Hi! *waves at computer screen* This is my first time on NaPo, so I'm kindda late. Like, really, really late, but I'm still trying. So here goes today's poem! I'm really sorry it turned out so awful. It has no rhyming scheme or stanza scheme. Can I still post it on the Lyric Poetry forum? I'm new at this, so I don't really know... Anyway, here's the first disaster!
April's 12
Dreams on a spring breeze
by Kat
The spring breeze shook safely
the branches of the broken tree.
Underneath it, a sigh was heard,
as the girl cried. Her dreams
were taken away, and she
couldn't protest or say a word.
Can you say no to your beloved?
She lost her dreams for him.
They where shut away, shoved,
They were forgot and lost.
She had big dreams, things to
achieve, something to believe in.
Her future was laid out for her, until
she met him, and it all blew away,
like the spring breeze.
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