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Silent Hill the orphanage- Knowledge of the game not require

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Leo heard what May said wilst she sat with the girls in the fornt.

"I will" He said.

Lizzy was happy to hear he was coming.
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Lizzy-

Lizzy was shocked when Leo smiled at her. She listened to her friends chatter on; however she began to feel really tire. Lizzy rested her head on the desk and fell asleep...


******************************(BWAHAHAHA! Scary dream time :twisted: Just to let everyone know that anyone can enter the 'fog world' through a dream. Just remember not to make things too confusing!)

Lizzy opened her eyes, she was in her classroom, but something was different. The room was empty and it was all foggy. "Where is everyone?" She wondered.
"Hello!" Lizzy shouted.
The sound of her echoing voice made her tremble. She was all alone. Then the sounds of footsteps made her jump. "I-is someone out there?" She whispered.
Lizzy walked towards the door and opened it slowly. The hallways were empty. Lizzy closed the door behind her and followed the sound of the footsteps. She turned the corner and froze. There was a human figure down the hallway, however it seemed to be limping. It frightened Lizzy. "H-hello?"
The figure stopped and slowly turned around. "OH MY GOD!" Lizzy screamed.
The figure was no more than a monster. It looked like a naked man with a bag of slimy flesh stitched over his upper body. It looked like it was wearing a straight jacket made of flesh. It walked closer to her. It was stumbling while it moved. It seemed impossible that a creature like that could be alive at all.
Lizzy was frozen with fear. "S-someone help." She tried to scream, but her throat was tight and she struggled to breath. But then a boy grabbed Lizzy's arm and pulled her away. Lizzy let out a shriek. The boy shouted. "Shut up!"
Lizzy recognized that voice. "K-Kylar?"


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Pippa raced to meet up with her friends. Lizzy and Kylar stood hiding in a classroom. "What is that," Pippa asked, not frightened but inquisitive.
"i have no idea," Lizzy answered. The silhouette drew closer and the air reeked of rotting flesh. A piercing scream rang through the halls. Fee ran down the opposite hallway. They saw her through the window in the door. "Fee!" Pippa cried. "Oh no. I have to go..." Kylar took her shoulder and pulled her back. He looked at her with his piercing red eyes. "Don't go out there." he told her. She pulled away defiantly, "That's my sister out there with that thing. Don't tell me I can't rescue her!" "It won't end well." he told her seriously. "How do you..." she realized what he meant. "I'll die trying." she said and glared at him. She flung open the door.
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*Sorry I was late guys, I have the flu, so I might not post very regularly the next few days. And a warning to people, Kylar's visions are often symbolic, and even he has a hard time making sense of them.*

Kylar-

He swore under his breath and edged backwards away from the creature. Tightening his hold to stop Lizzy from talking, Kylar checked to make sure the class was still empty before pushing her in and closing the door.

Kylar waited silently for the monster to pass by before turning to face Lizzy. "Damnit Liz, what are you doing here?"

She scowled and put her hands on her hips. "How should I know, I fell asleep in class and woke up here. Anyway where is 'here'? Isn't this the school?"

Frustrated Kylar ran his fingers through gray-black hair. "Yes and no. Think of this as a warped space. The rest I'll explain later, we aren't exactly safe here..." He trailed off as his eyes unfocused. Blood rained from the sky and the world faded around him. But Liz still stood in front of him untouched by the blood-rain.

Groaning he put a hand over his eyes and leaned against the door. "Oh no Lizzy. Not you too."




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Lizzy-

"Kylar, we have to go back after her!" Lizzy shouted.
She was about to run out of the door, but Kylar grabbed her hand. "We can't just. AHH!" He was interrupted.
Pain shot through everyone's head.
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The group huddled in the classroom, listening to the screeches coming from the monster. Pain inflicting through every body's heads. Lizzy and Kylar looked as if they were in a trance. The whole group was shaking uncontrollably.

"Is-is it g-gone?" May asked, but before anybody could answer her, the door to the classroom was ripped off its hinges and thrown at May and Alessa, knocking them across the room. They laid in a heap just below the window. Blood poured from a wound on May's head.
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Can I please join? Here is my character profile if I can.

