Hunted

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Shane

Scanning her, Shane contemplated his options. She is kinda beautiful, he thought. He got up and Abigail took a step back. He smirked. She was scared of him. He walked around her and slammed the door. He needed time to think. He could hear her following him.

Kat

Trembling, Kat looked around, trying to figure a way out of her prison. She was in a small 10 by 10 room with no windows and only one door, which is solid steel and always locked. There was a small crack in the ceiling. Kat stood on her rickety bed and tried to pry the apart. It started to crumble and slowly come away. Now she had a small fist sized hole in the ceiling. Suddenly, the door opened behind her. She quickly turned around. Luke was standing there, standing at the hole that she had made.
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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Luke - Hunter

"Wow. You are one talented lady." Luke whistled at the hole that Kat has made, while in his head.....

Crap, crap, crap, crap...Shane cannot find out about this.

"Why do you keep on coming in here?" Kat asked, glaring at him again.

Abigail - Hunter

What was up with Shane?

Abigail felt her heart race like it had never before as she followed him.

Well, it might not be a good idea to follow him.

But she couldn't stop. She just kept on following her, her mind far away from the brats hiding in the forest.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Jessalyn

Jess had dragged Luke away from Shane and Abbie to go look for more brats, but of course he had to go visit the brat they already had.
Jess, get a hold of yourself, she thought, you can't possibly be jealous of that little girl.


Marc


"No, its kind of a good idea, really." Marc insisted."It would be better to get killed fighting them than for them to sneak up on us or us to starve to death."
"He has a point."Chris said turning to Anna, looking for her reaction.
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


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Anna - Hunted

"I guess. But first, we have to plan it out," Anna said.

"Well duh," March said.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Chris

"That's... wow. Okay, so, uh... We should probably set up a surveillance around the mostster's compound... Figure out their daily scheduale, their weaknesses... What say you, Anna?"

Anna considered it.




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Kat

She sat down on the bed, trembling. Luke just stood there, staring. A tear rolled down her cheek. She was never going to get out.

Kat buried her face in her hands and sobbed. She felt him walk over and sit next to her. She knew that she should have slapped him, right there and then, but some part deep inside of her welcomed his comfort. She leaned into his chest and sobbed.
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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Luke - Hunter

He sat there, holding Kat as she sobbed into his chest. He didn't know what else to do; she just looked so helpless and lost, and it made Luke want to help her badly. More than anything else.

Luke started humming a song that he remembered his mom had sung to him. A song that he hadn't remembered in a long time.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Kat

She quietly listened to the song. She had never heard it before, but it was very beautiful and comforting. Kat instantly felt embarrassed and angry with herself. She hated him, didn't she? She wanted to.

She sat up and wiped her cheek. "I'm sorry."
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Luke - Hunter

"It's okay," he said quietly, not moving. He finally realized why that song had come to his mind.

Kat is a lot like Mom.

Luke could see the confusion on Kat's face as she struggled with thoughts and feelings inside her head.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Shane

He sat down on the chair, staring at the computer screen. It was showing Luke and the brat, cuddling. Aww.. How sweet. Puppy love. Anger coursing his veins, Shane nearly ran down to the kid's cell. He burst through the door. The brat had tears running down her face, and Luke was comforting her.

"Luke, come here." Shane led him out of the cell and slammed the door behind them. "What the hell are you thinking?"
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Luke - Hunter

"Listen Shane....."

"No, you listen to me. Why the flip are you even talking to that girl in there?" Shane was mad.

"You don't understand..."

"Then let me understand!" he yelled.

"She reminds me of mom!" Luke yelled at Shane. "Everything about her reminds me of mom."

Abigail - Hunter

She could hear Shane and Luke yelling at each other. Something about "What were you thinking?" and "She reminds me of mom!"

She started running towards them. They can't afford to lose anyone, even someone as annoying as Luke.

And plus, Abigail wanted to get to the bottom of this.
Last edited by Linx on Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Shane

"Well mom is dead! Grow up Luke! Grow up before I send you back from where you came!" Shane's eyes bulged and his veins popped. Luke took a step back, stunned. Nobody ever talked about their past. Ever.

Shane turned away and opened the door to the cell. Kat sat on the bed, trembling. He flipped over the bed, causing her to fly across the room and hit the concrete wall. Shane grabbed her by her hair and yanked her to her feet.

"Where are they?" He screamed in her face. She only shook her head. "WHERE?" She only began to cry, shaking. Shane sighed and pulled out a gun and aimed it to her head.

"One last chance! WHERE DID YOUR FRIENDS GO?"
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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*sorry. I added more onto my last post*

Abigail - Hunter

She could see Shane holding up the gun to the brat's head, yelling at her. Luke was standing out in the hallway, dazed.

"Where are they?"

"I think they went west," she sobbed, dropping her head into her hands.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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Shane

He slammed the door to the cell. Shaking his head, Shane stalked past Abigail, who looked at him questionably. He ignored her. He walked up to Luke.

"Listen idiot, you need to focus. I know you seem to like the little slut, but you need to keep your head in the game."
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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Luke - Hunter

"Slut?" Luke just looked at him.

Shane gave Luke a punch in the nose then left.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

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