Young Writers Society

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"What happened?" asked Alyse.
"T-The kid." I said pointing at a toddler that had just (Sorry I can't think of a way to how the toddler died.)
"Oh My God." said Korah finally breaking out of his thoughts,
"We have to help him!" said Evan referring to the toddler.
"There is no point." I said my voice cracking.
"He he's already dead." I said my voice barely a whisper.
"What?!" said Alyse her voice getting an octive higher.
But I didn't answer her.
I didn't want to answer her.
Why?
Why me?
Why had I gotten such a terrible power?
People said getting power made you special. It was something you earned.
It didn't make me feel special.
I didn't want to earn this kind of a power.
Every second...every day I would have to live...knowing when the people in front of me were going to die.

Does that mean I'm a villain? Hmm can someone bring me in please?

* no the elements not given to the characters made were given to the villains*

Evan~~

she came running. For the first time i had ever seen, Echo was running. The blind girl had always been careful and walked pretty slowly in case she hit something but she was now storming.

"i can see." she said.

"you can." Alyse said. "how."

"well i can't see exactly, but i can feel you through the earth, its telling me where you are and how tall and stuff like that."

"great someone else who already can use their powers." Korah said and slumped down.

"so I'm guessing your earth the." i asked

"well duh." she answered back.

"cool, try bending it, i got lightning." i said.

"i know i heard you scream it." she said plainly. "what about the rest of you."

"well Alyse has Ice, Korah has metal, and Sidney got soul" i answered

Ahhh... poor Korah,... and do we need some people to play as “Bad Guys” cause I don’t mind making another character. I mean we need some evil threat to fight against, don’t we?

I kind of like Kor as a nickname...

Okay we need some direction here! Like what is our goal? Our Mission? Who are the baddies... can I be one by the way? And you said were on a different planet so... are their witches and wizards? Kings and Queens? Presidents? Guns or bows? A little background could help, thanks!

Korah - Metal

Korah rolled his eyes, mostly in frustration as Echo began to show them how she could already lift rocks and toss them around with her mind. Plants even seemed to respond well to her, springing up out of no where as they stretched their long stems toward the sun. Perfect. Everyone was more capable, gifted, whatever you wanted to call it, except for him.

He looked over at Sydney who wasn’t saying much. She just stood, slumped against a nearby building, wiping what few tears were left from her face. Well... maybe he wasn’t jealous of everyone. Even though he didn’t quite understand it still, she had somehow been able to see someone’s death before it had occurred. And she still looked pretty torn up about it. Sighing heavily, but knowing it was the “right” thing to do, he quickly tramped over to where she was.

“Hey Sidney,” he murmured, “how you doing?”

“How do you think,” she muttered bitterly, “I just saw someone die Korah! In my head, I saw how much time they had left and I... couldn’t do anything but watch...”

“Hey, hey, its not your fault,” Korah gently said as he slid down beside her, “It will take a while to get used to it all, I mean we have all been changed, our lives have been altered forever.”

“I just wish... maybe I had gotten a different power,” Sidney whispered.

Korah snorted, “Hah, you and me both!” Here that he snapped at the voice in his head [/i]I wish you weren’t even my power![/I], she didn’t answer of course, which only frustrated him more. “Well we should go join the others, Echo just got here, and I am sure the High Priest will be arriving soon to talk to us about our gifts, the God’s alone know things are about to get crazy.”

Standing up he stretched out his hand toward Sydney, offering to help her up. She grabbed it with a timid smile, and the two hurried over to join the others who were watching echo manipulate a small group of rocks. She twirled them around her head with a small smile on her face...

"Woah Echo." I said.
"Ya?" she said grinning.
"H-How did you?" I asked.
"My powers." She replied her smile bright.
"I'm so happy for you." I said.
I looked over at Kor who was still kind of mad about his powers.
I nudged him softly and whispered, "Don't worry. I bet your powers are aweome when you learn how to use them more." I said.
"I don't know. I mean metal? Seriosuly." he said.
"Oh c'mon. Lighten up. It can't be that bad. Hey I know why don't you test it out?" I asked.

Alyse~ Ice

Alyse had never felt so happy and care-free and joyful before. She was just sitting there, snow piling down on her, making the occasional snow ball. Korah was talking with Sydney, who was still traumatized. She had never been the type to comfort. She could only comfort animals.

"Hey Kor!" Alyse thought, thinking fast. His hands were occupied, and before he knew it, she had chucked an ice ball straight for his head. "That's ice by the way, not snow!"

She hoped he wouldn't get clogged in the head. She wanted to see if he could use his powers for defense. If need be she'd just get Echo to make a wall of earth, or get Evan to zap it and make it melt.
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* okay background, this place is like an older version of Asia, If you want DSF you can make Korah a villain, but other then that i will be control the villains, the mission will be brought when all the characters post or tomorrow latest.*

Nahh... I won’t make Korah a villain, I just thought you’d like some help. It usually makes it more exciting to have a couple of people playing bad guys instead of one. So if you change your mind just let me know! I’m good at it, trust me.

Oh and I think it may be a while before Korah actually get’s proficient with his power. I mean come on, there should be one odd duckling in the group!

Korah - Metal

“Hey Kor!” Alyse yelled.

