Do you think I am Romantic, or a Passionate Nothing?

Snoink wrote:Even if it's grammatically incorrect?

Yes, because it shows they tried, even if they are rubbish at english or what ever... It just makes it even more cute >=]

Okay girls, look I am sorry about my grammar. But when you are writing something to someone you love does grammar matter? Or does what you say to them matter? I rely on inspiration not grammatical function. But here I will fix it.


Every time I look into your eyes, for every time I gaze upon your face. I not only see what you are but also what you have made me.

Actually, I don't think it was wrong in the first place. Not to mention you just made two sentence fragments.

I couldn't say that to a girl with breaking into laughter.

some people are romantic, while others are not. some girls like romantic guys, some dont.

I believe that a guy should spend time trying his best to make his girl smile. Because when I see a girl smile from something that I have said; it was worth all the thought that was put into it.

But, I do see what you mean about saying it in person. For what I write is for a small note or a text.

It would seem weird sayin it in public, because its just not meant for that.

I mean like in person; I wouldn't pull out something like Shakespeare, but I would remind that girl everyday that she is special and beautiful to me.

Everyday we rely on each other for that day, sharing the moments that we have, forever longing for more.

Don't worry about the future or what it may hold, for it can only hold something special for you.

How are These???

Mackdaddy, please, enough with the lines. in a more serious tone, the first one is no good. the second one is too done up for a girl to appreciate when shes in the moment. more like "Don't worry about tomorrow or what is to come, because i'm here, and it can only hold something special for you."

brandenwallace you are banned from this thing.

You are dead when it comes to romance.

So dont bother to show and express yourself when you cant conquer to simply get a girl to like you.

Thankyou.

Excuse me Mackdaddy. I meant no offense. I'm just not one for lines. I'm more for things that you make up when you are in a supreme moment with a girl. And if it doesnt sound quite all as good as some lines, she will at least think it is cute.

lines dont work....trust me.

Pre recorded lines are for players. I prefer to gaze into her eyes and whisper a simple i love you... or when i can tell shes wanting it, write her a short, few paragraphs, metaphoric romance story of ours lives. I know my techniques work because i have good success.

And what, pray tell, is a "good success" for a 15 year old? Please tell me your not having sex...

But lines are for tools. The only one that ever REMOTELY works is "I tried for a long time to think of a line to give you, but then I realized that you've heard em all, So I figured I'd just introduce myself."

Or, if you can do a really good Woody Allen impression, say in your Woody Allen voice "You wanna be in my movie?"
And that most likely won't work. Although, its worked for my freind Pat. meh.

Like I said, lines are for tools.

I have vowed to not have sex until I am married. Success for me consists of meeting someone new, laughing and crying with them, feeling the warmth (or giving them warmth) of their skin. Love is much deeper than just a moment of physical pleasure. Let your mind rest Sabradan.

Well then, good for you. I applaud your willpower. For me, as long as you only have sex as part of a stable relationship, thats good enough. But again, good for you.