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fluteluvr77 · 2009-04-03T02:26:31Z

Hi everyone! I've been meaning to get back into reviewing lately, so I'd figured I'd open up one of these threads. I'll review almost all types of prose. However, art and photography is a total weakness for me...Ask for one of those and you'll get something like "Whoa, that looks cool!" :wink: So, I prefer to do : ~Poetry ~Short stories ('specially horror XD) ~Fanfiction (If I've read the book...) I stay away from ~Art and photography ~Chapter stories...I might do them if they aren't too long though...So, you can try! ~Anything that's more than 3-4 pages long...If it is, please post it in parts! ~Anything to do with Twilight...Unless it is one of those hysterical parodies :lol: Anywayz, I would like you to specify what kind of review you would like. I can do a nitpick-y one, a general view, or specific concepts that should be worked on... As for rewards, British chocolate in the mail would be appreciated...If not, telling me whether the review was helpful or not would do as well! :wink: I think that's about it for now! Just send me the link and the genre and I'll be sure to review it as soon as possible! fluteluvr77

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:09 pm

MuffinWriter says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:09 pm

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If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.

Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.

wiccaryan

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:47 pm

wiccaryan says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:47 pm

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

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Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:51 pm

fluteluvr77 says... · Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:51 pm

Hiya guys! Life's been pretty hectic lately so sorry for the extremely long waits. I'll try to review all the requests I have already as soon as possible. But, I think I'm going to close this thread until everything calms down a bit.

Love,
fluteluvr77<3

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Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:14 pm

Musicaloo7311 says... · Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:14 pm

Darling wifey- don't think you have to do mine! You know what, don't bother, all right? You're too busy!

Click-ity click! Reviews here.

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Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:30 am

asxz says... · Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:30 am

Well, I'm not looking for a review as such, But could you please look at my blog? It's not a blog as such, but a story from which I post daily... you know, so i don't have to think about chapters, but can just write a diary for my character!
Well, I'm not looking for a review, just a small look at what I'm doing and what I could change! Could you please post your comments [they can be as short as you like] in the comments section of whatever post you look at? There are only 3 so far, so it shouldn't take you that long, and you don't even need to review! I don't mind if you take a few days/ a week though... That's sweet!
Oh, and I almost forgot! Here's the link to [my blog] 'Dear Diary'

Thank you so much!

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:44 am

fluteluvr77 says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:44 am

Jaz - I'll finish tomorrow...

Music - I'm half done!

Everyone else is done though! Any more?

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:42 am

Jamie_rocks says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:42 am

Hello! When you get around to it, I cold use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's short, so it shouldn't take you too long. I really just need constructive criticism, overall would be good, I think. Thanks in advance!

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Oops, almost forgot; it's supernatural, though not too much at ths point in the story, since it's only the preface.

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:45 pm

Threnody says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:45 pm

Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

Link
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Thanks again!

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:46 pm

anti-pop says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:46 pm

Here ya go, dear.

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Please tear it up. It's definitely not my best. XD

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changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:58 pm

fluteluvr77 says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:58 pm

Whoa!! I didn't check this in a while and I just got back!

So, I'll get started soon! Comin' right up, y'all!

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Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:32 pm

Kamas says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:32 pm

Ok but only Cause you asked and I'm desperate
You can choose one of the few below ( you don't need to do all of them)

(I'm a poet For your information

)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46613.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44468.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43385.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42799.html

Thanks Lots
K A M A S :wink:

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Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:20 am

fluteluvr77 says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:20 am

Jaz, Threnody, and Kamas are done!

Others are coming...

**Edit** - Apparently I have to redo Kamas...But, I'll get to the rest of y'all first...

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Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:21 pm

Incognito says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:21 pm

Pssst. Over here. I'll do a trade. If you review my work, I will review one of yours. xD
Don't feel obligated to review this. It is for a contest and I wish to fix it up before the deadline.

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Thu Apr 23, 2009 2:14 am

fluteluvr77 says... · Thu Apr 23, 2009 2:14 am

Jaz, Threnody and Pop are done.

Jamie - Tomorrow.

Incog - I don't know if I can review it, dear! I've never read the Other Boleyn Girl. PM me a quick summary?

Kamas - Tomorrow or the day after, dear!

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Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:43 am

Jamie_rocks says... · Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:43 am

Okay, let's try posting the link again:

topic46874.html

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