a poem (warning, this piece has a lot of adult language)

87 posts1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6
User avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 128
Ieatworms, you are my new favorite person!
Sing lustily and with a good courage. Beware of singing as if you were half dead, or half asleep; but lift up your voice with strength.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 915
Qi -- your poem brought about emotions, yes, and perhaps Gwen Stefani doesn't (that's an opinion, by the way), but that still doesn't make this art.

Gal -- My 'dictionary' definition of 'art' comes explicitly from Woolfe, Eliot, and Irigaray.

Art is based on tradition.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 67
If art were based on tradition, then art would never change.

Your taking an intellectual stance on an emotional activity. Your implying by that, that only smart people can do art, which most obviously is not true. You think too much brad. Art isn't based on tradition, drawings and paintings are. But tradition isn't what makes it art. Art makes tradition. Artists are saying something about their time, not the other way around. They observe, and interperate current events, not past ones. Weddings are based on tradition, laws are based on tradition, and neither are considered art in any way.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 915
How can we place a value on art if it is not inextricably bound up in tradition?

And, the artist who goes in seek of anything 'new' ends up finding perversities, not new emotions. The artist who has done true searching knows that art never changes -- only the alignment of the (same) material changes.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 126
Yes it can be about one's feelings, but poetry is a metrical composition, which, it seems to me, this 'poem' lacks, it being, some kind of flow (not meaning it has to rhyme!). It may just be my taste in poems, and their association, but this just doesn't ring as poetry to me.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 67
well, lyrical poetry does, yes. But there are no rules for the composition of poetry. This would be free style.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 915
I'm not saying it isn't poetry. It just isn't artistic.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 67
well, neither is modern art, but its still a million dollar a year industry.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 915
What's your point? I said it wasn't art.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 67
well, obviously you have a poor sense as to what art is.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 128
Art is art because someone, somewhere decides to call it art. Its that simple.
Sing lustily and with a good courage. Beware of singing as if you were half dead, or half asleep; but lift up your voice with strength.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 915
well, obviously you have a poor sense as to what art is.


Obviously, it is you who lacks the artistic sensibility (You can see how these kinds of generic statements about taste are totally meaningless; you just put up a front because you didn't have an argument.).

How can we place a value on different pieces of art? By your definition(s), we can't, and this means that all artists to this point were not 'artists' in any sense -- there was no defining characteristics between the man who devoted his life to art and the man who wrote one poem. Both were artists.

A piece of art visibly changes the constellation that is made by tradition. This piece certainly doesn't do that.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 67
Your still thinking too much about it. Art has nothing to do with tradition. If it did, it would never change. We'd still be looking at stick pictures of bison and migratory patterns.
For centuries, theologians have been explaining the unknowable in terms of the-not-worth-knowing.
- HL Mencken
Lie together like butt.
Presenting the GFuture, soon to be the Gnow, reality presented by Google.
Welcome to GEarth.
~Baske in the randomness~




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 6831
Reviews 594
GUYS. If you want to debate the true definition of art, PLEASE take it to the debate and serious discussion board. Thank you.

Now, let's please leave this thread for further comments on Qi's poem, shall we?
Love and Light




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 6194
Reviews 481
I feel stupid for not realizing the point of this poem at the beginning. But I did find that last line amusing anyway. Now your blog makes much more sense lol.



First you broke my moustache, now you break my heart.
— MaybeAndrew