NAME: Samuel Smith

BIOGRAPHY: Samuel and his much younger brother, Gabriel, lead what some would call a charmed life. Samuel hated it. As cliche as it was, and he hates being cliche, he was the black sheep of the family. He hated his life and rebeled in every way possible. When he was eighteen he got in some trouble with drug trafficing. They could't prove much so he got two years. While he was in jail his parents were murdered and with no where else to send his fourteen year old brother, Gabriel was sent to an orphanage in the town where they grew up, Silent Hill.
Samuel promised himself he would get out of jail and change, for Gabriel. But, upon his release, Samuel found out that Gabriel had gone missing a few days prior.
For the past year Samuel has lived in Silent Hill and worked at the orphanage. He thinks something is up and he wants to get to the bottom of everything and find his brother.
He is found at the orphanage often.

AGE: 21

APPEARANCE: Samuel is muscular, but lean. He doesn't have that big broad six foot figure, he has more of a relaxed one. He is not riduculously skinny by any means, but he isn't abnormally large either. What else do you have to do in prison besides exercise and think? While Sammy did exercise, he has really always been a thinker. The brains of the operation.

HEIGHT: six foot

WEIGHT: about two hundred, give or take a couple pounds

BODY TYPE: lean, yet muscular

FACE TYPE: very mature, and soft

COMPLEXION: very clean and sort of cream colored. He does not tan very easily

EYES: deep blue eyes that almost look black. They are the kind of eyes that you look into and think, how much does this guy hurt inside? You can get lost in them and forget your whole train of thought. They also mask his emmotion alot, he always looks deep in thought when you look at his eyes.

HAIR: Shaggy, and chestnut brown with some lighter strands here or there.

CLOTHING STYLE: jeans and a button down kind of guy.

SPEAKING STYLE: american accent, he is eloquent when he wants to be. He doesn't like slang and does not cuss very often.

GENERAL DEMEANOR: He can seem like a prude because he is very smart. He doesn't let much get to him and brushes a lot of things off, things that other people would freak out about. He tends to look angry a lot, or stand offish. He is good with kids though.

CAREER: He started up a small internet cafe in Silent Hill and it has been rather succesful in the past eight months.

PREJUDICES: he doesn't like people who think they are above it all and he has some problems with God (yet he attends church every sunday-his reasoning is very interesting though).

BEST QUALITIES: Smart, dedicated, able to keep secrets really well and is a good confidant if you get past his rough and tough exterior.

WORST QUALITIES: he is hard to approach, he doesn't let people in easily, he keeps to himself, and he is sometimes so consumed with what he is doing he forgets the rest of the world.

WEAKNESSES: He desperatly wants to find his brother and he wants a normal life, after all the pain he caused his family and his friends he just wishes he could take it back. He can be brought down about his brother and black mailed.

HOBBIES: all things computer, and he really enjoys reading and educating himself.

TALENTS: very good motorcycle driver.
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Kylar-

With effort he shook off the pain in his head as the monster lumbered through the door. Kylar twisted his wrists, palming the daggers he always kept hidden. The blade's were plainly designed to be used, and had been often. But a single ruby was set into the guard of the weapons.

"For crying out loud, I'm no bloody hero!" Smoothly he tossed the daggers end over end. One embedded itself in its head, the other in its heart. The thing dropped to the ground, legs thrashing, it gave one final earsplitting scream before dying. It's body dissolving, leaving only a black gore like stain on the floor.

Kylar shook as he stepped forward and retrieved the daggers. He carefully wiped them clean before replacing them in their concealed wrist sleeves.

"Is it dead?" The question came from Fee, as she and Pippa came back into the room. Both scared, both a little scuffed up, but alive.

He nodded curtly before turning to check on May and Alessa. The pair had taken a pretty hard knock when the door came off, but they'd live. May was already coming to, albeit groggily.

"Alright Kylar, talk." That was Lizzy. "Since you seem to actually know what's going on here. Where are we? And what was that thing?"




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Lizzy-

Everyone stared at him. "Well I am not exactly sure, but I call this world the 'fog world'." He explained.
Lizzy stared at him. "Very original."
As he explained, May noticed something. "w-What is that?" she whispered.
Everyone looked over. It was a man. "Its no face." Lizzy muttered.
The figure was facing towards them. it became completely silent when they heard him say it. He said. "wake up."



