what my family could be up to now? I looked up to find Mikael dragging Daemyn down the hill with Kat and Desmond. Kili and that other boy trailing behind them. I yelled for Fee and then proceded to run towards them. Mikael really stayed true to his promise. Mikael really was like a big brother to me and more then Zeb would ever be. I smiled as I ran towards them I could use my power to tell them to stop and turn around but I can only use my power on one person at a time. They where far away and I really had to run fast.
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Kat

"We got him," I panted. Alura leapt up and hugged him, making us let go.

"I missed you so much," she cried.

"A-Alura?" Daemyn asked, seeming to snap out of his spell. "What's going on?"

"Nooo!" Kili screeched. "What did you do?"

We all looked at her. She was fuming, and so was Carmel beside her.

"You Misfits ruined my plan!" she screamed.
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Alura

"We got him" Kat panted. I looked at my Daemyn and immediately hugged him. "A-Alura?" I just smiled, "What's going on?" I didn't respond. I ignored Kili as she got really annoyed at Daemyn not being under her power. "Oh Daemyn! I love you!..Don't ever join the evil side again!" He looked confused and dazed but he didn't smell like brandy or puke like the last time I saw him."I missed you so much!" I began to pull him away from Kili. I would get my revenge on her when she least expected it. I pulled harder as he came with, I figured for now I would let Mikael and Kat and Des to take care of Kili, for now...but the only thing that mattered was me with my Daemyn, "Lurie...what the?" He had his hand on his head. Oh right he must be in pain and stuff, "Oh sorry Daemyn" I let him go.
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**FEE**

"You ruined my plan!" I hear Kili yell. I reach the top of the hill, and find my family holding on to each other on one side, Kili and Carmel on the other. I run back down the hill, then to the other side. I touch my silver earring, praying my powers stil work. I smile when my hands turn to smooth silver. I walk up the side of the hill, directly behind Kili and Carmel, stepping as quietly and quickly as I can. Kili, still screeching, doesn't notice me when I step up behind her. I see Lurie's eyes widen slightly. I pull my fist back, trying to put as much energy into it when I let go and punch her at the base of her neck. She collapses, and I look up to the cloudy heavens, not wanting to see that damage I've done. Still not looking at Kili or Carmel, I run over to my little group, hugging Deamyn, Lurie, Kat, and Des, respectively. Finally I got to Mikael. Smiling, I look up into his eyes. I stand on tiptoes and press my lips to his. Pulling away, I take his hands. "We did it," I whisper, laughing a little when I notice my skin has turned into a version of his.
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Kat

Des hugged me close as we celebrated. Fee hugged us all, smiling at us each, before joining Mikael a little farther away.

I saw Nick standing off to the side. I broke away from Desmond and walked over to him. "Nick, we just conquered Kili! Aren't you going to celebrate?"

He glared a little at me. "Not right now, thank you," he said curtly before walking back into his tent.

I came back to the group, a little disappointed. Desmond was there to wrap me up in a hug. "Hey, you tried. He'll come around soon."

I nodded. Des smiled and kissed my cheek, then my lips. "C'mon and celebrate," he urged. "We defeated Kili!"
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Zack

I watched from farther off as Kili and Carmel crumpled to the ground, dead or near to it.

So it was just me then.

Things hadn't turned out the way I wanted it, but I was flexible. I would find a way eventually. Until then, I took control of a sandwich and floated out to the forest, far, far away.

Dinner.

I sat and ate. And thought.

[Kili and Carmel are not necessarily out, I just wanted my character to think that]
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I must have dozed off for a good amount of time. I jerked awake at the sound of cheering and shouting. The others were positively ecstatic. I groaned and sat up. The blanket was warm, but I was still shuddering horribly.

I peeked out the tent flap. "Wh-what's going o-on?"
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Kili,

I run as fast as I can towards Daemyn and Lurie, who are hugging.

"Nooo!" I screech, "What have you done?"

Then, before I can say anything else, something extremely hard and extremely smooth connects with the base of my neck. Luckily, though, not a fatal spot. Stars flash before my eyes, and I collapse, so that it seems that they've done me in. My face pressed into the grass, and I smile. Caramel falls beside me. I do not know if she is actually hurt. All of the other Misfits are celebrating, under the impression that they have defeated me. Hopefully, their mental blocks are down. Most of them are still up, all except one. Nick. He is fuming, and his mind is wide open. I grin, and make myself at home. I don't really have to do anything but give a little push as he jumps on Desmond's back and puts his hands around his throat, teleporting, as I told him to. To my camp.
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Carmel

I always wanted to act; it came as second nature when I rolled to the ground, trying not to blink.
I see Nick jump on Desmond, disappear. I see a silhouette against the moon that I used to be disgusted by.
"Birdie! You recovered, you mutated piece of scum," I crowed, as she swooped down. The Misfits are frozen, yet to start screaming at the discovery that they are totally screwed.

The bird-brain doesn't say anything. She walks over to Kili, and picks her up; I'm guessing she was actually hurt, but still able to do her stuff.
Some of the Misfits are running towards us. I turn to Birdie, carrying Kili with one arm; stronger than I thought.
"Hey, uh, can you like, take my weight too?" I asked, lighting a ciggie. She stared at me, oblivious to the fact that they were, like, charging at us.
She took the cigarette out of my fingers - "Hey!" - and, after a moment of scrutiny, pushed it into my cheek.

The pain... God, its worse than I imagined... Her fingers are- are-...

I woke up to see Kili leaning over me; we're back at camp. My hands rush to my face; I scream again as I feel the charred skin, the hole in my cheek, my tongue... my tongue. Oh, God, my face!
"Hmm. Maybe you'll stop prancing about, getting your makeup on," she said. She laughed. "What's the matter? Cat got your tongue?"
"You- You- Why?!" I shriek through Birdie's mouth.
The bird-brain answered this one, in a voice I'd never heard her use.
"She didn't do it; she just wanted you to shut up. I thought she meant, well, literally."

Oh, dear God, I'm totally screwed; best keep on their good side.
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Ummm, guys, I said Nick jumped on Desmond's back....?
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Nick,

I see that everyone's celebrating, happy that they have defeated, and killed, someone that used to be part of the family. So, I didn't like her much, but she was still a person, and I think, deep down, all she wanted was reassurance that everything would be alright. When Kat comes up and asks me to celebrate, I say no a little too harshly. She looks hurt, and turns away, to go kiss Desmond. I head is overcome with an angry roaring, and suddenly, I am under Kili's control. All I can think is: so you're not dead, you little...But by then I am charging at Desmond. My hands find his throat, and I teleport to the place Kili made me want to go: her camp, deep in the woods. When we arrive, my hands loosen on Des' throat. He stares at me.
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
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Alura

Things seemed to be going good...until Kili had to have put Nick on her little power spell . I hate this whole war and the whole I'm going to kill you thing. Even though I did have Daemyn with me which was a bonus, I still felt unhappy. I looked at Fee, "What do we do now?" She sighed, and didn't respond. I grabbed Daemyn's hand and began to pull him towards camp, we probably should have a group meeting or something....I hate group meetings, normally leads to arguing and everybody disagreeing with each other.
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Viper

I frowned. No one seemed to have heard me.

"H-h-hey, why's everyone c-celebrating? C-could someone j-j-just ans-swer m-me already?!"

But they weren't celebrating any more. I shook my head wearily, unable to focus in the cold and with all this noise.
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