Surprised Korah turned around just in time to see a ball of ice hurtling straight towards his face. He was so distracted he didn’t hear anything else that Alyse yelled as time seemed to slow down to a crawl. The ball of ice flew straight for him, and was only inches from his face when a loud zapping sound echoed in the courtyard and the ball of ice disappeared in a bright flash.

No one moved. Most just stood there in shock, as all eyes turned to stare at Evan who’s outstretched palm was still smoking from the blast of lighting that had emanated from his hand. “Whoa...” Evan whispered, even he was surprised by the display of power.

“You almost killed me!” Korah shouted, more surprised then angry as he cast an angry glare at Alyse.

She just gave him an innocent shrug, “I was just trying to shock you into using your powers,” she called.

“Oh well thanks for the help, instead you almost crushed my face,” Korah snapped back, trying not to let his temper get the better of him a he took a calming breath. "And sparky over there nearly fried me!" he said, pointing at Evan.

"hey now, thats not fair," Evan called, "If anything you should be bowing down and thanking me, after all i saved your life!'

“Hahaha, well at least Evan is fast on the draw,” Alyse called back with a grin.

If Korah could have, he would have stayed mad at her, maybe even given her a little of the silent treatment. But who could stay mad at Alyse? So with chagrined smile he dashed forward to where her pile of snow was, and grabbing a hand full, shoved it down her shirt. The whole thing happened so fast, she barley had time to react as a surprise shriek exited her throat.

Letting out a whoop Korah dodged to the side as an ice ball zoomed for him, crashing and shattering on the ground. “Gonna have to do better then that Alyse,” he teased with a grin as she tried to shake off what little snow hadn’t already melted and soaked into her clothes.

“Oh, that was foolish,” Alyse called back, “A boy who can’t use his powers shouldn’t be picking on a girl who can.”

“Hey Evan!” Korah called, “How about we do a little boys against girls!” Reaching down he picked up a stone and chucked it at Echo with a grin. The stone only flew a few meters however before it came to freeze in midair in front of the blind girls face. “Oops...” Korah murmured as the ground beneath his feet suddenly gave away. With a yelp and a laugh he somersaulted away as Evan tossed a bally of lighting, not enough to hurt but just enough to sting, at Alyse as a small battle between the friends once again broke out...

We don’t have much to do so... here is something I guess

Lol..

I threw a snowball at Kor's face, and it hit it with a smack.
"That's revenge on Alyse's behalf!" I said laughing.
"And this is for saving Kor!" I said throwing another snowball at Evan.
"Yeah!" Said Echol laughing.
Than as if by magic she twisted some snow into a ball and threw it at the guys.
She did it all with her mind though, not even using her hands.
"Awesome!" I shouted laughing at the guy's faces that were covered in snow.

Alyse~

Alyse was clearly mad-- and not to mention uncomfortable-- about the snow melting in her shirt. "That little pervert..." she had mumbled to herself as she hid behind a tree. Suddenly it was yanked from the ground, roots and all. Whoa, Echo sure did have a handle on her powers already!

Alyse jumped to the side, her feet kicking at a rose bush when she heard a soft and faint meow. She whipped around. There, beaten and broken, was a small kitten. Malnourished, loss of fur... stress.

Alyse felt a small shock as a lightening ball of Evan's hit her back, but she rushed headlong into the bushes. The poor kitten jumped when Alyse came up to it. "You poor thing...," she murmured, stroking its tiny head with her finger. It mewed quietly. It was so helpless.

I sure hope no one comes here right now! She thought to herself. She'd never shown anyone this soft side of her. She scooped the tiny kitten up in her arms and cradled it gently against her neck, where it was nice and warm.

"Aw! You're so sweet! Ice whispered to her. Shut up! Alyse growled in her head as she appeared again. She sunk down in the grass again, this time just working to keep the little kitten warm.
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The only reason I did this was just to give everyone a 'head's up' to what Alyse will be like.

Evan~~

"hey I'm on your side in this fight." i said. "and Alyse asked me to do that if it got to close." then i jumped up and shacked the snow from my face. I then chucked another ball of lightning at Kor. This one hit him in the leg leaving a slight burn. It was not enough to do that much damage but would sting for a few minutes.

I laughed.
"Poor Kor! You're all alone!" I said
"Oh c'mon guys!" he said.
"Too bad!" I said chucking another snowball at him.
This was so much fun!

Evan~~

I caught up to Alyse.

"sorry about the Zap." i said. "i was aiming at Kor but he got out of the way before that and it hit you, it was all a big Accident."

"its okay." she said. then i noticed the Kitten.

"who is this." i said looking at it.

"i found her here, i'm trying to warm her up." she said.

"here let me help." i said then mad a small but hot electrical force on my hand. I waved it over the kitten. She seemed to warm up a bit. She the meowed and moved a bit on Alyse's shoulder to give me a lick.

"i think she likes me." i said deactivating my electrical hand.

Alyse~
"I'm sure she likes you very much," Alyse said, with a hint of sarcasm in her voice. "And I'm sure she'd like you even more if you could help find her a vet!"

Alyse laughed wryly at her cheesy joke. "And the whole 'zappy' thing, yeah, that's fine. It definitely wasn't as bad as having snow shoved down my shirt..." Alyse sighed.

The kitten was coal black, well, from the small patches of fur that Alyse could see the cat was. And she had a very long tail for a kitten. Doom, Alyse thought.

"What?" Ice said.

I'm going to name the cat Doom, gosh!
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