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Lizzy opened her eyes. She was back in her classroom. Everyone was in the classroom, except for Fee and Pippa. "what just happened?" May gasped.
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"What the Hell was that." Pippa asked as she entered the classroom. Fee gasped and covered Pippa's mouth. "Don't say that word. It's bad." Pippa rolled her eyes. "where's everyone else? Did we miss our bus because if we did we're going to have to walk back. We probably won't get there until dark."
"The Gullen wouldn't ever let that happen. We should probably head out though." May answered. She was trembling. They all exited the school building. The surroundings were dark and shadows moved across objects giving them a haunting sense of animation. "Isn't it only supposed to be, like, 3:30." Fee asked. Kylar looked at them. He obviously knew what was going on. "Spit it out." Pippa told him.
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Kylar-

Shivering he pulled his jacket on and glanced around the school yard. Twilight had since fallen over the town. Giving the world a creepy feeling. "Time moves differently between the worlds. Sometimes faster, sometimes slower. Honestly I don't know much more then you guys. I've only been there a few times."

Fee looked at Kylar strangely. "Why you?" She asked. "You've only been in Silent Hill a few weeks Kylar. The rest of us have been here a lot longer. Why did you find the Fog World so fast?"

"Because I can..." He snapped his mouth shut, Kylar had almost told them about the visions. Only his mother's lessons kept him from blurting out the truth. "Keep it secret. Keep it safe." But on the other hand his friends were already involved. They needed every possible weapon. Kylar sighed and continued. "Because I can see the future. It's a power I inherited from my mother's family. Our gift, and our curse."

Liz cocked her head and watched him. "Assuming we believe you. Why is seeing the future a curse?"

Kylar averted his gaze, and looked at the sky, the yard, the road. Anywhere but at his friends. "With each passing year the power grows stronger. Until I can no longer the visions from reality. And like my mother and grandmother before me. It will drive me insane."

He hitched his shoulder as if expecting a blow, and glanced at the others out of the corner of his eye. "Here it comes." Kylar thought. "This is the part where they call me a monster."




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Lizzy-

She walked over to him, and placed her hand on his shoulder. "You have a gift, though at first I thought it was amazing, but when you told me I realize now it is a curse."
Kylar looked up at her. He hadn't expected her to say that. Pippa smiled. "That's pretty cool. To see the future."
Fee giggled, and nodded. May wasn't paying attention. "W-what is that?"
Everyone looked over. It was Leo! Lizzy blushed. "L-Leo?"
He looked over; however something was wrong. He seemed distant. His eyes were pure white.





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*sure*

Leo stared into the air, not moving, just staring.

"Leo?" Lizzy asked now worried.

The kids started to back away from him.

"Look at his eyes" Whispered one of the girls now behind Lizzy.
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"What happened here?" Pippa asked, worried.
"Pippa..." Fee cried and clutched onto her sister's arm.
"Leo?" Lizzy called out. He kept walking nearer and nearer until he was only about a yard away. His eyes were pure white with pin-pricks of black. He seemed like a deranged sleep walker.
"Umm, Kylar? What's wrong with him?" Pippa asked. Kylar looked ahead of him and met Leo's crazed eyes. "He's possessed." Kylar answered after a pause, afraid of scaring Lizzy probably. Lizzy jolted, surprised at the case and then burst out in silent tears.
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*ok! Its time for everyone to return to the normal world!*

Lizzy-

She was standing right besides him. Lizzy moved her trembling hand towards his shoulder. Pippa shook her head. "No."
Lizzy ignored her. "L-Leo?"
He looked over at her. Lizzy screamed. Standing besides Leo was the man with "no face". Lizzy's scream echoed, and slowly faded away.

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"AHHHHHH!" Lizzy screamed.
She looked around. She was lying in her bed, back in her room at the orphanage. "W-what happened." Lizzy muttered.
She tried to comfort herself; however she found her body was still shaking and sweating. "Was that all just a dream?"
"LEO!" Lizzy felt concerned for his safety.
She left her room. "How did I get back here?"
Lizzy continued to walk down the hall. Leo was in room #227. She had to be quiet, since it was after lights out. Lizzy knocked on his door. "Leo?" she whispered.
The door opened. Leo poked his head out. "What." He calmly said.
Something was different about him. His kind presence was replaced with a somewhat disturbing one. "Leo are you ok? You don't look well." Lizzy asked.
He gave her a dirty look. "I am fine."
With that he slammed the door in her face. Lizzy stood there shocked. She couldn't help but shed tears. Unfortunatly the sound of the slamming door woke someone up. It was a worker, Mr. Smith. "Hey, what are you doing up so late?" He asked.
Lizzy didn't answer. He noticed her tears. "Come on, let's get you back to your dorm." His voice was kind.
Lizzy followed him back to her room. Closed the door behind her and fell onto her bed.


*OH! I have a great idea for why Leo is being possessed! Is it ok if he is the next child to be taken? Oh and RoryLegend Samuel Smith has been involved!*
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