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Silent Hill the orphanage- Knowledge of the game not require

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May

She woke sweating and shaking on the floor of her dorm. How did I get here? May wondered.

Just then, a worker and Lizzy came into the dorm. Lizzy looked just about as scared and shaken up as she was.

"Where's Leo?! Is he okay?" May asked.

"Yeah, hes.....fine," Lizzy looked distracted. She smiled to Smith as he left.

May started pacing around the room. "You ready to go out? It is almost dark. I need to find out what is going on," and without waiting for Lizzy to answer, May grabbed her coat and strode out the dorm and out the door.

She pulled her hood up, concealing her face. Most of the kids had disappeared around the playground at this exact time of night.

She reached the edge of the jungle gym when she heard footsteps behind her. Loud and heavy foot steps. Then, she smelled it. Rotting flesh.

May screamed.

*I don't mind of my character gets taken. :D it would make it 10 times more interesting*
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Lizzy ran back to the dorm Pippa, May, Fee, and her shared, in tears. "Oh my God Lizzy, the building had better be on fire! It's..." Pippa turned to see the clock, "... 3:20 A.M.!" Pippa said, annoyed. The two others rose sluggishly. "What's the matter Lizzy?" May asked groggily and nonchalantly. "I think there is something wrong with Leo." she said, tears slid down her cheeks. "Lets see then," Fee said, already up and bouncing. The others dragged themselves out of their warm beds. "If I hadn't been your friend, you wouldn't have gotten off so easy." May sighed. When all of them had slid on their threadbare slippers and nightgowns they quietly slipped outside. "It's right there," Lizzy said, indicating to Leo's dorm. Pippa paraded right up to it, cleared her throat, knocked on the door, and when he answered she asked, "What the hell's wrong with you? You made Lizzy cry and you know she loves you very much." Surprised by the wake up call he attempted to slam the door. May stopped it. "C'mon Leo, we all can tell that there's something wrong," May added, in a much softer tone than Pippa had used. "There is nothing wrong, bug off." He answered through gritted teeth.

Darn! Too late again. This fits above the post above me.

Pippa ran behind May with Fee following like a puppy. Is that what I think it is because if so, we're gonna need Kylar." without waiting for any reply, she screamed "KYLAR!!!!!!"
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*AHHHHH! CONFUSED POSTS! Ok. To make them both work. May is off at the playground getting attacked by both PH and NF (Pyramid head and no face) While Pippa, Fee and Lizzy are talking with Leo. Perhaps Kylar will help her *hint hint*

Lizzy-

"You should leave before someone comes." Leo warned them.
In that moment Mrs. Gullen appeared. "What are you three doing up?"
The three girls looked at her. Leo quickly closed his door. Mrs. Gullen frowned. "You three want to stay up late, then you can do it while cleaning the cafeteria."
She dragged Lizzy, and Fee and Pippa followed.



No Face ^_^-

It watched her. A small girl with blond hair, all alone. Its intentions were unknown. However one thing was sure, the smell of rotting flesh filled the air, and the blanket of mist came. May looked around. "where are you! I know you are taking the children!" May shouted.
The mist surrounded her. Now she could hear the sound of something heavy being dragged across the gravel. "You wish to acknowledge to truth?" The voice sounded familiar.
"Leo?" May whispered.
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Ha. I get it. So ignore the post above me. *Sorry* just confused...
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*Ok I am confused to...soo... May is with no face and leo, Pippa, Fee and Lizzy are with Mrs. Gullen and Kylar is somewhere....*
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*yup, that's about right, and is Leo no face, or is No Face dragging Leo? *scratches head**

May


"Why?" May asked, her voice shaking. "Why are you taking these kids?"

Leo/No Face did not answer, instead taking time to drag whatever it had in its hands and threw it in the vegetation.

May couldn't take it any longer. She ran. She sprinted along the edge of the trees, but No Face was too fast. It grabbed her from behind. She could smell the rotting flesh on its hands as it covered her mouth, preventing her to scream. It grunted, and it sounded so much like Leo that it frightened May. It was terrifying to have your friend's voice coming out of this monster.

