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War of the Tsurekin

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(((That just strenghtens what I think. I've always told people that if you are dating alot sometimes it helps to take a break and see if you really are good for each other or not. So for now I'll look at it like it's a break. If it turns out to not be, well time heals all things.))))
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(I guess great minds think alike. :D I really do hope everything works out in the future. If not, well, it's just another experience in this adventure called life.

What's say we get back to writing the story? I'm eager to see what happens next to our characters.)
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(((ya sorry. :P Let me think. :S )))

"But what should it be?" Skylar asked yawning a little.

"I don't know." Kai laughed. "We should think of something though."

"Tsurekinian." Skylar laughed. "Or Nikerust"



(((Sorry, I'm trying. :P Nikerust is Tsurekin backwards. )))
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(That's clever, but it doesn't sound like something that would strike feeling into its members when they hear it, if you know what I mean. We can leave it for now and think of something later. Keep coming up with ideas, though.)


Kai and Sean laughed as well. Kai said, "It's a good start, but I think we'll need something better. Ivy said when she started Tsurikansen she meant it to be a safe haven for all its members. We need to think of something that would make members feel safe and secure when they hear it."

Sean yawned. "Can we work on it later? I want to get to sleep."

Kai nodded. "Let's try to think of something by tomorrow night, though."


(I'll be leaving later today to go camping.)
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(((I'll try and come up with something. But my brain doesn't want to think. Writing flows out, but coming up with stuff doesn't)))
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(I'll give you the weekend to think of something, since I'm not going to be here to post anyway. :D See you on Sunday.)
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(So, you think of a name yet?)
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Nope, like I told you, I don't do names. ALl the characters of my books have nearly the same names.

Veiligheid or Seguridad (both mean Safety)

Verdragen (Means Everlasting)

Aushalten (Means Enduring)

I kinda like the last one. But ya, thats all I got. :S
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(Yeah, I like the last one, too. Let's go with that. What language is that by the way? It sounds German.)
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(((I think it is.)))

The next morning Skylar woke up to someone walking around in the other room. She got up and walked out her hair a mess along with her clothes disshelved, she'd forgotten to change in her shorts and t-shirt.

"Sean, what are you doing?" She yawned.

"Coming up with a name." He replied as Kai walked in. "How's Aushalten, sound?"

"Uh, good." Skylar yawned. "What is it, another language?"

"German to be exact, and it means Enduring." He replied. "Thought it would fit for the Tsurekin."

"Uh huh, why the stomping?" Kai laughed.

"I wasn't stomping, that was someone in the room over." Sean replied shaking his head. "They've been doing it all morning."
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(Did you know that YWS is changing to a new site soon? It's going to be down for a week starting on the 17th so Nate can move everything from this site to the new one.)


They all looked at each other for a moment. Kai was the first to blush.

Skylar shook her head. "I don't even want to think of what they're doing in that room! I'm going for a walk." Tala followed Skylar out of the room and down the hall.

Ryukin looked up at Kai and asked, "I don't get it, what are they doing in the next room?"

Kai shook his head, as if to shake away any thoughts he was having. "I'm going for a walk, too."


(How about we make it so Ivy's room is next to theirs, and she has a boyfriend?)
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(NO!!!!! :'( A whole week!!!!!! And that works, I'd've never thought of that being what the noise was, but now that I do it makes sense *blush* Oh well.)


Skylar looked around the huge yard. "Do you think they have a swing anywhere?" She smiled as they walked.

"Wouldn't doubt that there is one somewhere." Kai laughed.

"Lets see if we can find it then, if Ivy wants us I'm sure she'll find us." She replied.


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They searched the outside of the mansion for half an hour. They came across a giant garden on one side of the building with all sorts of flowers, local and exotic. On the other side they found a tennis court, basketball court, and even batting cages. Behind the mansion they found the biggest pool they had ever seen, complete with two diving boards, three miniature water slides, and a hot tub the size of a community pool. Off to the side of the pool they found a swinging bench for people to sit on. It was big enough for two.

(All I can think of at the moment. I didn't know if Skylar was talking about that, or one of the swings you find in a playground.)
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((((That works))))

Skylar sat on the swing and pushed it with her feet. She loved to swing, feel the wind pass over her cheeks, and if she was going fast brushing through her hair and flying past her. The swing stopped and Kai climbed on before they pushed off again.

"I'm going swiming." Sean annoced before pulling his shirt off and jumping in. Skylar laughed and shook her head.

"Not missing home are you?" She smiled.

"Hey, I love the water." Sean replied before diving back under.
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"This place sure is big," Skylar said.

Kai nodded. "Just think, only yesterday I was living in an apartment the size of a refrigerator box."

Skylar laughed at that. "I guess it just goes to show you can never be sure what the future has in store for you. I am a little worried about Gram, though. I hope she'll be fine without me."

For the next few minutes they sat in silence, swinging back and forth on the bench. Sean was having a blast going down the water slides. On the other side of the pool they could see Tala and Reiky running around on a patch of grass, chasing each other. Ryukin was sitting off to the side, watching them.

"What do you think of all this? I mean, Tsurikansen and the Tsuriken lords?" Kai said, breaking the silence.
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