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War of the Tsurekin

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The inside of the mansion was just as big as they thought it would be. It almost felt like they were standing in a high class hotel. The place was decorated by many Egyptian artifacts, as well as some Greek, Roman, and Aztec pieces. The place felt very high class, but at the same time it felt cozy.

"This place is amazing," Sean said. "How can you afford all of this?"

Ivy smiled. "I inherited this mansion from my family. My ancestors were one of the first to colonize this country. My great great grandfather was a famous archaeologist, and when he died he gave everything he owned to his children, then they passed it all on to their children, and so on until it came to me."

"So, all these artifacts were discovered by your great great grandfather?" Kai asked.

She shook her head. "I keep all of his discoveries in a vault under the mansion to keep them safe. What you see here was all found by me."

They all looked at her then, amazed. "You found all of these?" Skylar asked.

She nodded. "As soon as I finished college I began to travel around the world in search of ancient artifacts. Ever since I was a child I wanted to fallow in my great great grandfather's footsteps and make as many discoveries as he did. Sometimes I wish I can go back to traveling the world like I did years ago."

"What made you stop?" Kai asked.

"Five years ago I was on an expedition with a group of my colleagues to a recently discovered tomb in Egypt. We came across a sealed room. After three days of work we were able to open it, and inside that room was Sahara."

They all looked at her Tsurekin then. "How long had he been in there?" Kai asked.

"I don't know, and neither did he," she said. "The walls of that room were covered with ancient messages. Everything I know about the Tsurekin I learned from that room. Once I learned about the five Tsurekin lords I decided that something had to be done. That's when I started Tsurikansen. The organization was meant to be a safe haven for Tsurekin and their masters, a place where they could live and train in peace without worrying about being discovered by the rest of the world, until the day came that the Tsurekin lords awakened. Jirran was one of my younger colleagues that came with me on that expedition to Egypt. When he found his Tsurekin, Chimera, he changed. He lost sight of what Tsurikansen was about and turned it into nothing more than a gang of delinquents."

"If you don't mind me asking, when will the Tsurekin lords awaken?" Sean asked.

"January the first, 2010."
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"So we know the date." Skylar said. "It's a good bit aways still."

"Yes, we don't know how many Tsurekin are still going to show up, but they will soon." SHe replied.

"That is good. So where do we sleep?" Sean smiled. She laughed at that and started walking down a hall.

"Follow me and I'll show you." They walked for what seemed like forever until she came to a big door. She opened it and there was a living room like space. There were three doors in the room. "Each of those leads to a bed room. They are yours." She replied. "Kai, your on the left, Skylar, straight ahead. And Sean you are on the right."
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"Thank you for your hospitality," Kai said.

"Your welcome," Ivy said with a smile. "If you need anything, just use the intercom on the wall here." She pointed to a small box attached to the wall just beside the door. "One of the care takers will answer. Just tell them what you need and they'll get it for you." She turned back to Kai and said, "If you would like, I can send some people over to your apartment to bring your things here."

"That'd be great, thanks." He reached into his pocket and handed her the key to his apartment.

"I have just one question before you go," Skylar said. "If we find more people with Tsurekin, will they be staying here like us?"

"Of course. This mansion is big enough for fifty people."

Skylar's jaw dropped. "Fifty people? And I thought it was huge already!"

"It had to be, this used to be the home of every member of Tsurikansen. You all must be tired, I'll let you get ready for bed." She closed the door behind her when she left.


(Now that our characters are here, they should think of a name for this new group. What do you think?)
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((((I have no idea. :P ))))

Skylar walked to the room where she was going to stay and she opened the door. She sighed in relief.

"What?" Tala asked.

"It's not pink." She replied as she slipped in and looked around. It was pretty nice. Once she'd looked around she walked back out ot the living room and plopped down on the love seat closing her eyes.

"Your supposed to sleep on the bed." Tala laughed.

"I'm not sleeping. I'm bored." She replied as she sat up. "Whats there to do around here."