No Face ran, dragging the limp girl along the ground.
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"Mrs. Gullen, I hate you." Pippa stated. Mrs. Gullen looked shocked and she just stood there trying to comprehend what had just been said. That was the whole plan. While she was standing there wondering what just happened Pippa yelled "Run!" All three of them dashed off before Mrs Gullen could comprehend anything. "Wow." Lizzy huffed when they had gotten far enough away. "What was that?" she asked Pippa. "Wonderful!" Pippa said cheerfully. "I'm tired. Lets get May and then go to bed." Pippa added. "You are so random, did you know that?" Lizzy told her in amazement. They wandered the place and when they couldn't find her anywhere they finally gave up. "She must have gone to sleep." Fee concluded. "Good for her. I wish I was doing the same." Pippa said and yawned to make the point. All girls forgot their search and retired.

May screamed as the creature that Leo had become pulled her into a shady clearing.
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* No face took Leo's voie, and he'll take May's eyes; however there's a twist!- wait for my post!!!!!
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WHAT HAPPENED TO LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
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Lizzy-

The girls ran towards May's voice; however something blocked their path. Before them stood a tall man wearing a bloody apron. He was wearing a giant metal pyramid over his head. He was dragging a giant knife behind him. He pulled it over his shoulder and walked towards them. Pippa grabbed Fee's arm. The three girls had no choice but to run.


No face-

It pulled the girl to the lake. May awakened and tried to scream, but her throat was dry. "Fear not. For this one will not harm you." Leo's voice coming fro him made her even more scared.
No face walked closer to her. "Everything will become clear."
He placed his hand over her eyes, and May fell asleep.

"I am not the one taking the children. It is a group of people. Called 'The Order'. Become my eyes, just as Leo became my voice. Then we will guide the others towards the truth of everything."

With that said, both the man with no face and May disappeared.
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*He's ok. He is possessed. I decided that those who are possessed (Leo and May) will not be taken. But rather be guides to help solve to mystery*
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*How about if the Order ever finds out about Kylar's power they will immediatly try to capture him? Is that okay?*

Kylar-

Kylar ran. Across the road, over the fence, past the playground to the field. In the distance he saw three forms huddled on the ground Pippa, Fee, and Lizzy. above them stood one of the beasts from the other worlds.

He saw the creature twist, bringing the oversized knife up. Kylar wasn't going to make it in time. An angry screech filled the air, and a white streak dove out of the sky, blocking the attack. Relieved Kylar skidded to a halt, and he helped the girls to their feet. The white light circled once, before settling on Kylar's outstretched wrist. Taking the form of a white hawk, it's piercing eyes the same red as Kylar's.

Laughing softly Kylar reached out and stroked the hawk's wing. "Proteja. You actually came to help me?"

The hawk cocked his head, and fixed him with one piercing eye. "Of course I came. What else are Guardian Spirit's for. I didn't come before because you were never in any genuine danger, young idiot. You and your new friends have gotten into quite the fix."

Before Kylar could retort the Pyramid monster hissed, it's voice echoing with menace. "You do not belong in this world." With that it dissapeared in a flash of red light.

Kylar sighed and turned to check on the girls behind him, giving them what he hoped was a reassuring smile. "Sorry guys. But it looks like the thing is gone. Are you alright?"

*Fun fact. The Hawk's name Proteja = Protector in Romanian




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*so should I just jump in and place myself at the orphanage? I'm a wee bit confused*
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*Yeah, you can follow along, and like observe how kids are going missing and that Leo and May are now possessed. Maybe even befriend the kids**oh and Maki Chan? What do I do with May right now? Is she still with No Face?*
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*No. After Fee, Pippa, Kylar and Lizzy return she'll be at her dorm. Acting all strange. May/Leo are going to give them clues about "The Order". I can't post yet. Still at school!*
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