Do you think I am Romantic, or a Passionate Nothing?

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Every time I look into your eyes, for every time I gaze upon your face, I not only see what you are, but also what you have made me.

-Micah

Should I stop writing these things for my girl???
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hmm its alright, sounds sort of like something i would use in my new budding romance stories.
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don't tell any of my friends i said this but i think it's quite sweet! i'll go for romantic.




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I think it's really sweet - but only if you mean it. If you're just writing things you think she'll like, but you don't really feel that way, then it's extremely rude.

Anyway, I'm assuming you're sincere, so that's very sweet. I wish my guy would write stuff like that for me! :D
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:arrow: it's very sweet...if....its not just something your making up now, when there is no girl.
otherwise its just memorized lines.literally. nive avatar.




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I would blink at a guy who said to this to me. It's bad grammar. Look at the sentence...

"Every time I look into your eyes, for every time I gaze upon your face, I not only see what you are, but also what you have made me."

Everytime he looks into my eyes... and does what? What is the action? There is none! Bad sentence! Must... resist... fist... of... death...

Of course, I am known to be a little overdramatic...
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snoink, really, i doubt the girl will pay attention things like sentence structure.
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Yeah? Well what would you do if a guy said to you, "My heart beat for you."

This would be better: "Everytime I gaze upon your face, I not only see what you are, but also what you have made me."

But then again, I would still think that was too soppy. I would rather have a guy say, "You're beautiful." It just... well... short sentences are more understandable and less open to interpretation.
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sigh, some women like romantic guys...
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sorry if i sound mean or something tonight... im just really ticked off tonight. I HATE THE PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD WHO ARE COMPLETE FOOLS YET THINK THEY CAN TELL YOU WHAT TO DO! ok, that was directed towards this punk who wronged me today...
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Sigh. Sorry, that won't happen again. Last night was really bad. Ironic that I should be talking about this in a thread about romance and passion...
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Eek! Don't post three times in a row! It's spam, or what ever you guys call it. So just edit your first post, okay?

Anyway, if a guy said that to me - I'd just love him even more, I love it when guys are romantic - it is sooo sweet!




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Even if it's grammatically incorrect? :?
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Dude, Snoink, looking into her eyes IS the action! And it's a very fun action, too... But I think sometimes it creeps people out when I look into their eyes and I don't know them >_<

What they don't realize is that other people are staring at less honorable places just as much- but do they get creeped out about that? NO! Hmph.




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Bobo wrote:Dude, Snoink, looking into her eyes IS the action! And it's a very fun action, too... But I think sometimes it creeps people out when I look into their eyes and I don't know them >_<

What they don't realize is that other people are staring at less honorable places just as much- but do they get creeped out about that? NO! Hmph.


Agree'd...

Anywho, i'm never romantic! It's just not me. I tell them straight out. *shrugs* Easier, straight to the point, practical.
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