(((It's been a long week, sorry____
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(No problem. Although I would like you to think of it this time. This story is a team effort, I can't always be the one doing everything, can I? :lol: We can have our characters think of the idea now, but leave coming up with an actual name until later. That way you'll have time to think of a name. Everything in this story so far I've thought up on the fly, but some of it took me a bit to study up on a few things, like the names of each Tsurekin lord.

Hera the Sphinx is named after Hera, who in legend sent the real Sphinx from her Ethiopian homeland to Thebes in Greece, where the sphinx asks every traveler a riddle. If they get it wrong, the sphinx strangles and eats them. Zwolle the Basilisk is named after the city in which it lived under, Zwolle. Lernae the Hydra's name comes from it's full title, Lernaean Hydra. Draco the Dragon's name comes from its the Greek name (at least I think it's Greek) Draco. Finally, Simurgh the Phoenix is named after the Hindu god Simurgh, who is said to have given the famous fire bird life. I like to have meaning behind most of the names in my stories. :D )


Sean came out of his room next. He sat down one the lounging chairs in the center of the room, and Reiky sat on the armrest. The seating layout of the living room was the love seat Skylar was on in the corner between her and Kai's room, a full couch in the center, and a lounging chair on either side with a small table between the three pieces of furniture.

"The only thing this room is missing is a T.V.," he said. "Maybe I'll bring mine from home and put it right there." He pointed at the spot across from the couch."

"So what did your parents think about you staying here?" Skylar asked.

"They were surprised when they saw the limo pull up to the house, but I told them I was staying over at a friend's house tonight. I didn't want you guys to wait too long while I explained to my parents why I had to live somewhere else for a while. I figured it'd be better to tell them tomorrow, while I have the time to sit down and discuss it with them."

She nodded. "Makes sense." Kai came out of his room next, followed by Ryukin. "How's the room?"

"It's bigger than my entire apartment." He went to the couch to lay down, while Ryukin took the chair across from Sean. "I've been thinking, since we're going to have to find more people with Tsurekin and get them to come here, shouldn't we think of a name for this new group?"


(We'll have them think about it now, but choose one later after they've had time to think of a good name.)
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(((I gotta go. I might not post for a while. I'm having......boyfriend issues. Now I know why I've never let myself fall in love before. Hopefully nothing will come of it. Hopefully. Sorry.)))
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(No problem. If you ever need anyone to talk to you can talk to me. Ayumi thinks I'm a good guy to open up to.)
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((haha, ya I think she's mentioned that. It's just this is my first boyfriend, and....well he lives 3 hours away. I'm scared he's gonna break up with me. But, I don't know. I told myself I wouldn't let myself get this attached. I'm getting off))))
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(Okay, see you later. Just a little message for when you get back. If you two really like each other, you'll find a way to make it work even if he does live 3 hours away.)
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(((He broke up with me. :'( Says he doesn't think the distance will work. He's got alot going on right now. :'( My first break up. Yay. :'( )))
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(That sucks. But don't worry, I'm sure you'll find someone else. Did you two have fun while you were together at least?)
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(((ya, I can't believe it's over. Stupid boy. :@)))
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(Hey, now don't go cursing him just yet. If you two had fun during the time you spent together then that means something, doesn't it? If I was in your shoes I don't think I could have asked for anything more. Remember him for all the good times you spent with him.)
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(((I'm not cursing him. I still love him. Last night my friend tried to get me to cal him a douch, I couldn't. I mean it's possible we can get together once I move up for college. It's just that the distance an all. He's just stupid cause I can't stop thinking about him. :P And he won't talk to me. :S We're still friend, course he's on vacation so.....I don't know. I just don't like this feeling)))
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(The way I see it, your friend was wrong for trying to make you call him a douche. He probably thought that trying to maintain a long distance relationship would hurt you two more in the long run, so he called it off to save your feelings. It may not seem like it, but that takes a lot of courage. I think he still likes you, too, and when you go to college you should definitely call him up and see if you can get back together again with him. When it comes to dating, I don't have a lot of personal experience. But what I do believe in, is if you two really love each other, you'll be able to get back together when the time is right.

Does that make you feel a little better?)
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