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StellaThomas
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:50 pm
StellaThomas says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:50 pm
Thought I would give this another go :)

Would you like a friendly, helpful crtique that will give you sound advice and not useless praise or insults? Then you've come to the right place!

I'll do all fiction except for fanfiction and will attempt to review poetry to the best of my abilities.

So just give me a link and I'll get right on it!

-Stella x
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fluteluvr77
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:53 pm
fluteluvr77 says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:53 pm
First request!! :D

Loveable Torment by me!

Shred it please?

Thanks, dear!
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*writewatiwant*
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:57 pm
*writewatiwant* says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:57 pm
Hi Stella! I'm here ^^
I would like to ask you to review my NaPo's thread. it's a disaster. It's called: The Disaster!
Here's the link: topic46629.html

Thanks Stella!
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mizz-iceberg
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:29 am
mizz-iceberg says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:29 am
Hello Stella!

Could you please review this poem for me? I'm not too proud of it and I need some help.

topic47076.html


Thanks in advance!
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:15 pm
Incognito says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:15 pm
And if you really wish to critique a slightly lengthy one, you could always take gander at mine.
It is for a contest and I have time before hand to take in peoples advice and edit it so any help would be lovely!

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george-oram
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Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:25 pm
george-oram says... · Thu Apr 23, 2009 9:25 pm
Hey there :):)

Fancy having a look at a short story? Its a first draft, so I need help on everything! I know i need to develop my character descriptions more, so any ideas on that part would be loved!

Anyway, it is found here

topic47103.html

Thanks in Advance :)




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StellaThomas
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Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:13 pm
StellaThomas says... · Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:13 pm
Okay, I've done those. Anybody else like some?
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Lord Anzius
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Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:19 pm
Lord Anzius says... · Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:19 pm
Please review:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post548466.html?highlight=#548466
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StellaThomas
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Sat May 02, 2009 10:06 pm
StellaThomas says... · Sat May 02, 2009 10:06 pm
Done! Anybody else?
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Sat May 02, 2009 10:44 pm
200397 says... · Sat May 02, 2009 10:44 pm
Hey, Stella! Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry, and I want to have it in its best form.

Ashes, Ashes

Thanks!

~Sunny




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Sun May 17, 2009 1:07 pm
StellaThomas says... · Sun May 17, 2009 1:07 pm
I'm still open, everybody! Done yours, Sunny.
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Mon May 18, 2009 2:27 am
sugarxsnow says... · Mon May 18, 2009 2:27 am
Hello~


I would like to have this reviewed:


topic48166.html


Thank you very much! :)


Have a nice day~




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Tue May 19, 2009 11:36 am
Hippie says... · Tue May 19, 2009 11:36 am
Here's one for you.

topic46506.html

The Accidental Rebellion chapter 3. I believe you reviewed the prologue for this as well.

Thanks a lot.
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Lord Anzius
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Tue May 26, 2009 6:54 pm
Lord Anzius says... · Tue May 26, 2009 6:54 pm
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47319.html

here please
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Tue May 26, 2009 11:56 pm
Winter's Twelfth Night says... · Tue May 26, 2009 11:56 pm
Hey Stella! I would love it if you could review this for me:
topic48548.html

Please shred it to bits. Really. Tear it apart. :D
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
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