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If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.
Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.




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I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Hiya guys! Life's been pretty hectic lately so sorry for the extremely long waits. I'll try to review all the requests I have already as soon as possible. But, I think I'm going to close this thread until everything calms down a bit.

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Darling wifey- don't think you have to do mine! You know what, don't bother, all right? You're too busy! :D
Click-ity click! Reviews here. :)
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Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

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Jaz - I'll finish tomorrow...

Music - I'm half done!

Everyone else is done though! Any more?
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Hello! When you get around to it, I cold use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's short, so it shouldn't take you too long. I really just need constructive criticism, overall would be good, I think. Thanks in advance!

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Oops, almost forgot; it's supernatural, though not too much at ths point in the story, since it's only the preface.
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Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

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Thanks again!

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Here ya go, dear.

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Please tear it up. It's definitely not my best. XD
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Whoa!! I didn't check this in a while and I just got back! :P

So, I'll get started soon! Comin' right up, y'all!
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Ok but only Cause you asked and I'm desperate
You can choose one of the few below ( you don't need to do all of them)

(I'm a poet For your information :D )


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46613.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44468.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43385.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42799.html

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Jaz, Threnody, and Kamas are done!

Others are coming...

**Edit** - Apparently I have to redo Kamas...But, I'll get to the rest of y'all first...
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Pssst. Over here. I'll do a trade. If you review my work, I will review one of yours. xD
Don't feel obligated to review this. It is for a contest and I wish to fix it up before the deadline. ;)

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Jaz, Threnody and Pop are done.

Jamie - Tomorrow.

Incog - I don't know if I can review it, dear! I've never read the Other Boleyn Girl. PM me a quick summary?

Kamas - Tomorrow or the day after, dear!
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Okay, let's try posting the link again:

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